Holmi said Mars's ingenuity, however, might prove quite useful.
Brand said Mars looked at Mikan once more, up and down and then exclaimed, "I can't be the only one who prefers the second option... I think the second option is perfect,"
Mars has the most to gain from the second option.
By seeing you all dance sexy.
By seeing you all dance sexy.
Hey Jorick, about the Crusaders eyeing weapons, isn't it a bit more possible that they're looking at their own weapons rather than the Blades'? Especially when Kasim's the only one who would have visible weapons?
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Alphakoka said
Hey Jorick, about the Crusaders eyeing weapons, isn't it a bit more possible that they're looking at their own weapons rather than the Blades'? Especially when Kasim's the only one who would have visible weapons?
No, because grammar and logic say otherwise.
"Looking around the camp, Zayn & Laenaia would quickly notice a few of the Crusaders eying them and looking at their weapons."
The "them" being eyed refers to Zayn and Laenaia, and since the "looking at their weapons" is said right afterward it is heavily implied that it's still referring to the Blades.
Logically speaking, why in the world would they be looking at their own presumably sheathed weapons? What purpose would be served by them looking down at their own belts to look at their weapons? That's just awkward and would make them have to take their eyes off of the newcomers that they seem suspicious of. If it was meant to say something about the Crusaders doing things in relation to their own weapons Brovo likely would have said something about them touching the weapons.
I think Brovo may have just goofed a bit, if neither Laenaia nor Zayn carry any weapons in the open.
There's also the fact that the Blade's traveled with the Templar Order. Who presumably are armed.
Haven't forgotten about this, I'm just wanting to fix my CS before posting.
Checklist: (More for my use but eh).
Fix Grammar
Use Official (Third Person) descriptions for traits
Add Gremlock's Notes to each trait.
Scrap the Elephant Gun. Potentially replace it with two Emergency Pistols (essentially loaded pistols without spare ammo to shoot them again.)
Put a permanent bayonet for the musket.
Checklist: (More for my use but eh).
Fix Grammar
Use Official (Third Person) descriptions for traits
Add Gremlock's Notes to each trait.
Scrap the Elephant Gun. Potentially replace it with two Emergency Pistols (essentially loaded pistols without spare ammo to shoot them again.)
Put a permanent bayonet for the musket.
Jorick said
I think Brovo may have just goofed a bit, if neither Laenaia nor Zayn carry any weapons in the open.
Guess so, because both of them chose knives as their weapon of choice and from the sheets it could be implied (or stated in Zayn's case) that they're hidden. For Laenaia it would be because even if she tied the knife to her belt/waist/back it would still be covered by her cloak.
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Back up char:
Biographical Section
Name: Duemis Xirmit
Age: 25 years human equivalent
Race: Dwarves
Sex: M
Appearance:
(Wears large sombrero)
Homeland: The Underdark
History: Your character’s past. You may want to delay doing this part until you get through traits.
Motivation: For Gold, Glory and Booze!
Traits & Equipment
General Traits
--Endurance Training: After training out in the field for hours and hours on ending, you have come to realize the value of being able to simply last longer than your opponent. This translates into taking a couple more hits before you will go down, and having a higher tolerance to pain... Though, getting hit still hurts, quite a bit actually, and you’re no god. (Basics of taking more damage and resisting pain-related negative effects.)
--Heavy Hitter: Where some would resort to flailing their arms about in an unsophisticated manner, you’ve decided that if you can hit something hard enough the first time that it stays down, that you can end fights before they can even really begin. Though, you’re still working on that “consistent” part, and not slowing down when you swing harder than usual. In the case of a ranged weapon, it means a larger calibre firearm or larger bow, translating to greater recoil and/or slower fire rate instead. (Basics of doing more damage with each swing.)
--Crushing Blow: You've learned that against enemies who are pained or slowed, you have even more time to swing and aim, hitting them with the maximum potential force possible. (Automatic critical hit against enemies that are stunned, dazed, unaware, or otherwise not expecting the attack. Small chance to crush armour in such a way as to mangle a limb or cause internal damage to a target through armour.)
--Sharp: You’ve started to notice how certain people stand, and how others try to keep certain parts of themselves out of harm’s way, or try to cover up certain not-so-good looking pieces of armour. Given more time, you could manifest this into a real talent for assassinating even the most armoured of targets. (Basics of weakness-finding and lie detecting.)
Unique Traits
--Mechanist Bloodline: Duemis has the blood of the enigmatic Mechanist running in his vein. He has dark moss green hair to prove it other than pissing off nearby ghosts and his knack of using technological object. (Bonus to technology related stuff, no penalty on their usage)
--This Is My Rifle, It Is My Life: Duemis is attached to his weapon and will always be seen with it everywhere, either training or tending it or simply carrying it. (Bonus to accuracy and reduces time required for actions related to the weapon, penalty when distanced from gun.)
--Budding Gunsmith: -insert fluff here- (Can maintain guns and firearms along with crafting the required gunpowders and bullets used as long as there is an abundance of supply to be used)
--Explosive Gunsmith: -insert another fluff here- (Can craft and use grenades)
Equipment List
-Dwarven-Hand Cannon: The Xirmit’s family heirloom, called the Dwarven-Hand due to it shooting Dwarven fist sized metal lump. Sturdy enough to be used as improvised club.
-Gunsmith tools: A set of gunsmithing tools for cleaning and maintaining guns.
-4 lead balls + gunpowder pouches: The ammunition for the Handcannon.
-1 grenade ball + special casing: One specially contained grenade to be launched through the handcannon, the initial launch would burn through the casing and light the fuse for the grenade instead of exploding it outright.
-3 hand grenades:
-Steel and flints
-Sombrero
Personal Section
Romance: Drunken shenanigans!
Does the Kouri Plushie exist?: It is.
Signature: Type Alphakoka to agree to the rules and regulations, and to agree that the GM may kill off your characters without your consent.
Name: Duemis Xirmit
Age: 25 years human equivalent
Race: Dwarves
Sex: M
Appearance:
(Wears large sombrero)
Homeland: The Underdark
History: Your character’s past. You may want to delay doing this part until you get through traits.
Motivation: For Gold, Glory and Booze!
General Traits
--Endurance Training: After training out in the field for hours and hours on ending, you have come to realize the value of being able to simply last longer than your opponent. This translates into taking a couple more hits before you will go down, and having a higher tolerance to pain... Though, getting hit still hurts, quite a bit actually, and you’re no god. (Basics of taking more damage and resisting pain-related negative effects.)
--Heavy Hitter: Where some would resort to flailing their arms about in an unsophisticated manner, you’ve decided that if you can hit something hard enough the first time that it stays down, that you can end fights before they can even really begin. Though, you’re still working on that “consistent” part, and not slowing down when you swing harder than usual. In the case of a ranged weapon, it means a larger calibre firearm or larger bow, translating to greater recoil and/or slower fire rate instead. (Basics of doing more damage with each swing.)
--Crushing Blow: You've learned that against enemies who are pained or slowed, you have even more time to swing and aim, hitting them with the maximum potential force possible. (Automatic critical hit against enemies that are stunned, dazed, unaware, or otherwise not expecting the attack. Small chance to crush armour in such a way as to mangle a limb or cause internal damage to a target through armour.)
--Sharp: You’ve started to notice how certain people stand, and how others try to keep certain parts of themselves out of harm’s way, or try to cover up certain not-so-good looking pieces of armour. Given more time, you could manifest this into a real talent for assassinating even the most armoured of targets. (Basics of weakness-finding and lie detecting.)
Unique Traits
--Mechanist Bloodline: Duemis has the blood of the enigmatic Mechanist running in his vein. He has dark moss green hair to prove it other than pissing off nearby ghosts and his knack of using technological object. (Bonus to technology related stuff, no penalty on their usage)
--This Is My Rifle, It Is My Life: Duemis is attached to his weapon and will always be seen with it everywhere, either training or tending it or simply carrying it. (Bonus to accuracy and reduces time required for actions related to the weapon, penalty when distanced from gun.)
--Budding Gunsmith: -insert fluff here- (Can maintain guns and firearms along with crafting the required gunpowders and bullets used as long as there is an abundance of supply to be used)
--Explosive Gunsmith: -insert another fluff here- (Can craft and use grenades)
Equipment List
-Dwarven-Hand Cannon: The Xirmit’s family heirloom, called the Dwarven-Hand due to it shooting Dwarven fist sized metal lump. Sturdy enough to be used as improvised club.
-Gunsmith tools: A set of gunsmithing tools for cleaning and maintaining guns.
-4 lead balls + gunpowder pouches: The ammunition for the Handcannon.
-1 grenade ball + special casing: One specially contained grenade to be launched through the handcannon, the initial launch would burn through the casing and light the fuse for the grenade instead of exploding it outright.
-3 hand grenades:
-Steel and flints
-Sombrero
Romance: Drunken shenanigans!
Does the Kouri Plushie exist?: It is.
Signature: Type Alphakoka to agree to the rules and regulations, and to agree that the GM may kill off your characters without your consent.
GM
@Everyone: Will be posting in the IC next weekend. (Saturday 14th-Sunday 15th.)
If you want to start a collaborative post, I recommend sending me a private message first so we can arrange a time we're both available for either TitanPad, Steam, or Skype.
EDIT
Will read the rest of the OOC later as well, had to get this post out quick before I run off to work.
If you want to start a collaborative post, I recommend sending me a private message first so we can arrange a time we're both available for either TitanPad, Steam, or Skype.
EDIT
Will read the rest of the OOC later as well, had to get this post out quick before I run off to work.
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Never underestimate the versatility of a magical mahogany chair.
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English/common sense: "Them" refers to the Blades. As in, all of them. At that point Zayn and lesbianana are still part of the general Blades grouping.
In decoding how to properly apply "them" ownership, use common sense: If Zayn and Lesbianana aren't armed, are any of their allies? Yes? And they're in a group with those allies? Hmm...
There. No more excuses: Go post now.
In decoding how to properly apply "them" ownership, use common sense: If Zayn and Lesbianana aren't armed, are any of their allies? Yes? And they're in a group with those allies? Hmm...
There. No more excuses: Go post now.
You love that smily don't you Brovo.
Brovo said
English/common sense: "Them" refers to the Blades. As in, all of them. At that point Zayn and lesbianana are still part of the general Blades grouping.In decoding how to properly apply "them" ownership, use common sense: If Zayn and Lesbianana aren't armed, are any of their allies? Yes? And they're in a group with those allies? Hmm... There. No more excuses: Go post now.
Looking for weapons then.
New excuse: RL happened.
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Isn't life wonderful guys?
Rayn Night said
Isn't life wonderful guys?
*Looks up from the skinned door-to-door salesman.*
Get your own salesman to skin.
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post on the way. I promise!
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