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Hello! :) This seems like an awesome group of peeps and characters- I might have something for you, GM, in a few days. Not a character, of course, but an offer in terms of lore and depth. Farewell, we shall speak later!


Mysterious, I like it.

@Sep/Ellri, I intended for Amaryth to have started as a fortress with a moderate distance from the lake, and a small lakeside village. The city grew around the fortress, and the lakeside village expanded to meet the growing city until eventually they became one. Criticism is welcome.

I'm in the public library, again, and I'm trying to register for college so I might not respond to this until later.
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That makes sense. We would think that inner city encompasses fortress plus lakeside town. Outer city would then surround that on all non-wet sides. That fit your idea, sparks?
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My plan was for the 'lakeside town' to be the edge of the Outer City. The inner city is more for the wealthy, the military, and the nobility. So being parallel to the fishers, tanners, and other plebeians isn't ideal. I wanted the inner city to actually be in the center of the city as a whole, surrounded by 360 degrees of outer city.
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Ahh... That sounds fairly plausible too. And it certainly makes defense of the inner city fairly easy to plan. How many gates to the inner city? How tall walls? Any overhanging battlements, moat or anything like that?

By the way, roughly how large is the population of the city? How large portion in Fortress/inner city/outer city?
Are there any secret tunnels leading from the fortress or inner city outside (either all the way outside or to the outer city)?

We presume the inner city walls are well-maintained? Might at least some part of the fortress hail back to the days of the old kingdom? Its not unusual for fortresses to be built in the same places many times, especially if there are (for example) strong foundations remaining.

What sort of terrain does the city lie in? is it all flat, or are there hills or even cliffs?
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Would this be a good image for Amaryth?
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Ellri said
Ahh... That sounds fairly plausible too. And it certainly makes defense of the inner city fairly easy to plan. How many gates to the inner city? How tall walls? Any overhanging battlements, moat or anything like that?By the way, roughly how large is the population of the city? How large portion in Fortress/inner city/outer city?Are there any secret tunnels leading from the fortress or inner city outside (either all the way outside or to the outer city)?We presume the inner city walls are well-maintained? Might at least some part of the fortress hail back to the days of the old kingdom? Its not unusual for fortresses to be built in the same places many times, especially if there are (for example) strong foundations remaining.What sort of terrain does the city lie in? is it all flat, or are there hills or even cliffs?


And while these are all valid questions, they are a bit much, aren't they? This is just a casual roleplay, after all.
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If we'd been going on advanced level, we'd have asked a lot more. Like technical details on the fortifications, thickness of this or that, materials, age of repair, etc. There are always more questions one can ask, but it is generally not necessary to know most of that. We might actually make a quick sketch of an imagined (but simplified) appearance of the city if we get those answers.
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Ahh... That sounds fairly plausible too. And it certainly makes defense of the inner city fairly easy to plan. A) How many gates to the inner city? B) How tall walls? C) Any overhanging battlements, moat or anything like that?

D) By the way, roughly how large is the population of the city? E) How large portion in Fortress/inner city/outer city?
F) Are there any secret tunnels leading from the fortress or inner city outside (either all the way outside or to the outer city)?

G) We presume the inner city walls are well-maintained? H) Might at least some part of the fortress hail back to the days of the old kingdom? Its not unusual for fortresses to be built in the same places many times, especially if there are (for example) strong foundations remaining.

I) What sort of terrain does the city lie in? is it all flat, or are there hills or even cliffs?



Some of these answers will be arbitrary.

A) Four, facing the cardinal directions.

B) 50 Ft

C) There a eight towers at regularly spaced intervals on the inner wall, perhaps mounted with ballista. No moat.

D) Uhhh, 20,000+?

E) The Inner City accounts for roughly 1/4th of the total city (So Willy, your map is disproportionate.) The Palace/Keep is 1/3rd of that.

F)

G) Yes.

H) Yes, the foundation stones. The rest was rebuilt during a century long occupation by the (now disbanded) Oragossi Dominion.

I) The Outer city is mostly flat, with the elevation decreasing as you go outwards. The Inner City was built over higher ground, the elevation was partially artificially created by the Oragossi who expanded the Inner City. They have a wealth of knowledge regarding earth moving and geography stuff.
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And while these are all valid questions, they are a bit much, aren't they? This is just a casual roleplay, after all.


There are different levels of casual, Ellri's running at a bit higher a level than this RP was designed for but not more than I can handle...considering.
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My map isn't supposed to be exact, obviously. Just a really rough sketch.
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There are different levels of casual, Ellri's running at a bit higher a level than this RP was designed for but not more than I can handle...considering.


I can see Ellris point, sometimes I don't post as this is somewhat too casual for my liking. These 3/4 line posts kill me and I hate doing replies that short personally.

Will post in the morning, got a run to do tomorrow.
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This RP was an exercise in restraint for me, a simple RP design with no standards, and it was advertised as being such.
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I can see Ellris point, sometimes I don't post as this is somewhat casual for my liking. These 3/4 line posts kill me and I hate doing replies that short personally.Will post in the morning, got a run to do tomorrow.


I dunno what else I can do. I'm not going to assume that you'll just follow and I'll make an entire post of me running through the city with a trusty sidekick or something. Besides, wouldn't Itani's regiment be closing in on the arena by now? Logic might state that the Evokers are more than a match for the non-Evoker Knights, and require Evoker assistance to bring in.
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I dunno what else I can do. I'm not going to assume that you'll just follow and I'll make an entire post of me running through the city with a trusty sidekick or something. Besides, wouldn't Itani's regiment be closing in on the arena by now? Logic might state that the Evokers are more than a match for the non-Evoker Knights, and require Evoker assistance to bring in.


How about there is an invasion and arresting you is nowhere near the priority any longer.
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How about there is an invasion and arresting you is nowhere near the priority any longer.


I would make it a priority if there are a group of Evokers, all independent, sitting in the arena. They could be agents for the invaders, since, you know, right when the melee was about the start, the invasion launched, and no one really knows half the participants, or are from foreign lands. And who knows what powers they might wield, they may very well be out to assassinate the King.

Having an invasion is bad, but having rogue elements and rogue Evokers behind your lines without a lid on their power or their emotions [since you kinda ordered them to be arrested, and most people wouldn't like that] might not help the chaos. Just saying.
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Wilson have you read the IC? We've sealed off the Outer City and are considering it a military loss. You and the other evokers aren't behind our lines, you're behind the Kalesian Empires lines.
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The level of casual in this RP had been brought into question before.
The posts range from 3-4 lines to something that could pass for a college essay.

Although i miss like 40% of the OOC discussion cause im in school during the conversation
by the time i can comment the subject has changed
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Colllege essay is a little extreme, maybe a high school essay.
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Guilty Spark said
Colllege essay is a little extreme, maybe a high school essay.


Fair enough
I don't really have anything for starry to do right now
I'm going to let alida reply first before i can have him tell his story.

On the other hand i have an idea for a mercenary faction led by a relic user. Someone i can use when if starry dies
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So the Royal Arena is in the Outer City? When was that? I know that the Vocators dot-Junior were over there, but Vocators are everywhere.
And when did anyone say the Royal Arena was in the outer city, because I don't remember reading that.
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