[OOC] Sanctuary

[gamer5]

I fight back!

1. My CS and Sample are definetly readable now.
2. I showed my CS and Sample to Kaga (Kagamine) one of the people which were in charge of the Writter of the Month OFFICIAL CONTEST on the Old Guild which said that it showed a great level of grammar accuracy and dedication to making the post. I hold her oppinion twice more important then yours since she was one of the most influental people on the Old Guild and one of the rare people which I trust about grammar stuff.
3. I read at least one of your IC posts and glanced at a few other ones which you and the other made and I think my Sample and CS are at least incredibly close to that grammar level if not at the same.
4. My style of writting is based around long, multiple sentances linked together. Yes, this is a hard thing to do, but in the long run and with good linking it becomes a beautiful writting style which creates, at least by my opionion, a feeling like you are reading a novel not a post. If you want don't like this then do what you told me to do.
5. If you wish to drag this stuff feel free, but when it comes to argumenting my stand I was one of the best, if not the best, in my school. You have been warned.

Extra - If you need a show how good and dedicted my post can be take a look at my new RP. (LINK is here:http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/16966/posts/ooc)The first OOC post explaining the setting is clear, intresting and allows the roleplayers to be creative. I was also willing to spend a whole day working on it and the map to make the experience of roleplaying on such a RP nicer and smoother.

Gamer5, former GM and member of numerours Casual RPs, current GM of the Lands of Lemea and WOTM Casual-level winner.

[GreenGoat]

yeah... there goes the peace, and the bickering will start anew.

[Sage]

Not if I have something to say about it!

SAGE MODE ACTIVATE:

I think I'm allergic to Kool Aid. I tested and found that on nights that I drank Kool aid, I woke up with a nasty bout of congestion but on nights when I don't, my nasal cavity is fine.

[Sage]

Zeph don't tell anyone to go to hell just because you're already working there.

damn gotcho ass, R.I.P Zephyr

[The Red Zephyr]

You act like I don't know I work in hell. We make jokes all the time.

[The Red Zephyr]

AnriuSB said
Yo Zeph, about my most recent post, you ok with being the guy Samuel found? Or is something already planned for this?

Don't touch Weston.

[The Red Zephyr]

gamer5 said
I fight back!1. My CS and Sample are definetly readable now.2. I showed my CS and Sample to Kaga (Kagamine) one of the people which were in charge of the Writter of the Month OFFICIAL CONTEST on the Old Guild which said that it showed a great level of grammar accuracy and dedication to making the post. I hold her oppinion twice more important then yours since she was one of the most influental people on the Old Guild and one of the rare people which I trust about grammar stuff.3. I read at least one of your IC posts and glanced at a few other ones which you and the other made and I think my Sample and CS are at least incredibly close to that grammar level if not at the same.4. My style of writting is based around long, multiple sentances linked together. Yes, this is a hard thing to do, but in the long run and with good linking it becomes a beautiful writting style which creates, at least by my opionion, a feeling like you are reading a novel not a post. If you want don't like this then do what you told me to do.5. If you wish to drag this stuff feel free, but when it comes to argumenting my stand I was one of the best, if not the best, in my school. You have been warned.Extra - If you need a show how good and dedicted my post can be take a look at my new RP. (LINK is here:)The first OOC post explaining the setting is clear, intresting and allows the roleplayers to be creative. I was also willing to spend a whole day working on it and the map to make the experience of roleplaying on such a RP nicer and smoother. Gamer5, former GM and member of numerours Casual RPs, current GM of the Lands of Lemea and WOTM Casual-level winner.

Oh yes let the bickering resume GG.

I don't care what your credentials are or how well you actually write. Just don't bitch about what's REQUIRED. You could be a shitty writer with no experience, but I'd be all for you joining if you took the initiative to get better. I don't write perfectly, and even have a bit of an inferiority complex about it, but I strive to get better because I like RPing and want this to be the best roleplay possible.

So don't retort with your credentials when I could give 3 shits less. Your current performance is what matters, not what you've done in the past.

Zeph has spoken and will no longer speak of this.

[Fat Boy Kyle]

gamer5 said
I fight back!

1. My CS and Sample are definetly readable now.
2. I showed my CS and Sample to Kaga (Kagamine) one of the people which were in charge of the Writter of the Month OFFICIAL CONTEST on the Old Guild which said that it showed a great level of grammar accuracy and dedication to making the post. I hold her oppinion twice more important then yours since she was one of the most influental people on the Old Guild and one of the rare people which I trust about grammar stuff.
3. I read at least one of your IC posts and glanced at a few other ones which you and the other made and I think my Sample and CS are at least incredibly close to that grammar level if not at the same.
4. My style of writting is based around long, multiple sentances linked together. Yes, this is a hard thing to do, but in the long run and with good linking it becomes a beautiful writting style which creates, (at least by my opionion), a feeling like you are reading a novel not a post. If you want don't like this then do what you told me to do.
5. If you wish to drag this stuff feel free, but when it comes to argumenting my stand stance I was one of the best, if not the best, in my school. You have been warned.

Extra - If you need a show how good and dedicted my post can be take a look at my new RP. (LINK is here:http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/16966/posts/ooc)The first OOC post explaining the setting is clear, intresting and allows the roleplayers to be creative. I was also willing to spend a whole day working on it and the map to make the experience of roleplaying on such a RP nicer and smoother.

Gamer5, former GM and member of numerours Casual RPs, current GM of the Lands of Lemea and WOTM Casual-level winner.

I couldn't help myself, sorry. Looking at some of your posts I see that you can, on occasion, clearly write to a decent standard. However! When you consider this, the fact that your writing standard seems to be so inconsistent, and that you yourself said it takes much more effort to write to our standard (which to be honest isn't that high - simply just grammatically correct), it perhaps indicates an underlying problem. Perhaps you should get checked to see if you have dyslexia or a similar condition. Good luck with your life, you may need it.

[Sage]

LMAO YOU JUST SAID THAT

[Skai]

gamer5 said
4. My style of writting is based around long, multiple sentances linked together. Yes, this is a hard thing to do, but in the long run and with good linking it becomes a beautiful writting style which creates, at least by my opionion, a feeling like you are reading a novel not a post.

Long, multiple sentences linked together are considered run-ons. They dont give anyone room to breathe when they are saying them, and overall ruin posts in my opinion. I honestly have never seen a novel or well written paper include run-ons like this. I dont know how your English teachers let you get away with them.

I do understand that this is your writing style and how you must think, but this kind of writing is tedious to read. Its nothing small like using past tense all the time, its something big, as in usage and mechanics errors. If I were an English teacher Id be giving you at least a D for writing like this.

If you arent as interested and commited in this RP to fix your grammatical errors, then unfortunately Im going to ask you not to join. You obviously have more devotion towards the other RP's youre in. Its hard to juggle a lot of RPs at once. If this is the case, then I hope you have a good experience elsewhere in the Guild. Your character is interesting, but the grammar is just below our standards.

EDIT: I can go over your sample and help you correct these errors, if you'd like? Just as an example.

[AnriuSB]

The Red Zephyr said
Don't touch Weston.

:( ok..

[AnriuSB]

Hmm I would have to see the sample to form an opinion. As a fourth year English student, it may be appropriate to allow me to read it. O.o

Also, cats..

[AnriuSB]

Fat Boy Kyle said
I couldn't help myself, sorry. Looking at some of your posts I see that you can, on occasion, clearly write to a decent standard. However! When you consider this, the fact that your writing standard seems to be so inconsistent, and that you yourself said it takes much more effort to write to our standard (which to be honest isn't that high - simply just grammatically correct), it perhaps indicates an underlying problem. Perhaps you should get checked to see if you have dyslexia or a similar condition. Good luck with your life, you may need it.

You would have been better off to point out punctuation errors. The damn post is full of them..

Edit: Zachary is a 8/10 ont the bad ass scale. Beautiful post, very well done :).

[Skai]

AnriuSB said
Hmm I would have to see the sample to form an opinion. As a fourth year English student, it may be appropriate to allow me to read it. O.oAlso, cats..

You'll find the sample on the Character Sheet Here

[Sage]

Zachary is not Kyle's character Anriu wtf

[AnriuSB]

Sage said
Zachary is not Kyle's character Anriu wtf

I was talking about Zachary, cuz bbeast just posted silly xD

EDIT: I am trying to reduce my posting output by including edits into my posts instead of just doing a new post whenever an idea pops into my head. I forgot to that until my last post xD.

[AnriuSB]

I withhold my opinion of that writing sample.

[Skai]

I know it's only half of the collab, but finishing it has been tough thanks to koolaid and schedule issues. The second half will probably be posted Sunday or sometime around then. Enjoy the first half!

[AnriuSB]

yay!

[BBeast]

Wow, massive post. No wonder it has been taking you so long.
And thank you, Anriu.

gamer5 said I fight back!

You do realise that acceptance into any RP is based solely on the GM's discretion, right? Challenging the GM before you've even gotten in is a bad move.