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It's gone from life to an rp. That started it. Add to that a loss of people and a shift in priorities and you have this.


Life to RP?
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Probably because we are getting busier. It's our senior year, we have a bit of a rush of things right now. After we graduate, I am pretty sure we will be back to how we were. We still have our drive and love.


But are we any more busy than we were last year or the year before.

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It's gone from life to an rp. That started it. Add to that a loss of people and a shift in priorities and you have this.


I especially agree with the former. I don't like how it's become a story.
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But are we any more busy than we were last year or the year before.

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I especially agree with the former. I don't like how it's become a story.


Life is a story. The only thing that can change is your perspective on it. Is it just another story, or is it reality?
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Life is a story. The only thing that can change is your perspective on it. Is it just another story, or is it reality?


That's a bit deeper than what I'm going for.
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@Etcetera

This is awesome. There are a couple of areas that seemed a bit non-flowy (mostly around the top) so I'll fix those later and tell you each change.

Also, for the hook line, how about "Boundless Ideas, Infinite Worlds"?
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@Etcetera

This is awesome. There are a couple of areas that seemed a bit non-flowy (mostly around the top) so I'll fix those later and tell you each change.

Also, for the hook line, how about "Boundless Ideas, Infinite Worlds"?


Sure, I like it.

Your keyboard setup also broke the "Center" tag.
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Sure, I like it.

Your keyboard setup also broke the "Center" tag.


Did it? Both centre and center work fine.
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That's a bit deeper than what I'm going for.


It's true though. The only thing that changes the way it is to you is you.
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Did it? Both centre and center work fine.


Unless all of those subtitles are supposed to be left justified.

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It's true though. The only thing that changes the way it is to you is you.


I just can't say I agree with that. The differences are too large.
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But are we any more busy than we were last year or the year before.

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I especially agree with the former. I don't like how it's become a story.


I definitely am. I work the week and weekend. Last year, I only worked the weekends, and the year before I didn't work at all. I am more involved in family as well. Especially when my older brother is is being sent out for basic training and such. He is joining the army.
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Unless all of those subtitles are supposed to be left justified.

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I just can't say I agree with that. The differences are too large.


All the subtitles in the rules/guidelines/etc. were, yes.
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Alright...


And so we've got these sphere floating in the air, and running between them are long silver fibres. And there's tons of these, all in a big messy web of strands running from sphere to sphere. Got that?
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I definitely am. I work the week and weekend. Last year, I only worked the weekends, and the year before I didn't work at all. I am more involved in family as well. Especially when my older brother is is being sent out for basic training and such. He is joining the army.


I understand what you're saying. I don't have much to say regarding everyone's perception of their time other than I'd love to see MR restored to its former glory.

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All the subtitles in the rules/guidelines/etc. were, yes.


Very well.
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Soo...
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And so we've got these sphere floating in the air, and running between them are long silver fibres. And there's tons of these, all in a big messy web of strands running from sphere to sphere. Got that?


I see it like this...



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I understand what you're saying. I don't have much to say regarding everyone's perception of their time other than I'd love to see MR restored to its former glory.

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Very well.


We do too. But right now, it's a bit difficult.
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Soo...


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I see it like this...

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We do too. But right now, it's a bit difficult.


I suppose.
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?

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I suppose.


It's part of why I held off so much on starting my stuff. I want serious commitment for the impact to be there, but everyone is busy and Tox is gone.
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?

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I suppose.


I'm sorry. But we are trying.
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I see it like this...



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We do too. But right now, it's a bit difficult.


That's fine, although just imagine that there are more strands coming from those bulby things, not just one on each end.
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That's fine, although just imagine that there are more strands coming from those bulby things, not just one on each end.


Ah. That is much easier.
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