[OOC] Yukigakure Chronicles

[Partisan]

My main issue is the bone dragon. Size: huge? Uses is more like, what can this summon do, not who uses this summon. :P History could and should be longer, atleast 2 paragraphs and preferably more. Interesting KG though, definetely keep that in.

I suggest you change the bone dragon to either something more conventional or downsize/balance it so it seems more realistic for a genin. Naruto could summon Gamabunta, other genins could probably not even summon anything at all until later.

[Maria 127]

Edited my CS i downsized my summon to Medium add what it can do and what it is mainly used for i also added a bit more to History and secrets.

[Partisan]

I'll leave the summon to knight, cause I'm not sure about it. I don't think it suits the setting very well, but we have more of those types of things.

[Maria 127]

tweeked the history a bit

[Masaki Haruna]

@Part, sure.
Going to post once Hil and Ariel does as well.

[Hillan]

It hit me that Marco is a fair bit older than his teammates. Figured he'd better act the part. I'm going for some goofball duality here with Marco, that he acts all cocky and shit to deflect his real feelings. Do some flashbacks and other fun shit later, me thinks.

[Masaki Haruna]

Good call. I was expecting he'd be the mature type but before I was in doubt based on his debut and CS sheet but you made me change my mind. Oh well, I will post once Ariel posts, together I will host for Kyou and Byakuya.

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That Naruto 697 tho.... FIST FIGHT!

[Hillan]

The guy is pretty mature, he's seen some shit that I didn't really go over in his CS, he was trained pretty harshly. He's still plenty of playful, though.

Also, yes, that chapter made me really happy.

[Partisan]

I already sent Ariel a PM asking if she would post, pretty please.

[Partisan]

If Ariel doesn't answer by the end of tomorrow I'm gonna have to skip her for the time being in team Sayuri.

[Masaki Haruna]

Then again, going by plan B. I'll take charge of Ariel's OC unless she comes back.
But then again its already exhausting controlling three OCs due to time and effort.

[Partisan]

Three? Don't you have 2? Kazumi would make 3. Also they're in the same team so I can see how that'd make it a bit more boring. If you're up for it though, if by the end of the day she doesn't reply feel free to take over for a while until me and Koyo decide if we will boot her.

[Masaki Haruna]

That's if. If I can actually handle Kazumi which I can but won't be as high quality/definition.
Desperate measures calls for proper planning. At this rate I would have made an Uchiha character but I doubt it would make things any better.

Sure thing, we'll wait ;)

[Maria 127]

okay im gonna start writing up a post whose team is my character in?

[Partisan]

I'm thinking I could switch Kazumi for your character but I'd like to know if she's definetely out, first.

[Masaki Haruna]

If Kazumi is replaced, Team Sayuri has chances!
Cuz Team Byakuya have three stronger Genin!

Oh well, I think I will control Kazumi.

[Partisan]

If you do, thats fine too. We'll need 2 genins, then. I know Koyo's working on one. Either way, fine. Take over Kazumi for now.

[Enarr]

Hey. Hillan told me about this game, and after a bit of looking into anime for the first time in my life (and watching the first five episodes of Naruto), I plan on signing up as a Genin, which works because I'm learning as I go.

[Partisan]

I've seen plenty of people do that, and don't worry the anime get's better. If you plan on watching it just skip Shippuden and watch the important fights on youtube like I did because most of Shippuden is filler shit (not good funny fillers, no, actual nonsense and 3 episodes of Shikamaru standing around doing nothing.)

Either way that's fine.

[Hillan]

I mean, the original series ends at episode 135, then there's 120 episodes of filler before Shippuden starts..