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It won't be too much control, just with areas that have a high concentration of dust, and only if the parts are small enough. Like, fine / possibly dust that's almost powder-y. (He won't be able to control small pieces of rock, though.) I'm guessing his powers work best indoors, where dust gathers more easily. If the dust's made of the right material, then he could probably stir up a miniature sand / dust storm, mostly as a defense. For offense, I guess he could... make the dust get into his opponents' eyes...? I guess he'd be able to absorb some of it, as well, although that wouldn't be great for his health and probably make him all coughy for a while.


If he can move dust at the speed to create a sandstorm, he can force it down someones throat and into their lungs.
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If he can move dust at the speed to create a sandstorm, he can force it down someones throat and into their lungs.


Or manipulate the dust that everyone breathes normally and ruin them from the inside.

Air manipulation or anything to do with small particles are always very powerful abilities that should have some serious limitations IMO.
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We've got another (N)PC sheet in the works, Sparks... Want us to post it here or edit it into a previous lore post? The character is Kalesian.
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We've got another (N)PC sheet in the works, Sparks... Want us to post it here or edit it into a previous lore post? The character is Kalesian.


You're going to have an entire nations' worth of characters soon, Ellri.
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Most of those are intentionally sparse, Wilson. We don't want a whole nation.
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Ellri said "Also, considering the fact that moving a relic far from its evoker is lethal to the evoker, having earrings, who are rather exposed, is rather risky."


Is this a bad thing thematically? Considering his powers of sound, he would hear them coming anyway. I'd like to keep it on him, since it's something that I find endearing, but if you guys really want me to change, I have a black up plan in mind.

Ellri said Relic: Power makes sense, but the fact that there's two parts kinda contradicts with all the other relics so far.


This statement confuses me altogether. It bolsters his echolocation skills because he can make sounds louder, so they "ping" and reverberate better to create a smoother audio map for him to maneuver. Sorry, I guess that part was a bit confusing.

Otherwise, all the other criticisms are understandable, and they are sound. Thanks for putting it as plainly as possible.
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Looking for images of the main city, pity most the ones I like people made on minecraft.
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Relic: Power makes sense, but the fact that there's two parts kinda contradicts with all the other relics so far.


Don't we have other relics with more than one effect? Such as Echo's?

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Looking for images of the main city, pity most the ones I like people made on minecraft.


The main city of your Egyptian nation, or Amaryth?
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Double post, while I've got it might as well suggest cities.



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Double post, while I've got it might as well suggest cities.


For my Egyptian Folk. I have several images I like for certain purposes but the Capital will be in the more humid area near the sea. I got a good image for a trade hub in the desert (As a pit stop for people crossing the desert)
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Making sounds louder is dangerous if you don't have really strong filters. A sudden, unexpected boom while that "boosting" is active has a decent likelihood of damaging hearing. If you're reliant upon others making sound, then eventually there will be some sneaky bastard you can't "see" because he or she doesn't make enough noise. Someone who can breathe silently enough not to be heard even by a master listener. And if he or she is heard, he or she can simply make a massively loud noise, causing incapacitation, and still have the advantage.

We like the idea of playing with a sound-based power, but we think you could go with solutions for it that leave your character less prone to incapacitation.
One possible way of doing it is to have your relic grant your character the ability to both perceive and generate ultrasound, much like the bio sonar of numerous animals. That way, you won't have him as vulnerable to loud noises, and you're not reliant upon others making the noises you need to "see".

As for the vulnerable placement of the earrings:
Just because you can hear something coming, does not mean you can always dodge it. Thats why armor, when it was invented, covers areas the user can see as well as those he/she cannot see. Where others would look strange with one (or both) ear(s) cut off, your character would be dead if that happened.
Its a bit like the myth of Achilles. Why, if his weak point was the achilles heel, was that part not given extra armoring? We're not saying you should absolutely not use earrings (it is after all, as Sparks so aptly put it, a personal preference), but it will be a significant risk for him if you do. We're sure there's some pretty bauble you could go with that is not as likely to be cut off by chance in combat or dropped by accident. We're not going to suggest anything specific here, as it should be your choice what you go with.

The idea above should leave your character more powerful than before, we're not the sort to suggest stuff to weaken PCs without good reason (i.e. if they're ridiculously Overpowered). Its more fun when they're strong.
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For my Egyptian Folk. I have several images I like for certain purposes but the Capital will be in the more humid area near the sea. I got a good image for a trade hub in the desert (As a pit stop for people crossing the desert)


Do you have any specific features you're looking for in the capital?
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Sparks: about that bit about two parts you commented on earlier:
The other relics are one item. i.e. one mask, one bracer, one book, etc. Then along comes two earrings. That is what we meant there.
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Oh, that makes sense.

I never questioned whether a pair of items could be one relic myself.
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Oh, that makes sense.I never questioned whether a pair of items could be one relic myself.


Maybe if you take off one earing your power is halved? :P

Also Sparks, filling out the basic sheet now will add to history/religion and important figures later. Me and Ellri are looking at the map now for the best place, as I said before the Capital (Main district) will be a more humid climate I was thinking have the outer edges more arid.
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Alright, I should start working on the response from Amaryth's defenses soon.
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If he can move dust at the speed to create a sandstorm, he can force it down someones throat and into their lungs.

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Or manipulate the dust that everyone breathes normally and ruin them from the inside.Air manipulation or anything to do with small particles are always very powerful abilities that should have some serious limitations IMO.

Okay, I'm probably going to have to come up with some sort of major weakness, then... I was thinking that he'd maybe have trouble breathing, so he'd face the problem of himself not being able to breath as well as his enemies? (Not quite as bad as asthma, but I was think he'd start choking up / start finding it hard to breath.) Also, since dust gets blown away easily, his powers probably wouldn't work at all when there's even the slightest bit of wind. He'd probably have to be able to really close to the dust for it to work as well, so I'd say standing two metres away is the maximum distance.

So, does it sound too OP right now?
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What is your goal with this power?
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