[OOC] Myriad Reality

[whizzball1]

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Your rhythm is off and it's not meaningful because you wrote it to write it.

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AP English is a paradox in itself.

@Etcetera

But I didn't write it to write it. An idea actually did pop up in my head, which is why I decided to put a stopwatch on myself to see how long it'd take me to make that idea into a poem. Also, it's iambic pentameter all the way through, except for the omission of one syllable at the beginning of the first and last (Never is it any less than mere) line.

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Wat

@Heroic

There's more than sixteen syllables in some lines of the poem, so I can't figure out how to say it.

[Etcetera]

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But I didn't write it to write it. An idea actually did pop up in my head, which is why I decided to put a stopwatch on myself to see how long it'd take me to make that idea into a poem. Also, it's iambic pentameter all the way through, except for the omission of one syllable at the beginning of the first and last (Never is it any less than mere) line.

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There's more than sixteen syllables in some lines of the poem, so I can't figure out how to say it.

@whizzball1

You're looking at it all wrong. Poetry can't be analyzed; it's an art.

[Heroic]

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Your rhythm is off and it's not meaningful because you wrote it to write it.

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AP English is a paradox in itself.

@Etcetera

I agree.

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But I didn't write it to write it. An idea actually did pop up in my head, which is why I decided to put a stopwatch on myself to see how long it'd take me to make that idea into a poem. Also, it's iambic pentameter all the way through, except for the omission of one syllable at the beginning of the first and last (Never is it any less than mere) line.

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There's more than sixteen syllables in some lines of the poem, so I can't figure out how to say it.

@whizzball1

It's written, and I'm not sure what you call this, but the line pattern is ABCBBB. The A and C have sixteen syllables and the Bs merely need to rhyme.

[Vampyr]

I like how everyone here is showing their poetic abilities off and I'm the one related to one of the most famous poets and can only write song lyrics:(

[whizzball1]

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You're looking at it all wrong. Poetry can't be analyzed; it's an art.

@Etcetera

When did I analyse what? o3o

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I agree.

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It's written, and I'm not sure what you call this, but the line pattern is ABCBBB. The A and C have sixteen syllables and the Bs merely need to rhyme.

@Heroic

Huh. Let me try to say it again.
Post-Saying Edit: Yup, it sounds much better that way. I'm dumb.

[whizzball1]

I like how everyone here is showing their poetic abilities off and I'm the one related to one of the most famous poets and can only write song lyrics:(

@Vampyr

Song lyrics are poetry too. Well, more like the skeleton of poetry, as in rhythm and rhyme. Not the flair of not-as-rigidly-rhythmic poetry.

[Etcetera]

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I agree.

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It's written, and I'm not sure what you call this, but the line pattern is ABCBBB. The A and C have sixteen syllables and the Bs merely need to rhyme.

@Heroic

Whew, good.

I like how everyone here is showing their poetic abilities off and I'm the one related to one of the most famous poets and can only write song lyrics:(

@Vampyr

Poe =D

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When did I analyse what? o3o

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Huh. Let me try to say it again.
Post-Saying Edit: Yup, it sounds much better that way. I'm dumb.

@whizzball1

Read what you wrote. It's analysis.

[Heroic]

I like how everyone here is showing their poetic abilities off and I'm the one related to one of the most famous poets and can only write song lyrics:(

@Vampyr

What poet? And we all have our own skills. Frankly, I chalk it ip to me getting lucky and writing a decent one for once, as I am a barely capable writer.

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When did I analyse what? o3o

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Huh. Let me try to say it again.
Post-Saying Edit: Yup, it sounds much better that way. I'm dumb.

@whizzball1

"Post-Saying"
I laughed

[whizzball1]

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Whew, good.

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Poe =D

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Read what you wrote. It's analysis.

@Etcetera

You told me there was no rhythm. I told you there was, and what it was. Either way, when I write poetry iambic pentameter comes naturally. My two previous sonnets have been in that.

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What poet? And we all have our own skills. Frankly, I chalk it ip to me getting lucky and writing a decent one for once, as I am a barely capable writer.

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"Post-Saying"
I laughed

@Heroic

lelelelel

[Heroic]

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Whew, good.

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Poe =D

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Read what you wrote. It's analysis.

@Etcetera

Were you gonna kill me if I disagreed?

[Etcetera]

@Heroic
Um. You referenced the profile picture in action symbols?

[Etcetera]

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Were you gonna kill me if I disagreed?

@Heroic

Probably not.

[Vampyr]

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Whew, good.

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Poe =D

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Read what you wrote. It's analysis.

@Etcetera

Got it.

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What poet? And we all have our own skills. Frankly, I chalk it ip to me getting lucky and writing a decent one for once, as I am a barely capable writer.

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"Post-Saying"
I laughed

@Heroic

The late great Edgar Allan Poe.

[Vampyr]

Poor shinjiXD

[Etcetera]

Poor shinjiXD

@Vampyr

He's dead now.

[Vampyr]

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He's dead now.

@Etcetera

Nope. He ain't gonna dah that easily.
But which creature did she throw the knife at?

[Heroic]

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Probably not.

@Etcetera

I would've.

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Were you gonna kill me if I disagreed?

@Heroic

Describe to me that gun in 20 seconds, which are the intervals I need to post in sometimes for not-getting caught purposes. That's why. I also type slowly.

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Got it.

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The late great Edgar Allan Poe.

@Vampyr

That's cool.

[Vampyr]

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I would've.

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Describe to me that gun in 20 seconds, which are the intervals I need to post in sometimes for not-getting caught purposes. That's why. I also type slowly.

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That's cool.

@Heroic

Till you realize he was a bit of a freak, then its like, whatevs.

[Heroic]

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Till you realize he was a bit of a freak, then its like, whatevs.

@Vampyr

Can you blame him? The guy probably had one of the worst lives I have ever read about a real person having.

[Vampyr]

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Can you blame him? The guy probably had one of the worst lives I have ever read about a real person having.

@Heroic

He married his cousin.