58 Guests viewing this page
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by whizzball1
Raw
Avatar of whizzball1

whizzball1 Spirit

Member Seen 4 yrs ago

Tomorrow I'm learning about determinants. This is going to be fun.
That was probably both sarcasm and truth. But in all seriousness, here's hoping I can get a hang of the first lesson on it in a day like all the others so far.
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Etcetera
Raw
Avatar of Etcetera

Etcetera David Dynamo

Member Seen 25 days ago

Tomorrow I'm learning about determinants. This is going to be fun.
That was probably both sarcasm and truth. But in all seriousness, here's hoping I can get a hang of the first lesson on it in a day like all the others so far.


Good luck.
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Heroic
Raw
Avatar of Heroic

Heroic Zoey

Member Seen 1 mo ago

<Snipped quote by whizzball1>

I said numbers. I would calculate the numbers in binary; I will eventually memorize the hex codes for letters, however.

<Snipped quote by Heroic>

Humanity looks up and thinks "How limitless we are"
But then one thinks and realizes, they'll never reach a star.
No matter how conceivable, or industrial the goal
Humans will dream, and fight and kill, 'till they reach of old.
Woe to thee, humanity, and the stories you have told.


Boom. If you wrote that yourself, then Epic Dual-Poetry Combo Move ftw.
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Etcetera
Raw
Avatar of Etcetera

Etcetera David Dynamo

Member Seen 25 days ago

<Snipped quote by Etcetera>

Boom. If you wrote that yourself, then Epic Dual-Poetry Combo Move ftw.


Haha, I did. I enjoy poetry.
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by whizzball1
Raw
Avatar of whizzball1

whizzball1 Spirit

Member Seen 4 yrs ago

<Snipped quote by Etcetera>

Boom. If you wrote that yourself, then Epic Dual-Poetry Combo Move ftw.


David can't think of poetry that fast. Putting words to rhythm takes time. Rhymes? That's easy. Poetry? Not so easy. Take it from a person who's written two sonnets and three songs so far. It's a pain.
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by whizzball1
Raw
Avatar of whizzball1

whizzball1 Spirit

Member Seen 4 yrs ago

<Snipped quote by Heroic>

Haha, I did. I enjoy poetry.


ohlelokaythen
Although I'd guess you already thought of it before?
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Heroic
Raw
Avatar of Heroic

Heroic Zoey

Member Seen 1 mo ago

<Snipped quote by Heroic>

Haha, I did. I enjoy poetry.


I wrote that in 10 minutes earlier today, like at 8:30.

<Snipped quote by Heroic>

David can't think of poetry that fast. Putting words to rhythm takes time. Rhymes? That's easy. Poetry? Not so easy. Take it from a person who's written two sonnets and three songs so far. It's a pain.


It comes easily depending on the topic.
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Etcetera
Raw
Avatar of Etcetera

Etcetera David Dynamo

Member Seen 25 days ago

<Snipped quote by Etcetera>

ohlelokaythen
Although I'd guess you already thought of it before?


No. I would have written it faster, but I'm also taking a test.
@Heroic
It's good. Nice job.
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by whizzball1
Raw
Avatar of whizzball1

whizzball1 Spirit

Member Seen 4 yrs ago

<Snipped quote by Etcetera>

I wrote that in 10 minutes earlier today, like at 8:30.

<Snipped quote by whizzball1>

It comes easily depending on the topic.


That's a pseudo-poem. It had rhymes but not rhythm. The rhythm is the challenge.
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by whizzball1
Raw
Avatar of whizzball1

whizzball1 Spirit

Member Seen 4 yrs ago

<Snipped quote by whizzball1>

No. I would have written it faster, but I'm also taking a test.
@Heroic
It's good. Nice job.


How did you even write that poem in 8 minutes? With perfect rhythm? I feel so inadequate now :[
Well, okay, only a little bit inadequate.
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Etcetera
Raw
Avatar of Etcetera

Etcetera David Dynamo

Member Seen 25 days ago

<Snipped quote by Heroic>

That's a pseudo-poem. It had rhymes but not rhythm. The rhythm is the challenge.


Poetry doesn't have to have consistent rhythm.

<Snipped quote by Etcetera>

How did you even write that poem in 8 minutes? With perfect rhythm? I feel so inadequate now :[
Well, okay, only a little bit inadequate.


I spent about three of those deciding whether or not it would be more meaningful to keep or remove the "and" in the last line.

You really underestimate my skills/abilities/intellect.
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by whizzball1
Raw
Avatar of whizzball1

whizzball1 Spirit

Member Seen 4 yrs ago

<Snipped quote by whizzball1>

Poetry doesn't have to have consistent rhythm.

<Snipped quote by whizzball1>

I spent about three of those deciding whether or not it would be more meaningful to keep or remove the "and" in the last line.

You really underestimate my skills/abilities/intellect.


I think at that point it's in the middle of poem and prose.

I didn't think it was possible to write such a high-quality poem in 5 minutes. Sue me. Though, on second thought, you need only write a line a minute. I suppose it wouldn't be too much of a challenge to get down rhythm and rhymes once a minute. Darn it, now I want to see how long it takes me to write a five line poem. Wish me luck.
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Etcetera
Raw
Avatar of Etcetera

Etcetera David Dynamo

Member Seen 25 days ago

<Snipped quote by Etcetera>

I think at that point it's in the middle of poem and prose.

I didn't think it was possible to write such a high-quality poem in 5 minutes. Sue me. Though, on second thought, you need only write a line a minute. I suppose it wouldn't be too much of a challenge to get down rhythm and rhymes once a minute. Darn it, now I want to see how long it takes me to write a five line poem. Wish me luck.


Poetry isn't a technical art; you can write it quickly if what you're saying means something. It doesn't have to have perfect meaning, because it's the message that makes true poetry, not the rhymes or rhythms you use. Doing it just to speed-write will result in a shallow poem with no depth or complexity.
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by whizzball1
Raw
Avatar of whizzball1

whizzball1 Spirit

Member Seen 4 yrs ago

<Snipped quote by whizzball1>

Poetry isn't a technical art; you can write it quickly if what you're saying means something. It doesn't have to have perfect meaning, because it's the message that makes true poetry, not the rhymes or rhythms you use. Doing it just to speed-write will result in a shallow poem with no depth or complexity.


This is what meaningful writing I could get out in 5 minutes.

Lightning crackles through the air and sings
A song too slow for anyone to hear
But soon enough within our ears it rings
The lightning dulled to nothing but a blear.

I considered trying to make another two lines, but couldn't think of anything for after "The facet of the storm that is its king." Alas.
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Heroic
Raw
Avatar of Heroic

Heroic Zoey

Member Seen 1 mo ago

<Snipped quote by Heroic>

That's a pseudo-poem. It had rhymes but not rhythm. The rhythm is the challenge.


There was certainly rhythm. I had an AP English teacher to attest to that, as well as the fact that I used Edgar Allen Poe's "The Raven" as a guide to the format of it.

<Snipped quote by whizzball1>

No. I would have written it faster, but I'm also taking a test.
@Heroic
It's good. Nice job.


Thanks.
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Heroic
Raw
Avatar of Heroic

Heroic Zoey

Member Seen 1 mo ago

<Snipped quote by whizzball1>

There was certainly rhythm. I had an AP English teacher to attest to that, as well as the fact that I used Edgar Allen Poe's "The Raven" as a guide to the format of it.

<Snipped quote by Etcetera>

Thanks.


To be specific, it was written in Trochaic Octameter.
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by whizzball1
Raw
Avatar of whizzball1

whizzball1 Spirit

Member Seen 4 yrs ago

<Snipped quote by whizzball1>

There was certainly rhythm. I had an AP English teacher to attest to that, as well as the fact that I used Edgar Allen Poe's "The Raven" as a guide to the format of it.

<Snipped quote by Etcetera>

Thanks.


Oh. Huh. I need to read more poetry.

And then suddenly, out of the blue, I come up with the line I wanted. "Never is it any less than mere." Bleh. Ooh, I wrote a poem too then. Triple-poem combo!
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by whizzball1
Raw
Avatar of whizzball1

whizzball1 Spirit

Member Seen 4 yrs ago

<Snipped quote by Heroic>

To be specific, it was written in Trochaic Octameter.


>trying to say it in trochaic octameter
>finds a sudden nonameter and decameter
I don't know how to say iiiiiit
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Heroic
Raw
Avatar of Heroic

Heroic Zoey

Member Seen 1 mo ago

<Snipped quote by Heroic>

>trying to say it in trochaic octameter
>finds a sudden nonameter and decameter
I don't know how to say iiiiiit


Wat
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Etcetera
Raw
Avatar of Etcetera

Etcetera David Dynamo

Member Seen 25 days ago

<Snipped quote by Etcetera>

This is what meaningful writing I could get out in 5 minutes.

Lightning crackles through the air and sings
A song too slow for anyone to hear
But soon enough within our ears it rings
The lightning dulled to nothing but a blear.

I considered trying to make another two lines, but couldn't think of anything for after "The facet of the storm that is its king." Alas.


Your rhythm is off and it's not meaningful because you wrote it to write it.

<Snipped quote by whizzball1>

There was certainly rhythm. I had an AP English teacher to attest to that, as well as the fact that I used Edgar Allen Poe's "The Raven" as a guide to the format of it.

<Snipped quote by Etcetera>

Thanks.


AP English is a paradox in itself.
↑ Top
58 Guests viewing this page
© 2007-2024
BBCode Cheatsheet