Digimon G-Shatter (Redux)(Royal Knights Mk: II[Sorta])

[Silver Fox]

tobiax said
As for Digimon line, fine.Now, normally, I'd say it's fine for someone's character to be however they want. However, I feel as though the description could be a bit more well described, and justified, Because there's absolutely no transition from being socially inept to being able to help an entire class. Sorry, but it feels kind of forced a touch. Perhaps rethink some of the things, and maybe think of development you want your character to have in the IC as opposed to having him supposedly overcome every obstacle in his backstory. Plus, his name coming right out of your user name doesn't really... help your case.And, again, normally I'd be fine, but I'm planning on there being a very deliberate process by which the Digidestined are chosen, and it's for a specific purpose. It's not seemingly random or super-clandestine like Adventure or Frontier, but it's not voluntary like Data Squad. There's going to be a system in place, and I want it to all make sense.

So what sort of quality/specific thing be needed for a chosen Digidestined? Just so I can get a proper bio for them/personality and such

[tobiax]

Just make them unique, make the stories follow logic, give them a few flaws, and have their personalities have some form of dynamic with the Digimon most likely.
It's kinda hard to explain because I have to filter it all from a perspective of character. I don't want to spoil what is being looked for, but it's part of the reason I have so many stipulations.

[22xander]

I... My character has my own past and it's just about as is... I tend to do that, use myself, I can change his name to the legal name of Alexander, not that anyone calls me that... Ever. I can try to describe it, but my 'transition' as you put it is kinda hard to explain. I, and presumably he still has problems, he just somehow sorrounded himself with people who were worse... I'm not going to put details, but let's just say I've been a real help to several people who are to stubborn to go to a real psychology expert. In any case, I can change it but I do want to tell you that it's not contrived, it's my f*#cked up life :p
Edit: also it's not a class, it's like 2 or 3 kids from his school who are worse off then him and who he can help.

[22xander]

Ok, break time... Gimme a little bit and I'll finish up...

[RBYDark]

....look, dude, I can't really rp with self-inserts. I've done it before and inevitably it's always taken personally if my character has a disagreement with them, and I really don't want to go through that stuff for the fifth or so time.

ETA: To clarify, not saying you'll have to start over. I'll probably drop though. Pretty sure Tob'll be okay.

[Silver Fox]

Child lll Karn

Name: Karn Hitoshi

Age: 17

Gender: Male

Designation: Child lll

File Photo:

Stands around 5'0 and his build seems fairly lean and small though he has a pretty toned body due to his years of training. Though he's usually still mistaken as girlish sometimes.

Dossier(Personality): Karn is a pretty carefree fun loving girlish man. He honestly could be mistaken either gender due to his pretty looks. Although unexpectedly, he seems to rather enjoy playing either role. He's pretty playful and often a curious sort who ends up getting into a bit of trouble on his own. He revels in making friends and attempting to please others to the best of his abilities. He's a bit immature and acts just like a child, while being a bit directionally challenged, but when push comes to shove in a serious situation, he will fight for his friends to his grave.

Karn grew up in a fairly small town, he had loving parents and a elder brother. However, at the age of six, his mother had gotten caught in a storm during a fishing trip she took him on, inevitebly drowning to her death. He had barely survived the incident. When his father realized what happened, he became depressed and started to drink more. Karn's elder brother had to work hard in order to keep them fed. Their father was a bad alcoholic, and took out his frustrations on Karn, blaming him for his mother's death and ended up doing quite a bit of horrific things a parent can do to a child. Karn's elder brother ignored him, wanting no part in his younger brother's or was simply too busy to pay any mind to anything.

At the age of ten, him and his brother were taken away by child services after someone reported their father being unable to properly care for his children. At the age of eleven, Karn was adopted by a kind , if not a odd man. A fashion designer and crossdresser, he adored Karn's adorable looks and often used him as a model for various clients. Leading the young boy to enjoy dressing up, since it was one of the ways to show live for his new father. Never wanting to disappoint his new family, he tries his best in school, was always the friendly sort and always did his best to help others.

Other:
-Be it oceans, rivers, lakes, rain, or a glass of water... Karn will freak out.
-He seems to enjoy dancing, singing and cross dressing.

Used someone's attacks the picture came with.

Digimon

Seat: 3
Name: Liara
Control Method: Leopardmon is a genius tactician, but is not a fighter. Attacks are generally weak compared to the other knights.

Baby-
Name: Popomon
Gender: Female
Attribute: None
Appearance:

Technique:
"Hair Mist", an attack that blinds onlookers by scattering hair like rose petals, to escape from enemies.
Personality: Pretty quiet and snobbish, only ever going to those she trusts.

In-Training-
Name: Purrmon
Gender: Female
Attribute: None
Appearance:

1st one
Technique:
Hair Ball: She spits a sticky ball of fur at her enemy.

Personality: A little bit of a stuck up, doesn't like getting dirty and acts a bit spoiled.

Rookie-
Name: Light Leormon
Gender: Female
Attribute: Vaccine
Appearance:

2nd one
Technique:
Ice Claw: Ice covers her front paws then she slashes at her enemy.
Critical Bite: She bites at the weak spot of her enemy. This attack is able to bring down a Champion Level Digimon although the critical chance is very very low.
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Personality: She acts pretty mature and ladylike, finding most other Digimon childish. She doesn't enjoy getting dirty and likes keeping her pretty fur nice and clean. Acts like a prim and proper little princess, but despite her attitude, she's pretty clever.

Champion-
Name: Huntressmon
Gender: Female
Attribute: Vaccine
Appearance:

3rd one
Technique:
Icy Pounce: Ice covers her front and back paws doubling the size of her claws, then she runs towards an enemy and jumps on it biting and slashing. Most of the ice will break of while she slashes and hamper the enemy till it melts.
Ice Pack: An icy mist forms around her. Out of it charge what look like 3 Leormon made of ice. They bit and slash at the enemy till they are shattered.
Death Hold: She bites the enemys neck and weak spots. Once she has a good bite she doesn't let go. This attack is able to bring down a Ultimate Level Digimon although the critical chance is very very low.
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Personality: Her personality doesn't change much from rookie stage, but she does lash out less and chooses to keep her head cool and ignore irritable immature Digimon. She enjoys cleaning her fur, gems, and wearing pretty accessories but she does have a more kinder side to her.

Ultimate-
Name: Lionessmon
Gender: Female
Attribute: Vaccine
Appearance:

4th one.
Technique:
Cat Claw: She slashes at her enemies with the claws she holds.
Holy Claw whirl: An holy aura surrounds her claw and feet, then she slashes and kicks her enemies.
Shield of Ice: She covers her Left Claw in ice to create a shield. Doing this freezes her claw and hand leaver her unable to use it after the shields gone for a while.
Fang of the Beast Queen: She crosses her claw together then spreading them apart releasing an Ice Huntressmon that bites the enemy. This attack is able to bring down a Mega Level Digimon though the critical chance is very very low.
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Personality: She has a strong sense of justice and is a force to be reckon with. She's protective over her friends and isn't afraid to slice down evil. But she does always plan before actually going into battle.

Mega 1-
Name: Angeliomon
Gender: Female
Attribute: Vaccine
Appearance:

Last one
Technique:
Mega attacks(5)- Light Paw: She slashes at her enemies with paws glowing with a holy aura.
Ice wing: She flaps her wings sending a rain of razor sharp ice covered feather at the enemy.
Heaven Blessing: A healing aura surrounds her and anyone she is touching.
Heaven Protection: She and those near her are surrounded by an glowing sphere that repels all attacks.
Celestial Huntress- The Jewel on her head glows surrounding her in a holy aura. She then pounces on her enemies slashing and biting there weak spots.
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Personality: A mature and almost motherly figure, she's kinder and less vicious and temperamental then her lower stages, but she's also more vicious towards her opponents.

Mega II/Royal Knight-
Name: Leopardmon
Gender: Female
Attribute: Data
Appearance:


Technique:
Extinction Wave: Paints an arc in the sky with the Sword of Annihilation in a downward swing of the beam's edge.
Black Aura Blast: Fires explosive energy with the Sword of Destruction.

Leopard Mode Attacks:
Wolkenkratzer: Causes towering pillars of bedrock to appear from the ground, tossing the opponent.
Blockade:Runs across the land and flies through the sky, tearing the opponent apart from every angle.
Eroberung: Generates globe-shaped energy mines from the spherical tip of its tail, which it uses to strategically encircle the opponent.
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Personality: Wise and calculating, Leopardmon is a master strategist and able to think on her feet with ease. She keeps her head cool and her abilities sharp. No matter the situation, always preparing for many possible outcomes. She's kind, and hardworking, but it's rare for her to share her ideas and plans.

[22xander]

Ok, I just realized that his backstory might not make sence in Japan I'm changeing it, hope the works :p

[22xander]

A new backstory, how's that?

[tobiax]

22xander said
I... My character has my own past and it's just about as is... I tend to do that, use myself, I can change his name to the legal name of Alexander, not that anyone calls me that... Ever. I can try to describe it, but my 'transition' as you put it is kinda hard to explain. I, and presumably he still has problems, he just somehow sorrounded himself with people who were worse... I'm not going to put details, but let's just say I've been a real help to several people who are to stubborn to go to a real psychology expert. In any case, I can change it but I do want to tell you that it's not contrived, it's my f*#cked up life :pEdit: also it's not a class, it's like 2 or 3 kids from his school who are worse off then him and who he can help.

22xander said
Ok, I just realized that his backstory might not make sence in Japan I'm changeing it, hope the works :p

There we go. Also, I can not condone self-insert characters. I was tired when I posted last, but that was also in my mind- both actually. A combination of "this feels like a self insert a little bit" and "I don't feel like this would work in Japan", and that's one of the character rules atm.
O.O
Yeah, with what could potentially happen in this RP, you do not want to feel personal equivalence to your character.
Things may happen due to other characters, certain enemies, and my own "I wonder how this character would do with this situation", or simple plot advancement, and I'd not want it to seem like an attack on any specific player. I apologize for the inconvenience, but it will save you trouble in the long run.
QED- I'm playing at least one all-female pair and I'm a guy. Even I accept that some pain may come to all my characters, but heck, I'd do it voluntarily because it makes for good character deveopment.

RBYDark said
....look, dude, I can't really rp with self-inserts. I've done it before and inevitably it's always taken personally if my character has a disagreement with them, and I really don't want to go through that stuff for the fifth or so time.ETA: To clarify, not saying you'll have to start over. I'll probably drop though. Pretty sure Tob'll be okay.

I'd rather you not drop. Besidesyou'retheonlyoneherewhomI'mawareoftheirwritingability. Plus I'm aware you'll engage in a bit more darksome situations.

Silver Fox said I'll edit in a digimon soon

I like, I like. Note that his hydrophobia will be exploited at least once.
Protip- I will not simply have someone's Digimon take heavy damage or be reverted to an egg just because they're a Leomon. If there's another reason, however...

Also, wow, lots of Japanese Child Protective Services instances here. Or, two... which is a lot for the small sample size.

22xander said A new backstory, how's that?

Sorry to poke holes, but Japan isn't known for giving dual citizenship. It still feels a bit confused and lacks details that complete the story. Lots about where he is/how he got there, little about personality. And I'd rather you not use your real/username for your character name for the above reason. Plus you're referencing things in your Digimon sheet that aren't established in your human character, and it seems that the future interaction is highlighted more than the actual characteristics of the Digimon.
And, a few technical errors- all your images are broken. Also, SkullMeramon's an Ultimate, not a Mega. Thirdly, I didn't expressly say this, but a Champion should have one to two Techniques that are used, and I'd say 3 three for Ultimates. If it's explained well I might allow a third on a Champion or a fourth on an Ultimate (the latter not being that hard really), but not like five or six on a Champion. In addition, we're not using an MP system really, so...
Okay, I didn't want to do this- you seem like you're interested, but I have to think of the stability of the RP here. I'm looking for at the very least that you're going to put your best effort into it, and I'd prefer a show of quality writing to the best of your ability, but if you're not going to give at least a solid 80% of your effort consistently for the RP, then I'll have to give the slot to someone else. I'm not saying I'm doing that now, but it will be the case if you don't have improvement before the IC starts, and you will be considered in consideration for seat 12 until then, but someone else could take it once I put the OOC up. Fair warning, yes?

Sorry for rambling guys.

[Silver Fox]

tobiax said
I like, I like. Note that his hydrophobia will be exploited at least once.

Dude.... Dude... I expect everyone to exploit this. As many times as they want. Do it. Make him sufferrrrrrr <insert evil laugh> but nah it's quite fine. I think it will eventually make a good 'lesson' point like (choose, let the fear get the best of you or let a friend die) or something.

But yes... This guy can't shower without freaking out ... So I expect much making fun of him.

tobiax said Protip- I will simply have someone's Digimon take heavy damage or be reverted to an egg because they're a Leomon. If there's another reason, however...

I don't really understand. Why would this be exclusive to Leomon? Don't all Digimon basically just get turned into a egg if destroyed (unless a digimon eats the fractal code). Or do you just mean no one should be dying?

tobiax said Also, wow, lots of Japanese Child Protective Services instances here. Or, two... which is a lot for the small sample size.

Sorry, I honestly didn't look at the other CS's other than personality so oops :0 I can change it so he still lives with his father

[22xander]

All right... I have a bunch of work to do on it... And I understand, I just copy and pared the moves from the sites. I can get imgs, I really want to try to get in. I try my best for every to I try.

[22xander]

Ok, I'm going tobjsut start over, mineing this for what I need. Also, the things say death meramon is ultimate sometimes but he digivolves from blue meramon and some say it's 'perfect' level.... I don't know what that means... Be done with the human shortly, gmas

[22xander]

Chosen Child File

Name: Vincent Fox
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Designation: 13th child
File Photo:
Dossier(Personality): Vincent is the son of a american Nintendo exec who married the daughter of an important higher up years after moving to Japan for business, and as such Vincent has all ways had an odd relationship with his family. At the age of 6 his mother died and their were problems because of Japan's non imegration policys and his grandfather, the important Nintendo higher up (now retired) thought it would be best if he was raised in a traditional way. He and Vincent's after agreed and he was brought to an old money compound were the grandfather was raised.
For years he lived in isolation, only bearly going to the local school and nothing else. But his father decided to give him a powerful, and hard to break, IBM laptop as well as a game system and a selection of Nintendo games. Soon he became absorbed in the internet, becomeing interested in international forums. His grades never dropped, and his grandfather was to old and ambivalent to see the effect it had on Vincent, so he became engrossed in these things without any real hampering.
Over time he drew more into himself, and grew morbid in his thoughts and personal research. He keeps a leather bound journal, an old worn book that his dad had given his mother after a trip to Europe. If you look in that book you can see how his thoughts changed over time due to sleep deprivation and being subjected to the stress of trying to reconcile his grandfather's workman ethics and the slacker internet culture he was subjected to in the internet from America and Australia.
He eventually began to get into hacking, at first out of curiosity, then out of a feeling of necessity. He never really got far beyond the script kitty phase, but he loved it.
Other: (Notes, voice actors/actresses/seiyuu, associated tropes, etc)

Digimon Sheet

Seat:
Name: (If Overarching. Omit if not applicable)
Control Method: (How the Digimon is made not entirely OP, and makes fights fair for other players.)

Baby-
Name:
Gender:
Attribute:
Appearance:(Note alterations)
Technique:
-(List name, and a short description.)
Personality: (Just do a short note of changes unless it's main stage/Knight Stage. Rookie or some Champions count as "main". Not like Maildramon or Greymon, but those of manageable size, like Leomon maybe.)

In-Training-
Name:
Gender:
Attribute:
Appearance:
Technique:
-
Personality:

Rookie-
Name:
Gender:
Attribute:
Appearance:
Technique:
-
Personality:

Champion-
Name:
Gender:
Attribute:
Appearance:
Technique:
-
Personality:

Ultimate-
Name:
Gender:
Attribute:
Appearance:
Technique:
-
Personality:

Mega 1-
Name:
Gender:
Attribute:
Appearance:
Technique:
-
Personality:

Mega II/Royal Knight-
Name:
Gender:
Attribute:
Appearance:
Technique:
-
Personality:

[22xander]

God... I thought I wrote more then that. Whatever, is that all right? Or should I start another? I want to do my best to accommodate, so just tell me what I can do...

[tobiax]

Silver Fox said
Dude.... Dude... I expect to exploit this. As many times as they want. Do it. Make him sufferrrrrrr <insert evil laugh> but nah it's quite fine. I think it will eventually make a good 'lesson' point like (choose, let the fear get the best of you or let a friend die) or something.But yes... This guy can't shower without freaking out ... So I expect much making fun of him.I don't really understand. Why would this be exclusive to Leomon? Don't all Digimon basically just get turned into a egg if destroyed (unless a digimon eats the fractal code). Or do you just mean no one should be dying?Sorry, I honestly didn't look at the other CS's other than personality so oops :0 I can change it so he still lives with his father

Yay! Deep sea mission anyone? Dagomon, MarineDevimon... oh, the horrors of the deep... YAS!
There's a tradition in Digimon that is as follows *clears throat* "Leomon dies". I want to assure you that if you use Leomon as your Champion as you have Leopardmon as your Mega, you won't be unfairly targeted. And I'm going by the method that they always revert unless their DigiCore is destroyed, and it's more Adventure than Tamers, so when Digimon delete, it's black speckles rather than the red shower and the blue shower of absorbtion, or however that worked.
It's fine, he can. It's not like he's identical to Nekane anyway.
Also I'm done with her CS and Alphamon.

22xander said
All right... I have a bunch of work to do on it... And I understand, I just copy and pared the moves from the sites. I can get imgs, I really want to try to get in. I try my best for every to I try.

Good

22xander said
Ok, I'm going tobjsut start over, mineing this for what I need. Also, the things say death meramon is ultimate sometimes but he digivolves from blue meramon and some say it's 'perfect' level.... I don't know what that means... Be done with the human shortly, gmas

Perfect=Ultimate. Also, for purposes of clarity, the majority of Digimon that were released before... I'd say 2003, should use their English name, unless the english name is a textual abomination. As long as it makes sense, that's good, but here's the best example I can think of- the English name of Valdurmon is Varodurumon, which is a horrible enrgish misspelling, and as it's based on Baldr, Baldurmon is a more fitting name.

22xander said
God... I thought I wrote more then that. Whatever, is that all right? Or should I start another? I want to do my best to accommodate, so just tell me what I can do...

Your character's good now. It makes sense how he's an American/Japanese boy in Japan now with little other interaction. I'd like you to fill out your Digimon then, and I'll see how well you do with the characters there. And I don't mean to sound rude, but I'd suggest giving your writing a check before

[22xander]

Meramon is the name in the anime I'm going to do it. Ok.. then can I use death meramon as the ultimate?

[tobiax]

His name's always Meramon... and I just said SkullMeramon is an Ultimate. The thing is- does it make sense with Gankoomon? Well, mainly the Mega, but still...

[Silver Fox]

tobiax said
Yay! Deep sea mission anyone? Dagomon, MarineDevimon... oh, the horrors of the deep... YAS!There's a tradition in Digimon that is as follows *clears throat* "Leomon dies". I want to assure you that if you use Leomon as your Champion as you have Leopardmon as your Mega, you won't be unfairly targeted. And I'm going by the method that they always revert unless their DigiCore is destroyed, and it's more Adventure than Tamers, so when Digimon delete, it's black speckles rather than the red shower and the blue shower of absorbtion, or however that worked.It's fine, he can. It's not like he's identical to Nekane anyway.Also I'm done with her CS and Alphamon.GoodPerfect=Ultimate. Also, for purposes of clarity, the majority of Digimon that were released before... I'd say 2003, should use their English name, unless the english name is a textual abomination. As long as it makes sense, that's good, but here's the best example I can think of- the English name of Valdurmon is Varodurumon, which is a horrible enrgish misspelling, and as it's based on Baldr, Baldurmon is a more fitting name.Your character's good now. It makes sense how he's an American/Japanese boy in Japan now with little other interaction. I'd like you to fill out your Digimon then, and I'll see how well you do with the characters there. And I don't mean to sound rude, but I'd suggest giving your writing a check before

Yes, all the underwater missions.

Karn: Yaaaa knoooow how about I stay here on safe land and have a cook out. Sounds way better.

And oh you mean that trope. I wasn't planning to use Leomon no worries. Just thought you meant no one is allowed to die like Leomon or a Leomon isn't allowed to die xD I was like 'whaaaaa?'

[22xander]

Gankumon, it's better then "smokemon" which is the translation...

[tobiax]

Silver Fox said
Yes, all the underwater missions.Karn: Yaaaa knoooow how about I stay here on safe land and have a cook out. Sounds way better.And oh you mean that trope. I wasn't planning to use Leomon no worries. Just thought you meant no one is allowed to die like Leomon or a Leomon isn't allowed to die xD I was like 'whaaaaa?'

True.
::Then an Ebidramon appears::
Okay. Would you mind getting to your Digimon pretty please?
Also I'm totally expecting Karn to be not into guys at all just to make people think he's bluffing due to his androgynous nature, which I'm totally fine with btw. I mean, play him how you want, by all means. But androgynous characters are cool.

22xander said
Gankumon, it's better then "smokemon" which is the translation...

Where do you get that? Digimon Wiki says it comes from some Chinese Emperor, but I thought I saw somewhere it was something about "Rare". Although the Emperor's name he was based on(Guangwu)'s name translates to "Military Light" or something.
Unless you got it confused with Mokumon, which is literally smoke and whose name means Smokemon.