[OOC] The Scarlet Masks

[LouLou]

Jeez I'm rusty. But something's up at least.
Sorry again for the wait.

[Apokalipse]

Sorry for the short post, but I didn't know what to write ^_^

[BingTheWing]

I kinda actually feel embarrassed because I'm GMing players that write better then me...

[Apokalipse]

Your writing is fine; but if I could offer a tip. It's all bunched together, so maybe making a few parts of it separate, by subject, would make it neater. Other than that, it looks fine. You are really good with showing a character's personality, and not telling.

[Pathfinder]

Sorry guys, I've been busy. I'll get a post up later today.

[Rtron]

Apokalipse said
Your writing is fine; but if I could offer a tip. It's all bunched together, so maybe making a few parts of it separate, by subject, would make it neater. Other than that, it looks fine. You are really good with showing a character's personality, and not telling.

This.

Though another good tip is to let Hector find a lightsaber in his next post. :D

[BingTheWing]

Bump?

[Apokalipse]

Sorry, I'm sick and so I'm going to go to sleep right now. I might post later if I feel better.

[Rtron]

Post will be up tonight.

[BingTheWing]

Bump.

[BingTheWing]

Hey guys, this isn't working out like I thought it would be. I'm ending this RP (unless you guys wanna revive it) and starting a new one in a week or so.

[Apokalipse]

Okay, I'm sorry it didn't work out.