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Name - Kichigai Jigoku No Inu
Age - Unknown
Gender - Male
Class - Zanpakuto Spirit.
Master - Not known yet

Powers - Kichigai is based around mad hounds of hell, relentlessly hunting impure souls to drag them kicking and screaming into the abyss. The more Kichigai bonds with its master, the more these qualities reflect in the powers it grants. While having reiatsu that is pretty much identical to its master, Kichigai's spiritual pressure holds a rather voracious undertone that can come off as intimidating or frightening towards others, as if being stared at by a snarling wolf.
Shikai: "Go mad...Kichigai Ryou Ken!" Dramatically enhances the wielders senses of smell and hearing as well as increasing speed and forward momentum. Once Kichigai has tasted the blood of a target, its wielder will become highly aware of their location and movements while remaining in shikai, including details like their exact distance and how fast their moving. This is done through sensing the fluctuations in reishi and the effect the target's reiatsu has on it. While in this form of release, manifestations of Kichigai will periodically appear in the form of hell hounds to assist their master with locating and attacking enemies. These hounds form on their own after Shikai is released but can also be willfully summoned by the wielder. Only 6 hounds can exist at once, but more reiryoku can be expended to surpass that limit. Finally the wielder can call upon hell chains after a short charging time to appear beneath a near by target and ensnare them. While easily avoided by fast moving targets, an enemy holding still would be easy prey, immobilized for several seconds after their capture.
Bankai: TBR
Details - The inner world of Kichigai's Zanpakuto is a dead forest dimly lit by a reddish crescent moon. Insanely long chains hang down from the sky connected to the ground in scattered places among the landscape. Here, Kichigai can take on a human form and create objects at will. He has a rather strange sense of humor as well as a bizarre way of communicating.
Staring Location - Inside of someones sword?
Evolution - When I have bankai unlocked, would I put it here or under powers?
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Now I just need a shinigami or vizard who doesn't have a zanpakuto. Any takers? :D
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Archmage MC I would still work up to balancing Light a bit better. How is ultimately up to you. I was just proposing an option to give you an idea of what direction you should be going.

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Die Kill Die Accepted. You would put developments like who the owner of your character is under Evolutions. You would also put maybe a note referring to how the Bankai was unlocked. But the Bankai information and abilities would go under powers. Also I recommend having another character who's a bit more independent so you don't have to wait for others in order to post.
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The biggest unanswered question is whether Kotohime founded this stuff or took over at a later point.

I will try and come up with a more measured character. Maybe an Arrancar.
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Going by her appearance (mostly the fact that she's not a wizzened old crone), I'd assume the latter. XD ...Although this is partially because having our Old Man Genocide analogue go missing at some point in the past seems like an interesting plot hook to me but um yeah.
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Die Kill Die said
Now I just need a shinigami or vizard who doesn't have a zanpakuto. Any takers? :D

Hi :D I'd like to make a character after your zanpaktuo if you wouldn't mind. Would you want me to pm the xD before I post one or am I free to make him however i like?
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Going by her appearance (mostly the fact that she's not a wizzened old crone), I'd assume the latter. XD ...Although this is partially because having our Old Man Genocide analogue go missing at some point in the past seems like an interesting plot hook to me but um yeah.


Unohana was around when the Gotei 13 were formed, and she didn't age a day, though. So age isn't a factor. Kyoraku and 13th Division Guy might have also been alive then, though unlikely to have been captains (though they were trained specifically by the old geezer). XD
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Raineh Daze By the way I would drop the part about "Kotohime is more or less guaranteed to win" as it spells trouble. Even with the context, the outcome of a battle is never certain, even for a head captain. Your character wont be hurt without this part.
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Rin I would have preferred to have a plot similar to that idea but it didn't seem to be favored so we went with what we had.
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I didn't mean specifically the old guy, I meant whoever it was that set up the Gotei 13 in his place in this AU. ^^;
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Hmm? That only refers to if it comes down to a direct contest of who has more reiatsu. With her zanpakutou abilities being focused around power draining, and having almost stupidly high levels of raw power anyway, there's not much reason for her to lose a contest of who-has-more-raw-power. It was basically meant to indicate that her raw power is less 'captain' and more 'Kenpachi' (possibly with some sort of scaling factor as it seems variable whether Genryusai was actually outright stronger or whether he just had the most broken sword. XD).

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I didn't mean specifically the old guy, I meant whoever it was that set up the Gotei 13 in his place in this AU. ^^;


Even if it was the case, she was probably alive when it happened. I can name three of the original Bleach captains that certainly were, or shortly thereafter. Also one Lieutenant. But yeah, we'll see.
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Hi :D I'd like to make a character after your zanpaktuo if you wouldn't mind. Would you want me to pm the xD before I post one or am I free to make him however i like?


:P Sup bro! You can make him how you want I'm cool with whatever lol. I was hoping for a girl but what can you do? XD I know i know shame on me.
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:P Sup bro! You can make him how you want I'm cool with whatever lol. I was hoping for a girl but what can you do? XD I know i know shame on me.

Aight cool but that could always be arranged xD I've played girl characters so I wouldn't mind ^.^ but no shame, no one will blame you for wanting that xD
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I still don't see the problem with her. Shes not hard to defeat, shes just hard to kill. Deadpool goes down when hes shot with a 50 cal in the head, but he only goes down for a half hour or so, same with her. And most combat lasts like 10 minutes tops :P.

I can tone her down though if shes a good guy, regen will still be her main thing, but power will go down. Mostly because there are a lot of comedic things you can do with a dismembered head or arm.
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That was a reply to SIN, Raineh. ^^; I got what you meant and it was kind of dumb of me to forget that. ^^;
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Raineh Daze I simply meant phrase it differently. Like maybe "When it comes down to a battle of sheer power, Kotohime has encountered no equal." or "has yet to be surpassed." Suggesting the outcome of a battle on the other hand, even involving a specific skill, can be seen as presumptuous. I'm just saying there are better ways to point out your characters strength.
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Wording improved.
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Raineh Daze Thank you.

Archmage MC The regeneration is fine keeping in mind what I said about vital organs. I was referring more to the level of physical strength. Having strength "more so than the average super strength hollow" is fine as long as it's balanced by a weakness. Another example is having a fragile Hierro or having kinetic combat start you at human speeds and then build up momentum from there.
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Aight cool but that could always be arranged xD I've played girl characters so I wouldn't mind ^.^ but no shame, no one will blame you for wanting that xD


It's cool bro make him how ya want. I got plenty Zanpakuto characters to go around XP
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Thank you. The regeneration is fine keeping in mind what I said about vital organs. I was referring more to the level of physical strength. Having strength "more so than the average super strength hollow" is fine as long as it's balanced by a weakness. Another example is having a fragile Hierro or having kinetic combat start you at human speeds and then build up momentum from there.


Thats her actual weakness. Shes not 'durable', shes melee only, and shes not fast initially. xD. So is she good or bad guy?
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