[OOC] Academy 218 - Superhuman School (Always open)

[Beebee2121]

No, actually. I came up with the character concept and kinda tacked a name on him that I thought was a slightly uncommon cat name. And one that started with O since I don't have any characters whose name starts with O. Completely forgot about that movie.

[Mixtape Ghost N]

Hey scrublords, I have made a timeskip post in advance, but I will not post it until we're ready. Or if I feel like being a dick and want to nullify a ton of posts. I'm going to post here (Not the timeskip post, just in case) again after a few more people post, buuuuut, I just want to get everything wrapped up as much as possible.

I was thinking that my characters (That are returning/whatever, that is) should have some previous relation to Todd. So, how do you want to do it, Fox? I write about what my characters think of him, or the other way around?

I updated Nikki and Amanda's sheet for their relations with Poppy. Come to think of it, I should also get around to updating Valjean's sheet with all the people he hates/thinks are inferior to him.

[Swamp Fox]

Yeah. You can write your opinions first, and I'll follow up and maybe have him head their way. I'm just waiting on Bee for Felix, and I'm thinking of where to send Jerry.

[True Night]

Power outage yesterday, internet provider today... Working on a post nonetheless.

[Beebee2121]

Same. I'm putting one together right now.

[Dragonbud]

I think Estylwen and I are at a good stopping point, so im chill with a timeskip whenever

[Jazzy]

Mr Allen J said
Come to think of it, I should also get around to updating Valjean's sheet with all the people he hates/thinks are inferior to him.

i.e: Everyone

Henry's at a good stopping point. So I'mma chill.

[Estylwen]

Dragonbud said
I think Estylwen and I are at a good stopping point, so im chill with a timeskip whenever

Yup, yup. Timeskip it up~

[Jazzy]

Alright, Ciphra, Allen asked me to break down your character sheet. I wont decline or accept your character, as Allen wants to go into detail about your power himself (whether in public or via PMs I do not know), but I'll give some pointers on your character from what I can see.

Your appearance is lacking heavily. I would recommend reviewing some of the sheets made by Allen or Shade as they usually cover just about every aspect for physical appearance, from head shape to scars and everything in between. Personally, these two are my standard when making a human character. Your personality section is also lacking in that your character doesn't seem like a very open person, and a very two dimensional character that is more interested in himself than anything else. I get that he seeks friends and all that, but if he is hesitant to interact with everyone what incentive do other characters to talk to him. I fear for your sake that your character will be left behind due to this roleplay being so heavy on character interaction.

I also feel like you're trying a bit hard here, with being blind, and having amnesia. I doubt you really have the experience required to play such a part due to the mental complications that amnesia can create later on (depression, bipolar disorder, etc). If you really want to go that route, then by all means. But I usually recommend steering clear of mental disability as they tend to be hard to translate to writing if you do have experience with the subject, and are even harder to even do in a remotely accurate fashion if you haven't experienced the condition yourself.

Oh, and we already have a character named Chris. This one's optional, but I would recommend changing it to avoid confusion in the future.

With that, I'll let Allen make the final verdict.

[InfernoBlaze]

jazzy said Oh, and we already have a character named Chris. This one's optional, but I would recommend changing it to avoid confusion in the future.With that, I'll let Allen make the final verdict.

*waves hand from a distance*

[InfernoBlaze]

{Double post}

[Mixtape Ghost N]

ANOUNCEMENT

This is mostly directed at True Night, InfernoBlaze, and the new candidate. Me and the Co-Gms have discussed this, and we have come to the conclusion that Hidden powers are no longer allowed. All hidden powers are to be added to their sheet soon as possible. Sorry if this screws over everything, but honestly, there is little point to doing it anymore. And it makes it easier for a number of reasons (My legion of Co-Gms judging sheets, looking over sheets so that nobody duplicates powers, etc, etc). Most of all, it shouldn't matter since our characters won't know their powers.

I am the first to declassify my powers. Dana and Jaska's powers are now available for public viewing.

[Mixtape Ghost N]

I updated Amanda, Shannon, Deborah, and Valjean's sheet to include what they think of Todd (Also a little bit about Vespera). In Valjean's case, I also added what he thought about other characters. Your move, kiddies.

Now, far as I can tell, most of the characters are at a good stopping point, but I'd rather try to get as many people's plotlines finished as possible. I'll make a post tomorrow.

[Mixtape Ghost N]

Now this message is for Swamp Fox and Beebee; I am really close to the timeskip (I am tying up more and more loose ends as we speak). I would like it if you guys keep it brief so you don't hold everyone else up.

[InfernoBlaze]

De-classified Red's power section. I am also at a good stopping point for both Red and Chris, so I am going to wait for the new arc to begin, if that's okay with you,

[Swamp Fox]

Alright. I'll leave Jerry alone for the rest of the act and just do Todd & Felix. I updated my relationships for Todd, btw.

Edit: Alright. Bee, I'll let you conclude.

[Ciphra]

Jazzy said
Alright, Ciphra, Allen asked me to break down your character sheet. I wont decline or accept your character, as Allen wants to go into detail about your power himself (whether in public or via PMs I do not know), but I'll give some pointers on your character from what I can see.Your appearance is lacking heavily. I would recommend reviewing some of the sheets made by Allen or Shade as they usually cover just about every aspect for physical appearance, from head shape to scars and everything in between. Personally, these two are my standard when making a human character. Your personality section is also lacking in that your character doesn't seem like a very open person, and a very two dimensional character that is more interested in himself than anything else. I get that he seeks friends and all that, but if he is hesitant to interact with everyone what incentive do other characters to talk to him. I fear for your sake that your character will be left behind due to this roleplay being so heavy on character interaction.I also feel like you're trying a bit hard here, with being blind, and having amnesia. I doubt you really have the experience required to play such a part due to the mental complications that amnesia can create later on (depression, bipolar disorder, etc). If you really want to go that route, then by all means. But I usually recommend steering clear of mental disability as they tend to be hard to translate to writing if you do have experience with the subject, and are even harder to even do in a remotely accurate fashion if you haven't experienced the condition yourself.Oh, and we already have a character named Chris. This one's optional, but I would recommend changing it to avoid confusion in the future.With that, I'll let Allen make the final verdict.

Alright. Thanks for the impute. I know I lack a lot at personality. I'm not good at writing it out, just actually showing it in the writing itself so I'll try and work on that because he's a lot more complex than that seems to make him, and same with appearance, I just struggle a lot in that area. As for the Blind part I'm actually partially blind myself and thought it would be cool to incorporate that into a character and as for the amnesia I had a friend that went through that so I sorta get it, but you're probably right so I'll probably get rid of that. Lastly I'll make some changes now but some will have to wait since I'm a full time college student I have a lot of stuff to do so I don't know if I can get to it all at once.

[Jazzy]

I completely hear you in terms of personality and such. Most of the time I tend to fill that in IC myself.

[Ciphra]

Yay I'm not alone! Btw can I get your opinion on what I got done so far. Finishing up details for the powers then I'll finish up the personality, but I'd like to know what you think so far.

[InfernoBlaze]

I also asked Allen about this, but with him being busy preparing the timeskip, I want to ask a co-gm about a future power-up I added to Red when de-classifying his powers. I am waiting for either your approval or rejection, in order to know if I could go on with it.