Draconilian said
To me your writing quality is consistent.
Although it hasn't really shown yet, the writing quality you see in these posts is about 25% lower than my usual standards for casual-level writing. I'm agonizing over my own ineptitude, but I do understand that they aren't actually all that bad.
Draconilian said
I daresay I'm not doing the best job myself (forgive me it's so hard to get back into this stuff. I haven't GMed in months to be honest)
It's totally fine, many of us are coming from long periods of downtime, so it's reasonable to assume we're all slightly below our prime. As of yet, you haven't done anything particularly horrible like control a PC's character without their permission or limit player's options to the point where they are literally unable to creatively explore their environments.