All right. Thanks so much for answering my questions! Really appreciate it girl! :D
Maki Casanova
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No problem. ^_^
I'm the GM for this RP, so naturally I'm here to answer any questions about the setting as well.
I'm the GM for this RP, so naturally I'm here to answer any questions about the setting as well.
Maki Casanova
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Name: Jeffrey Fajardo
Age: 21
Appearance: 6 feet and 5 inches tall
Personality:
Abilities: Jeffrey has an affinity with Force, which means that he is talented with “destruction”, “buffing”, and “teleportation” type spells. However, he does not know much outside of standard reinforcement of physical body strength and the simple force blast, as only recently did he discover his powers for himself.
Weapons/Equipment: His deck of cards that he constantly carries around. He casts his spells by throwing a card with its “flat side” facing towards him, held afloat by a bit of Force, writing the magic symbol, mumbling the spell name, and “punching” the card so that a magical blast comes out. As for bodily reinforcements, his card must be slapped onto the part of the body he wants to strengthen; otherwise, he still must write the symbol and say the words to make the spell have any decent effect on it.
Brief Backstory:
Age: 21
Appearance: 6 feet and 5 inches tall
Personality:
Jeffrey is generally a very gentle and kind man. He’s also a friendly guy who likes to get along with and get to know other people. In addition, he’s a guy who likes the feel of a touch – he might come off as “weird” to some people who are not used to his disregard for physical personal space. He tends to be very polite, rarely cussing, and tends to try and deliver his point as straight, honest and concise as possible. If he can’t find a word he’s looking for to accurately describe his words, he can get a little stuck in his word search and can blank out on occasion. Snapping his fingers together helps him think better when he’s a little lost, though.
As nice of a guy as he is, he doesn’t particularly care whole-heartedly for others that are outside his circle of friends or family. Sure, he might come off as friendly, but if something bad happens to someone who he considers a stranger or an acquaintance, he isn’t disturbed at all. Even though he may act really friendly, he is wary of people he hasn’t met before, and will take ample steps to observe their words and meanings, and their behaviors, and use these against them in case they turn out to be enemies; he is particularly brutal to anyone who crosses his path.
He has a soft spot for animals, but despises children; he does a very good job of hiding it, though. He’s not particularly ambitious, and only really wants to do enough to get by on comfortable living. However, Jeffrey does not like slackers, and usually kicks any coworker’s ass (figuratively) feeling cheeky enough to lie back and not contribute. If there’s one thing he has particular fun with being ambitious, it’s his bartender job where he gets to woo his male or female customers with his gentle charm and decent looks for extra tips. Not only that, he gets to do a little underground blackjack dealing with more regular customers during the closing hours of the store.
He thinks arrogant people are a funny thing: they are simply about to burst at the seams being full of themselves, ready to pop with a single touch of a sharp, candid tongue. He is not intimidated by them, or most anything except the few dark things that can reach the far back, shadowy crevices of his mind. On the other hand, he thinks people who belittle themselves sincerely are quite annoying, and should get a self-esteem check and develop one, or shut up.
His morals are a little on the gray side: his views on justice and righteousness flip flop one way or the other depending on what gathered information he has. He does not believe in the absoluteness of the law, but he also believes that there are certain acts of great, despicable corruption that should be punished harshly no matter what.
As nice of a guy as he is, he doesn’t particularly care whole-heartedly for others that are outside his circle of friends or family. Sure, he might come off as friendly, but if something bad happens to someone who he considers a stranger or an acquaintance, he isn’t disturbed at all. Even though he may act really friendly, he is wary of people he hasn’t met before, and will take ample steps to observe their words and meanings, and their behaviors, and use these against them in case they turn out to be enemies; he is particularly brutal to anyone who crosses his path.
He has a soft spot for animals, but despises children; he does a very good job of hiding it, though. He’s not particularly ambitious, and only really wants to do enough to get by on comfortable living. However, Jeffrey does not like slackers, and usually kicks any coworker’s ass (figuratively) feeling cheeky enough to lie back and not contribute. If there’s one thing he has particular fun with being ambitious, it’s his bartender job where he gets to woo his male or female customers with his gentle charm and decent looks for extra tips. Not only that, he gets to do a little underground blackjack dealing with more regular customers during the closing hours of the store.
He thinks arrogant people are a funny thing: they are simply about to burst at the seams being full of themselves, ready to pop with a single touch of a sharp, candid tongue. He is not intimidated by them, or most anything except the few dark things that can reach the far back, shadowy crevices of his mind. On the other hand, he thinks people who belittle themselves sincerely are quite annoying, and should get a self-esteem check and develop one, or shut up.
His morals are a little on the gray side: his views on justice and righteousness flip flop one way or the other depending on what gathered information he has. He does not believe in the absoluteness of the law, but he also believes that there are certain acts of great, despicable corruption that should be punished harshly no matter what.
Abilities: Jeffrey has an affinity with Force, which means that he is talented with “destruction”, “buffing”, and “teleportation” type spells. However, he does not know much outside of standard reinforcement of physical body strength and the simple force blast, as only recently did he discover his powers for himself.
Weapons/Equipment: His deck of cards that he constantly carries around. He casts his spells by throwing a card with its “flat side” facing towards him, held afloat by a bit of Force, writing the magic symbol, mumbling the spell name, and “punching” the card so that a magical blast comes out. As for bodily reinforcements, his card must be slapped onto the part of the body he wants to strengthen; otherwise, he still must write the symbol and say the words to make the spell have any decent effect on it.
Brief Backstory:
Jeffrey used to be a normal child with a normal family: his father a businessman, his mother a registered nurse, and him, just stupid and fun loving. His father was a rising business tycoon in the small city of Jaro, from the Philippines, but he fell in love with his Japanese mother while she was travelling the world as a young woman. They married soon after they met and fell in love, and he decided, despite the risks and his already established status, to start over with the love of his life in Japan. Happy, naïve, and ignorant of the events that would lead up to his less than admirable position in life, Jeffrey liked to play and goof around, and was very close to his parents, especially his father. They would spend time cooking their mom’s favorite dishes, play sports, read bed time stories, and talk about all different kinds of things. Sadly, shortly after his 10th birthday, his father mysteriously disappeared on a business trip to a small, unrenowned city called Fujiyoshida, in the Yamanashi prefecture. After contacting local authorities in the city, the police and detectives found it very odd that he would disappear in an area very near the forest of death, Aokigahahra. They suggested “suicide” as a possible lead, although Jeffrey’s mother vehemently insisted that her husband had no real reason to take his own life. She believed him to be a happy, hardworking, and fulfilled man: how could he leave his family like that? The authorities could not find an answer, worsened by the fact that despite doing a thorough search of the forest, they could not find his body. This drained them of all possible leads, as the man literally disappeared off the face of the earth, with nothing to prove that he set foot on the city at all except for his business briefcase, sent promptly back to the family.
This shattered Jeffrey so much, that he would not speak to anyone except his mother for two whole weeks. Even when he finally managed to finally have the emotional stability to talk to his friends, he lost something important that day that he could never get back. His mother, to make up for the income loss, had to work two jobs, compiling up to 12 hours a day of work. She had no time to take care of Jeffrey’s growing emotional needs, both as a boy who had just lost his precious father, and a developing, clueless teenager.
As a result, he got into a lot of trouble at both inside and outside of his school. He got into fights with other kids, bullied them, made fun of the teachers, and other general mischief during his early years of loss. Once he hit high school, however, things began to take a much steeper, fatal turn: he got into drugs, joined a prominent local gang, and was always in fights. . It was during this time that Jeffrey noticed that, whenever he was really excited to fight, and constantly chanted the phrase “Mabakud Abaga”, his punches felt just a little bit stronger, and he was more than ready to fight; this was his first usage of his magical abilities, even though he did not know it. It was one of the few words that his father taught him of his own native language. "It means 'strong arms'", Jeffrey's dad explained to him. "When your legs fail to carry the weight out of your body, whether that be out of exhaustion or the heaviness of your spirit, your arms keep the center of your being off the ground, refusing to give in. These words help to reinforce that idea: never give up."
His grades suffered terribly as a result of his delinquent activities, and as a result, he and his mother got into a lot of arguments, often ending with him walking out of the door, going to the red light district, and taking out his frustrations through sexual means.
Several events led him up to where he is now, a bartender at a thriving club, including dropping out of high school. Between then, he worked several odd jobs to net himself a place of shelter and livable conditions without having to rely on his mother. One day, while thinking about his father and his odd way of disappearance, he decided to pay her house a visit. They didn’t speak much for a time, but afterwards, he finally opened up to her and mentioned his thoughts. She sat there, carefully listening to each and every word and taking note of the feelings of hurt and missed affection that came with them. After he finished, she led Jeffrey into his father’s study, where the suitcase from his last business trip sat on top of his work table. He went over to it, opened it, and was surprised that there was scarcely anything in there but a navy blue book with a strange symbol on its front cover: a circle crossed with three vertical lines. He flipped it open, but it only contained stranger, unrecognizable symbols and a language he was not familiar with except for the most prominent phrase of his teenage years: “Mabakud Abaga”. He and his mother discussed, went and thought over what they could possibly do with this book; Jeffrey never mentioned his discovery, and suggested that he would keep it as a memento to his father. Unbeknownst to his mother, the book was of greater importance than she would ever believe, and her own very un-achademic son was going to study it.
Jeffrey had heard rumors of a special agency that dealt with... the less ordinary of criminal cases. He decided to drop in to visit before work, although he found it quite particular that, upon trying to locate the building of interest for the first time, people thought him crazy in the head and laughed at him. When he finally found Toshiko's agency, he got more than he expected: a pretty cute head detective, and a possible explanation for the disappearance of his father. With all these resources at his disposal and wanting to find his father, if he was still at all alive, he decided to join the agency as a part-time detective.
This shattered Jeffrey so much, that he would not speak to anyone except his mother for two whole weeks. Even when he finally managed to finally have the emotional stability to talk to his friends, he lost something important that day that he could never get back. His mother, to make up for the income loss, had to work two jobs, compiling up to 12 hours a day of work. She had no time to take care of Jeffrey’s growing emotional needs, both as a boy who had just lost his precious father, and a developing, clueless teenager.
As a result, he got into a lot of trouble at both inside and outside of his school. He got into fights with other kids, bullied them, made fun of the teachers, and other general mischief during his early years of loss. Once he hit high school, however, things began to take a much steeper, fatal turn: he got into drugs, joined a prominent local gang, and was always in fights. . It was during this time that Jeffrey noticed that, whenever he was really excited to fight, and constantly chanted the phrase “Mabakud Abaga”, his punches felt just a little bit stronger, and he was more than ready to fight; this was his first usage of his magical abilities, even though he did not know it. It was one of the few words that his father taught him of his own native language. "It means 'strong arms'", Jeffrey's dad explained to him. "When your legs fail to carry the weight out of your body, whether that be out of exhaustion or the heaviness of your spirit, your arms keep the center of your being off the ground, refusing to give in. These words help to reinforce that idea: never give up."
His grades suffered terribly as a result of his delinquent activities, and as a result, he and his mother got into a lot of arguments, often ending with him walking out of the door, going to the red light district, and taking out his frustrations through sexual means.
Several events led him up to where he is now, a bartender at a thriving club, including dropping out of high school. Between then, he worked several odd jobs to net himself a place of shelter and livable conditions without having to rely on his mother. One day, while thinking about his father and his odd way of disappearance, he decided to pay her house a visit. They didn’t speak much for a time, but afterwards, he finally opened up to her and mentioned his thoughts. She sat there, carefully listening to each and every word and taking note of the feelings of hurt and missed affection that came with them. After he finished, she led Jeffrey into his father’s study, where the suitcase from his last business trip sat on top of his work table. He went over to it, opened it, and was surprised that there was scarcely anything in there but a navy blue book with a strange symbol on its front cover: a circle crossed with three vertical lines. He flipped it open, but it only contained stranger, unrecognizable symbols and a language he was not familiar with except for the most prominent phrase of his teenage years: “Mabakud Abaga”. He and his mother discussed, went and thought over what they could possibly do with this book; Jeffrey never mentioned his discovery, and suggested that he would keep it as a memento to his father. Unbeknownst to his mother, the book was of greater importance than she would ever believe, and her own very un-achademic son was going to study it.
Jeffrey had heard rumors of a special agency that dealt with... the less ordinary of criminal cases. He decided to drop in to visit before work, although he found it quite particular that, upon trying to locate the building of interest for the first time, people thought him crazy in the head and laughed at him. When he finally found Toshiko's agency, he got more than he expected: a pretty cute head detective, and a possible explanation for the disappearance of his father. With all these resources at his disposal and wanting to find his father, if he was still at all alive, he decided to join the agency as a part-time detective.
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Name: Yukimura Chikane
Age: 512, looks 20-something.
Appearance: Both are the same person!
Personality: Cocky and fight-prone, with the backup that there are few fights that she'll lose in any meaningful and permanent way. She approaches all challenges with the same "I'll just have to try again harder" mentality upon failure, even if this won't result in any improvement. Chikane is far too stubborn for her own good.
Abilities: For one, Chikane is quite definitely a vampire, with all the attendant strengths and weaknesses that this entails. Her age also gives her a good deal of practical experience when it comes to the art of fighting, which makes up for still knowing basically nothing about 'proper' martial arts. About a hundred years ago, she started learning western magic during Japan's rapid industrialisation.
With her affinity as the alarmingly straightforward 'power', almost all of her spell knowledge is focused around the simple goal of making her already superhuman abilities more superhuman, regardless of risk or time taken. This makes her something of a one trick pony; her response to being unable to overcome an obstacle is simply to make herself stronger, faster, or both, and try again. If that fails... well, she's got one goal in mind.
The vampire has, at least, taken the chance to learn appearance-altering spells, though not to any major extent. When you're an unageing, undying bloodsucker, changing the length of your hair or the colour of your eyes via magic is a somewhat useful talent. The more potent, and far harder to learn, spell was one to reshape body fat.
Weapons/Equipment: Chikane owns a motorbike--and an alarmingly powerful one, at that. This spares her two things: having to share a car with Toshiko, and allowing her to go fast.
Brief Backstory: Hundreds of years ago, Chikane was nothing special--before an older vampire, in a fit of pique, turned her and looked after her for a few weeks before leaving her to her fate. Survival got easier with time, and even easier once she could start getting proper jobs. When Toshiko first started hiring, Chikane was the first to sign up--not because she had any detective skills, but because it offered a chance to track down the bastard that turned her in the first place.
Plus it gave her an opportunity to move in, since she'd been lacking in a proper home for some time due to ID issues.
Age: 512, looks 20-something.
Appearance: Both are the same person!
Personality: Cocky and fight-prone, with the backup that there are few fights that she'll lose in any meaningful and permanent way. She approaches all challenges with the same "I'll just have to try again harder" mentality upon failure, even if this won't result in any improvement. Chikane is far too stubborn for her own good.
Abilities: For one, Chikane is quite definitely a vampire, with all the attendant strengths and weaknesses that this entails. Her age also gives her a good deal of practical experience when it comes to the art of fighting, which makes up for still knowing basically nothing about 'proper' martial arts. About a hundred years ago, she started learning western magic during Japan's rapid industrialisation.
With her affinity as the alarmingly straightforward 'power', almost all of her spell knowledge is focused around the simple goal of making her already superhuman abilities more superhuman, regardless of risk or time taken. This makes her something of a one trick pony; her response to being unable to overcome an obstacle is simply to make herself stronger, faster, or both, and try again. If that fails... well, she's got one goal in mind.
The vampire has, at least, taken the chance to learn appearance-altering spells, though not to any major extent. When you're an unageing, undying bloodsucker, changing the length of your hair or the colour of your eyes via magic is a somewhat useful talent. The more potent, and far harder to learn, spell was one to reshape body fat.
Weapons/Equipment: Chikane owns a motorbike--and an alarmingly powerful one, at that. This spares her two things: having to share a car with Toshiko, and allowing her to go fast.
Brief Backstory: Hundreds of years ago, Chikane was nothing special--before an older vampire, in a fit of pique, turned her and looked after her for a few weeks before leaving her to her fate. Survival got easier with time, and even easier once she could start getting proper jobs. When Toshiko first started hiring, Chikane was the first to sign up--not because she had any detective skills, but because it offered a chance to track down the bastard that turned her in the first place.
Plus it gave her an opportunity to move in, since she'd been lacking in a proper home for some time due to ID issues.
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@Maki Casanova: Okay, this doesn't usually bother me but I'm going to bring it up now: When an RP takes place in a certain country specifically, it should probably have a majority of characters from that country. Especially when you don't really have an explanation for his completely non-Japanese name there. ^^;
Also, gambling is... kiiind of really illegal in Japan and needs some major loopholes to get around it. I would think anywhere doing it would not be advertising itself too widely.
Also, why did he start saying the spell? ... Also spells are something in some language at the very least. Japanese spells will be in Japanese, English spells in English... though sometimes they get translated so people can speak them even if they can't speak the original language well.
Also, how did he join the Detective Agency? You don't really mention it. ^^;
@Raineh Daze: Accepted.
Also, gambling is... kiiind of really illegal in Japan and needs some major loopholes to get around it. I would think anywhere doing it would not be advertising itself too widely.
Also, why did he start saying the spell? ... Also spells are something in some language at the very least. Japanese spells will be in Japanese, English spells in English... though sometimes they get translated so people can speak them even if they can't speak the original language well.
Also, how did he join the Detective Agency? You don't really mention it. ^^;
@Raineh Daze: Accepted.
Are you still accepting new people for this? I like the sound of it...
Name: Iwajima Jun
Age: nine years old.
Appearance: [] definitely the appearance of a reliable supernatural detective!
Personality: Jun can at times be incredibly focused, serious, and mature, which is only natural for someone who has worked hard enough to nearly master certain areas of Onmyoudo at such a young age. On the other hand the fact remains that he's still a child despite his high level of skill and his tendency towards hyperactivity is made worse by an overactive imagination fed by a combination of living in a magical world and ready access to media.
Abilities: Possess a high degree of skill with Onmyoudo, his affinity being the number 9. This allows him to use a variety of spells and techniques with his ofuda so long as they ultimately have something to do with the number nine either conceptually or concretely. He also has a surprising amount of martial arts expertise for someone his age, due to being raised to fight yokai.
Weapons/Equipment: Has his trusty detective's trenchcoat, though the only thing unique about it is that its pockets have ofuda on them that allow them nine times as much storage space. mainly used for carrying ofuda.
Brief Backstory:
Jun was a son of a powerful family of onmyouji who primarily made their living combating rogue yokai and other supernatural creatures. Toshiko knew his family from the time when she was in training and owed them a few favours for reasons she'd rather not mention. Because of his family's work, Jun was strictly trained in onmyoudo and related lore before he even started primary school, even to the extent of being given the Gazu Hyakki Yagyo in place of ordinary picture books. However his entire family died under mysterious circumstances. Under previous instructions his father had given him just in case anything ever happened that left him on his own, Jun sought out the Fu Sonzai no Gensō Detective Agency and has been living and occasionally working there part-time ever since, hoping to become a real detective some day and solve his family's case.
Age: nine years old.
Appearance: [] definitely the appearance of a reliable supernatural detective!
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Personality: Jun can at times be incredibly focused, serious, and mature, which is only natural for someone who has worked hard enough to nearly master certain areas of Onmyoudo at such a young age. On the other hand the fact remains that he's still a child despite his high level of skill and his tendency towards hyperactivity is made worse by an overactive imagination fed by a combination of living in a magical world and ready access to media.
Abilities: Possess a high degree of skill with Onmyoudo, his affinity being the number 9. This allows him to use a variety of spells and techniques with his ofuda so long as they ultimately have something to do with the number nine either conceptually or concretely. He also has a surprising amount of martial arts expertise for someone his age, due to being raised to fight yokai.
Weapons/Equipment: Has his trusty detective's trenchcoat, though the only thing unique about it is that its pockets have ofuda on them that allow them nine times as much storage space. mainly used for carrying ofuda.
Brief Backstory:
Jun was a son of a powerful family of onmyouji who primarily made their living combating rogue yokai and other supernatural creatures. Toshiko knew his family from the time when she was in training and owed them a few favours for reasons she'd rather not mention. Because of his family's work, Jun was strictly trained in onmyoudo and related lore before he even started primary school, even to the extent of being given the Gazu Hyakki Yagyo in place of ordinary picture books. However his entire family died under mysterious circumstances. Under previous instructions his father had given him just in case anything ever happened that left him on his own, Jun sought out the Fu Sonzai no Gensō Detective Agency and has been living and occasionally working there part-time ever since, hoping to become a real detective some day and solve his family's case.
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Name: Sokichi Tachibana
Age: 26
Appearance: Spooks aren't the only one who I keep this gun.
Personality: Sokichi is a jovial person who sometimes likes to act Juvenily. He Likes to help others with different task but may also use this chance to tease and joke around them. He has the aura of easy going attitude around him which has a habit to affect others. He takes his job seriously out in the field but still keeps his joking attitude around him, also considering others feelings on many things. Sokichis favorite fruit is orange and favorite color is red. He has a habit of giving nicknames to others.
Abilities: Sokichi is able to summon a familiar to help him fight against supernatural beings. Familiar takes form of of long trench coat fullhelmet wearing warrior with spear. Using it to either defend or attack. He's able to summon it out at will when ever he wants, he also nicknamed his Familiar as Benjiro.
Sokichi is athletic and very skillful at using his gun.
Weapons/Equipment: Sokichi carries around him under his jacket in holster a pistol and a pouch near his belt for specials bullets designed for against supernatural beings, and few normal bullets just to be sure. He also keeps a compact baton near his belt just in case bullet's run out.
Brief Backstory: Ever since Sokichi was a child He was always scared by supernatural beings seeing them when others did not. His grandparents who were more familiar with supernatural world than his parent, teached him to make familiar. Making him more braver to face them being able to live much more normaly with no need of being scared by the unnatural creatures he saw. After his graduation from highschool he moved in law enforce training, encountering several supernatural cases he could not do anything about. One day he was sent a letter about job offering at Detective agency specialized in supernatural activities. After giving the agency a try, he quit his former job and joined in The Fu Sonzai no Gensō detective agency to be able to solve the supernatural mysteries that formely frustrated him.
Age: 26
Appearance: Spooks aren't the only one who I keep this gun.
Personality: Sokichi is a jovial person who sometimes likes to act Juvenily. He Likes to help others with different task but may also use this chance to tease and joke around them. He has the aura of easy going attitude around him which has a habit to affect others. He takes his job seriously out in the field but still keeps his joking attitude around him, also considering others feelings on many things. Sokichis favorite fruit is orange and favorite color is red. He has a habit of giving nicknames to others.
Abilities: Sokichi is able to summon a familiar to help him fight against supernatural beings. Familiar takes form of of long trench coat fullhelmet wearing warrior with spear. Using it to either defend or attack. He's able to summon it out at will when ever he wants, he also nicknamed his Familiar as Benjiro.
Sokichi is athletic and very skillful at using his gun.
Weapons/Equipment: Sokichi carries around him under his jacket in holster a pistol and a pouch near his belt for specials bullets designed for against supernatural beings, and few normal bullets just to be sure. He also keeps a compact baton near his belt just in case bullet's run out.
Brief Backstory: Ever since Sokichi was a child He was always scared by supernatural beings seeing them when others did not. His grandparents who were more familiar with supernatural world than his parent, teached him to make familiar. Making him more braver to face them being able to live much more normaly with no need of being scared by the unnatural creatures he saw. After his graduation from highschool he moved in law enforce training, encountering several supernatural cases he could not do anything about. One day he was sent a letter about job offering at Detective agency specialized in supernatural activities. After giving the agency a try, he quit his former job and joined in The Fu Sonzai no Gensō detective agency to be able to solve the supernatural mysteries that formely frustrated him.
Maki Casanova
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Oh, I was planning to incorporate him joining into the agency in my first post! Did you still want me to simply say how he joined in the back story?
Well fuck, I didn't know that particular part about gambling. I'll change his job to something more legal.
And I'll provide a reason for him saying the spell, but do I really have to say every single thing about his story? The phrase IS in an actual language, btw.
Well fuck, I didn't know that particular part about gambling. I'll change his job to something more legal.
And I'll provide a reason for him saying the spell, but do I really have to say every single thing about his story? The phrase IS in an actual language, btw.
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Hmm. I'm not sure how well that it will work into the first post given what I have planned unless you're going to do it as him reflecting on it. ^^;
I'm sure there's a possible replacement.
No, but I do want to have a reason for characters who are not native to the country being there at least.
I'm sure there's a possible replacement.
No, but I do want to have a reason for characters who are not native to the country being there at least.
Maki Casanova
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ALL RIGHT ILL GET TO IT
other than that, any other problems with the character? :) Also, if you're curious, the language is called Hiligaynon.
other than that, any other problems with the character? :) Also, if you're curious, the language is called Hiligaynon.
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Oh, so it is real. ^^; I looked up the words and couldn't find anything.
Maki Casanova
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Yes, it's real enough that me and my family speak it. :) Mabakud means "strong", and abaga means "arm", so basically, strong arm.
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Woops sorry for the double post. The site farted for a moment.
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I'm sorry for the mistake there. I just couldn't find the words when I looked them up.
I try to make sure that real languages are used for spells and stuff but it's not always easy to check. ^^;
I try to make sure that real languages are used for spells and stuff but it's not always easy to check. ^^;
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THERE WE GO
The changes I made are bolded. Mostly in the backstory, one in the personality.
The changes I made are bolded. Mostly in the backstory, one in the personality.
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Alright, looks good now aside from, well, I still think you should probably find a replacement for the casino. Otherwise looks good so yeah.
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