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Aces, I should have something up in a few hours or tomorrow after my dads wedding.
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Name: Snowflake, Nature's Blizzard and Healer of Souls

Age: 3

Powers: Snowflake is able manipulate ice, as well able to heal herself and others despite how bad the injuries are. Snowflakes appear all over her body whenever she uses her powers as well her eyes glow. Ice can form where the snowflakes appear on her body, whenever she begins using her ice manipulation. Blue-using ice powers; green-healing.

History: Snowflake grew up on the mountains with her family, which consisted of herself, twin sister Storm and her parents. During her life as a pup, she wasn't able to continue having a young happy life with her small family. Human poachers happened upon their home, ready to drive out the wolves. Her father's life was taken while trying to protect his mate and pups from the humans, having being shot by one of them. Seeing that, her mother started running away with herself and Storm until they manage to surround them. Her mother lunged and bit at one of their legs, using this as a diversion for Snow and Storm to run away.

She was yelling to them, telling them to run and never look back. The humans had an idea to burn this she-wolf alive, meaning the last thing they heard were their mother's screams. Snowflake forced herself and Storm to start running, trying to get away from the rest of the humans. Though, she ended up separated from her twin as they were heading down the mountain.

Ever since then Snowflake has been on her own, while hoping that one day she'll find Storm once again. One night while asleep the cave she found, Snowflake woke up when the cave turned cold. The Goddess Aurora appeared before her, and first healed up her wounds. She has seen what happened to her, therefore she bestowed her power in Snowflake. Allowing the she-wolf to manipulate ice and heal as well; she did this to help Snowflake on her quest to find a pack to join and have their help finding her young twin sister.

Personality: Snowflake is a very kind wolf, not one to act out against another wolf unless they've done her wrong. She is gentle as well, willing to help out anyone and yes even her enemies. If anyone tries to harm her friends in anyway, her personality takes a 360 in which her fur bristles to make her appear wild as well having an attitude to match.

Rank you wish for: Hunter(after all you need wolves to catch prey for the pack)

Rank you have: --

Appearance: [Her eyes are fuchsia.]

Thought I'd give this a shot
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Very nice form, I have to ask what the extend of her healing abilities is. You say she can heal any injury, but that would mean deadly wounds as well.
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I've been a bit inactive on this thread, so let me make up for lost time;

1Charak2's CS:
Minarawr basically said it for that one; Your CS has many errors. Most are small, and I can deal with a few small errors, but there are a lot of errors. Not just spelling, but punctuation as well.

BlazingxLynx's CS:
Your CS in fine in my eyes. Everything checks out okay on my end.
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Minarawr said
Very nice form, I have to ask what the extend of her healing abilities is. You say she can heal any injury, but that would mean deadly wounds as well.


Yes that's right, but that would take some time to heal than minor injuries like cuts and such. Though, she cannot bring back the dead of course.

@datadogie Cool thanks ^-^
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Alrighty ^^
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Name: Stealth, Warrior of Zeus
Age: Unknown
Powers: Can turn completely invisible at will but can be tracked if you have a good nose or good eyes, can run at the fastest speed that can't be matched by anyone
History: Stealth was a proud and noble wolf who did everything he could to say the people he loved, Stealth lost his life when he fought off a rival wolf pack to save his only child and his pack. It was his sacrifice that allowed his pack to get away and live on, Zeus took pity on this loyal wolf and brought his back to life as a guardian of wolf kind. But Stealth had no memories of his past life, only his name. Stealth is lone wolf who does not join other packs, he like to observe the woods from his home on Wolfen Peak.
Personality: Before: he was a noble and sometimes rather load wolf who liked to boost about his skills and loved his child with all his heart. He defended his pack to the very end and would not stop until all his pack were safe. Now: He is a very kind and gentle soul, he always helps those in need but will punish those who would cause harm to others. He enjoys running and likes to climb and use his invisibility to hunt.
Rank you wish for: Alpha male (On his own but would love to form a pack if he could)
Rank you have: Alpha male
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Name: Nightblaze, Warrior of darkness
Age: 6
Powers: Has control over Darkness, can summon the spirts of the underworld to fight for him.
History: Nightblaze or Night as he likes to be called is a descendent of Stealth only child, He know of his ancestor great sacrifice to keep the pack alive and he wished that the rest of the pack had remember it though the pack fell apart and he is now a lone wolf who wants to find a new pack. He was tricked into becoming connected to Hades lord of the underworld who was trying to find a wolf that could bring down Zeus guardian, Night was tricked into working for Hades because of something he wanted deep down.
Personality: A very calm and relaxed wolf who takes things one step at a time and never tries to overdo something he know won't end well, he can be a little blunt sometimes and does not always know when someone is joking or not. He holds his Ancestor Stealth in very high regards and wants to be just like him. He get on really well with everyone despite being connected to Hades.
Rank you wish for: Warrior
Rank you have: Lone wolf
Appearance:
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Can't see the first pic ^^"
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Really?
How about now?
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There you go

http://i.imgur.com/bOuWmZ7.jpg
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Oh good.
Stryder, what would you say about my profiles?
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I like them but, ultimate invisibilty? Maybe just make him extremely difficult to track but still findable?
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Fair enough. I'll edit it tomorrow when I can
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Did the edit. He can now be found if you have a good nose or good sight
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Oh I had a small edit too Mike,if you don't mind. I think running at the speed of thunder and lightning is a bit op, cause then he'd be faster than the speed of light
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I agree with Minarawr, Mike. It's quite OP. Can you please make that edit?
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Hmm I thought that would match well with him being Zeus wolf
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Yeah speed fits, but faster than the speed of light is a bit too much.
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Well I think I've alter so that he is the fastest wolf alive and no one can top him.
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*clears throat*
Katan He can generate, manipulate, and absorb electricity, allowing him to perform feats of lightning speed

Cassius Granted with the abilities of Ares he has the physiology of the god, his body and mind far greater than before, allowing him to perform great feats of strength, speed, and agility.
You can't be that fast, someone is just as fast, you being faster wouldn't be fair...just make him fast

While I admit, my character may be strong, someone could be stronger or just as strong

I'm being lenient on the whole alpha thing, I would take that and run with it, with the change I included
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