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Jster said
I await the day when you do not know how to respond because you have a frog at your throat.


Laugh all you want, Frog.
Just know that no one escapes death.
Not even you.
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And I smell like victory.THE KING OF SPAM!Yeah, it was kind of a touchy scene for me too. But I know Squee will always make the right choice, even if that means turning away from me.


I guess that makes me Jon Umber.
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I'm really enjoying all this conversation going on. Thanks to all the people who gave various compliments on the chapter, can't be fucked to quote them each and respond directly. Some of this other stuff though...

Goldmarble said
Now the question is: Do I support the Peacemakers because I believe in them, or do I support them purely for their cause of order? If I support them purely for order in the lands outside the city that grew around me, where does my true loyalty lie? Spam, or Rolpia?


Those questions shall be answered in time. Maaaaybe chapter 4, chapter 5 at the latest.

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I was so heartbroken when my character turned down Toellner's request. All of that history made it hard. Granted, that hasn't really made its way in the story and I dunno if it will. But still. It hurt. T.T

I do have a feeling, though, that Toellner is going to be Spam's Robb Stark. I don't like that feeling.


Seeing as how I have no idea what that history entails, all signs point to no, haha. My story just draws from various Spam history, it's not trying to be an accurate representation of how things are between various people, so lots of things won't ever get mentioned probably.

Also, how could Toellner be Robb Stark? He's fighting to put someone else on the throne, so to speak. He's more like the Davos Seaworth to Primez's Stannis Baratheon, or the Loras Tyrell to Primez's Renly Baratheon (although that's got some extra implications), or going further back the Ned Stark to Primez's Robert Baratheon.

If anyone could be compared to Robb Stark, mister "I'mma fight for the freedom of my people," it would be Hank. He was even roused to war by an unexpected death, courtesy of story Jorick biting the dust in the first scene.

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Hey now.You're the one who should've been able to fight four on one.I mean, RPG's the one that disappoints me the most.He lost to a fucking frog.


Not just any frog. He's clearly a badass, or did you not notice that he wrecked a guy with the same abilities as gave four others trouble?

Jster said
I await the day when you do not know how to respond because you have a frog at your throat.




PrimezTime said
I guess that makes me Jon Umber.


See my response to Squee above for a more accurate casting choice.
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If I ever get a role in this story, tell me, and I'll read it.
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PrimezTime said
I guess that makes me Jon Umber.


If anything, you would be Aegon and I would be Jon Connington.
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Jorick said Also, how could Toellner be Robb Stark? He's fighting to put someone else on the throne, so to speak. He's more like the Davos Seaworth to Primez's Stannis Baratheon, or the Loras Tyrell to Primez's Renly Baratheon (although that's got some extra implications), or going further back the Ned Stark to Primez's Robert Baratheon.If anyone could be compared to Robb Stark, mister "I'mma fight for the freedom of my people," it would be Hank. He was even roused to war by an unexpected death, courtesy of story Jorick biting the dust in the first scene. Not just any frog. He's clearly a badass, or did you not notice that he wrecked a guy with the same abilities as gave four others trouble?See my response to Squee above for a more accurate casting choice.


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If anything, you would be Aegon and I would be Jon Connington.


It feels weird being in a position of power. I'm almost always a follower, never a leader....

But I suppose now would be a good time to start.
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Jorick said
or the Loras Tyrell to Primez's Renly Baratheon (although that's got some extra implications),


They're the Goose and Maverick now.

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They're the Goose and Maverick now.


Fuck dervish, you hit me right in the feels.
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Fuck dervish, you hit me right in the feels.


Watching every motion
In my foolish lover's game
On this endless ocean
Finally lovers know no shame

Turning and returning
To some secret place inside
Watching in slow motion
As you turn around and say

Take my breath away
Take my breath away


Am I taking you to the Danger Zone yet?
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My dad's favorite movie growing up, so I was practically raised on it.
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I feel like Tom Cruise movies would all be so much better if they didn't feature Tom Cruise.
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I like the story you made thus far Jorick. I'm a bit unsure where you're going with my character though I hope you'll do good.

Other than that you got a good thing here man. Keep the good work going.

That is all. :)
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I feel like Tom Cruise movies would all be so much better if they didn't feature Tom Cruise.


But who would do endless running scenes in his place?
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Drakel said
I like the story you made thus far Jorick. I'm a bit unsure where you're going with my character though I hope you'll do good. Other than that you got a good thing here man. Keep the good work going.That is all. :)


Two options: your character is going to become a dragon, or Drakel is bound for an early grave.
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Two options: your character is going to become a dragon, or Drakel is bound for an early grave.


He should recon my base with two other guys.
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This is really dope. Good shit.
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Two options: your character is going to become a dragon, or Drakel is bound for an early grave.


I feel the latter more than the former though I do like the whole side quest thing that I'm doing now lol.

There there is also the possibility that after I turn into a dragon I betray the peace keepers or before I do they betray me.
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Chapter 4 is up. This chapter is brought to you by the power of friendship.

I almost cut this chapter into two separate parts, but then the site was down so I couldn't have posted the shorter version when it was done and I kept on writing. This is basically two chapters worth of events, and it shows. I fear the big deal of the first half might have gotten greatly overshadowed by the second half.
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Just in time for my lunch break!

Excellent.
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It's 24 pages long in OpenOffice, jesusdolphintittyfuckingchrist
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