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I was born in space. I've never felt the sun on my face or breathed real air or floated in the water. None of us have. For three generations, The Ark has kept what's left of the human race alive, but now our home is dying, and we are the last hope of mankind. One hundred prisoners sent on a desperate mission to the Ground. Each of us is here because we broke the Law. On the Ground, there is no Law. All we have to do is survive. But we will be tested: by the Earth, by the secrets it hides, and most of all, by each other.

Sit down and buckle up. It's expected to be a bit of a bumpy ride. As many of you should know by now our planet was devastated in a nuclear war, humanity has lived on spaceships far above Earth's radioactive surface. Now, you one hundred juvenile delinquents are being sent on a dangerous mission: to recolonize the planet. It could be their second chance at life...or it could be a suicide mission. There is no guarantee, however it is a much better chance than the one you have if you remain here. Good luck to you all, you may very well be the last hope for all of us.


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Name: (Name given at birth)
Nickname: (what people normally call you)
Age: (how old are you?)
Gender: (Male or Female?)
Relationship Status: (Current interests included)
Appearance: (Prefered picture. Absolutely no Anime)
Crime: (Everyone being sent down commited a crime. In such a small space like the Arc even the smallest crimes can be punishable by death.)

Parents: (Who raised you)
Friends: (friends? If any?)
Partner: (only applies if you fill out Relationship Status)

Personality: (what are you like with others)
Likes: (personal enjoyments?)
Dislikes: (things you hate)
Talents: (what are you particularly good at)
Biography: (what happened in your past. What were you before)
Theme Song: (not required)

Weapon Type: (you'll need something to survive on Earth's changed surface)
Weapon Appearance: (picture preferred)

Other:

Rules
Standard rules apply. No godmodding, Mary Sues, killing without consent from both parties, ect. Please delete all Parentheses in your application and hide the word grounder somewhere there also. Be sneaky I promise I'll find it. Remember I am your god while in this RP. My word here is final. So enjoy the roleplay and feel free to leave some feedback.
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I saw this in the interest check and found I loved it.

I will, if it's not too late, love to join this, but will work on a character tonight and tomorrow. Probably tomorrow.
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I'll be real here, I haven't watched the show (fully) because it's CW and....Well, it seemed like it was just going to be another romance focused show made by them. But the world and premise did catch my interest so I think I'd be interested in an RP of it...Just uh--Gonna go marathon the show first.
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I'm in the same boat, I've never even heard of the show. But the rp spikes my interest
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Dragonbud said
I've never even heard of the show.


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Glad we have some biters, I'll get my own CS up as soon as I can.
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So for appearance, I know the rule is no anime but what is the ruling against realistic art? I ask because it really doesn't fit my comfort zone using actual people...I mean, I will if I have to, but I'd like to avoid it if I could.
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I like it!
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I know of the show because it was listed on Netflix.
But I never did actually bother watching it before.
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Wow....So I wonder who here has actually watched this show ಠ_ಠ
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If it helps I'm in an RvB RP even where there's someone who's never seen the show.
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....The question I have for that is who hasn't seen RvB?
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i havent seen rvb but as for your question yes you can use realistic art. i just dont like anime
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Wintergrey said
i just dont like anime


O-Oh! Oh! -Looks down sadly at all the anime in my signature-

Ah, but I'll have a CS up soon enough. Just finishing up the series, heard there's gonna be a season two starting soon.
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Writing a CS now!
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Name: Kronshi Cramaso
Nickname: Crimson
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Relationship Status: Single
Appearance:
Crime: I killed 20 people with the blade listed below
Parents: Orphaned
Friends: Who would be friends with a grounder orphaned serial killer
Personality: Quiet, Mysterious, Anti-social, Not willing to side with anyone, Personality might change as the rp affects him
Likes: being alone to think, playing mind games (from brain teasers to chess, actually pretty smart)
Dislikes: people, being with people, arrogant show-offs who think they are better than him
Talents: Swordsmanship, Computer Programming, Anything that requires his brain or blade
Biography: Just your average street rat, orphaned, learned not to trust people, and all he ever loved was his sword. One day he was jumped by a gang and he managed to kill all 20, but because of his reputation, he was blamed and was locked up, but he just lets people believe he is a crazed killer, you get more respect that way
Weapon Type: serrated great sword
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I forgot to mention that he has red eyes instead and the weapon is dual-edged, these were the closest to what I wanted
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Kronshi i'm going to have to ask you to put a little more effort into your application. This is more directed towards a high-casual RP than a low. Expand on your personality as well as your biography. Besides that I have a few things that I would like to mention about your character. 1 we are not a alien race, we are normal humans who don't have red eyes, sorry. Unless your a blind albino I don't see the red eye factor working in this RP. 2 while I'm totally okay with murder the fact that you killed 20 people with a blade before someone managed to chatch you is quiet rare. Take note that not many people survived the earth's war, so the total population would fall under 500-800 people. This would leave you having killed 4 - 2.5 % of the entire population of the Arc. You can see that's a little bit of a stretch. I have a few conflicts with the personality being a genius as well as a mass murdering killer, but I will let that slide if you update on the other things. If you need help getting your application up to par, feel free to throw me a message. I would love to help you out in any way I can and explain more about what I have just said.
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1: fine, no red eyes, they shall be green, 2: how about eight instead, 3: He is not a mass murderer, he got jumped, 4: He's not a genius, he's just good with puzzles and chess and stuff like that, if you asked him what 4 times 18 was, he would be at a loss, 5: I shall work on the personality and bio now
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It's not my roleplay and I try to stray away from being a background gm, but if I can add my opinion....

This is an RP where the characters have been in space for most of their lives, using a term like 'average street rat' really doesn't fit. Not to mention there may be advanced technology, but I doubt there would be any blade remotely close to the one in your picture. I honestly doubt guards and the council would just let anyone carry around a sword, let alone a great sword.

Another thing, how could someone fifteen years of age take on twenty gang members and kill each one of them? I think there should be a mention of how that could happen. But killing in the act of self defense? Would that really get someone locked up? You claim it's because of his reputation but....If they knew about that then he would have been locked up beforehand, hence even the smallest crimes can be punishable by death. Those under eighteen get locked up and sent to earth...So why wasn't he locked up beforehand? Also a bio is there for a reason, could extend it by telling how exactly he became so good with blades and computers, that one is just a suggestion.

Minor things that I'm not going to bother writing eight paragraphs about: Why is his eyes read? Why the fuck is he fifteen yet looks like he's in his twenties? Why do you have that goddamn unicorn? ಠ_ಠ

Yeah, I'm not the type to criticism everything in someone else's RP...But I couldn't help myself this time around.
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