[OOC] Kingdom Hearts: Keybearers of the Lost

[Redwing]

No, no, you're totally right. I was just so focused on other aspects I forgot to bring that up. Thank you for adding to my obsessive rant.

[Joshua Tamashii]

Well, my chances of being to join have shot down to zero I guess. Oh well, I'll still watch to see how things go.

[soren]

Ok Mike right now you do need to make some changes. I do agree with Redwing on a couple of things but I am willing to negotiate on some things too so lets work this out to get your character accepted.

First is the area ruled by dragons. While I don't have a problem with there being more dragons in the Land of Dragons I would prefer that if what the heartless were after as the power of the spirit guardian of your family or maybe you had a small mushu like friend that his heart is strong enough, along with yours to draw enough heartless to attack your village.

Second-I really am not looking for people to run mutiple characters except me. I am running two for a story reason. Tendra is great and all but over all I don't really think he needs to be in this rp. What you could do is struggle with your inner darkness and maybe have it manifest as a drive form later on. Also you can put something up describing your sister but she probably won't be an active participant unless we go to the Land of Dragons.

Third is your current appearance. As long as you don't keep that form and us it as a drive form then I am fine. How would you obtain a drive form you ask? Well your ancestor's spirits could bestow on you the power to combine your form with the spirit dragon you protected so bravely or they could grant you and your little friend that power after the battles over so that you and your mushu like friend can become one in a drive form.

Fourth, and this is to set the ancient china thing in stone, use a secondary weapon that pertains to the era and area of which you are coming from.

Fifth and final is please include something about Yen-Sid either coming to save you or asking for your assistance so that you will be at the Mysterious Tower world because that is where the story will begin.

I am sorry for all the changes but these are the things need to be corrected. If you want to negotiate on them a little then pm me otherwise edit the post with the changes.

[Mike the Bloodwolf]

Sigh, never a chance to use a proper half dragon in a KH rp.

Very well, I'll do the edits in time. Got to find a nice dragon to use.

[Mike the Bloodwolf]

I prefer the Samurai sword, I'm sorry and I don't really want to change it.

[Zarkun]

Mike the Bloodwolf said
Samurai sword

Katana. If you're going to use it, at least call it the proper name.

[Demon Shinobi]

Mike the Bloodwolf said
Sigh, never a chance to use a proper half dragon in a KH rp.Very well, I'll do the edits in time. Got to find a nice dragon to use.

Well in all fairness you would need to have a world or explanation appropriate and relevant to Kingdom Hearts in order to actually have a proper Half Dragon. As far as I know there aren't any worlds in KH or Disney as a whole with proper explanation or something along the lines of various living dragons, or something like that.

Also what is a "proper" half dragon.
As far as I know you can either be the child of a dragon and a human, have dragons abilities or parts put into you somehow, or... I don't even know... is there really any such thing as a "proper" half dragon?

[Mike the Bloodwolf]

There you go, I did some quick edits for now and will sort it out properly tomorrow after work.

[soren]

For all purposes this is the sword that he will be using. It is is connected to china and is similar to the Katana

Miao Dao

[Demon Shinobi]

soren said
For all purposes this is the sword that he will be using. It is is connected to china and is similar to the Katana

Don't want to derail things, but would that sword have been around during the whole Mulan time?
I'm just saying that I do kind of agree with Redwing that if you're going to be from a world you should be limited to it's resources until you gain more from other worlds and what not.

[soren]

Hell even this one will work and it is even closer to the era I can assume. Though I could be wrong. No flames.

Zhanmadao

yes I used wiki for both of these

[soren]

I will speak with Redwing when she is on later about the sword thing.

In that light Red pm me before posting

[KiltmanBagz]

If I may make a suggestion in terms of half dragon-ness in the rather standard way you appear to be shooting for. Especially for the use of a Kingdom Hearts game. May I point you to Sleeping beauties world where faies, dragons, and the like are a thing? Say a boy is in the care of a minor Fae court and when the darkness came to swallow them they gave the boy the only thing they could to protect him; the gift of power. Maleficent turned into a dragon after all and she was Fae. I'd wager a group of Fae could be able and willing to turn their human friend into something sufficiently dragon-esq for what you appear to wish to do. Though that does rather mess you having a Katana. seriously doubt a katana would be readily found in high fantasy europe land. Unless you picked it up while world hopping before you were found by Yen Sid. Though given your are apparently playing a key blade master the Katana seems like dead weight to me.

[Demon Shinobi]

KiltmanBagz said
If I may make a suggestion in terms of half dragon-ness in the rather standard way you appear to be shooting for. Especially for the use of a Kingdom Hearts game. May I point you to Sleeping beauties world where faies, dragons, and the like are a thing? Say a boy is in the care of a minor Fae court and when the darkness came to swallow them they gave the boy the only thing they could to protect him; the gift of power. Maleficent turned into a dragon after all and she was Fae. I'd wager a group of Fae could be able and willing to turn their human friend into something sufficiently dragon-esq for what you appear to wish to do. Though that does rather mess you having a Katana. seriously doubt a katana would be readily found in high fantasy europe land. Unless you picked it up while world hopping before you were found by Yen Sid. Though given your are apparently playing a key blade master the Katana seems like dead weight to me.

Oh yeah... I know not of the sleeping beauty, but Maleficent does have the whole dragon thing going on. XD

[soren]

Kilt is right that would give a very solid back ground for you mike. It covers your appearance of the dragon you have. Also the secondary weapon thing is well yeah almost useless as you will have the chance to duel wield if you so chose later on.

Also mike your sister needs to be an NPC for now I only want you as the Keybearer. She can stay at the tower but she needs to be preferably human.

[Demon Shinobi]

This is totally Rai's lion form is we go to the Lion King World. XD
Because i found it and YES!

lol XD it's so awesome. Feels like it isn't a cub, but it isn't an adult either.
And Rai's not a cub or an adult either. And it seems like it'd match him well XD

[soren]

very nice demon. Might have to add that world to the list.

[Demon Shinobi]

Hasn't lion king been in almost all of the games? In one way or another?
It feels like it XD

Anyway thanks.Gonna add it to the CS

[soren]

So yeah...How is everyone. I promise I and Red will get this off the ground soon. Tieing up the loose ends on Mike's character and waiting on one from Amaya.

[Zarkun]

I am grinding my sentinel to 55 on TOR. It's a rather long and arduous process. And the sad thing is, I'm only one level away...