Yes. However his presence has caused a supernatural pull in the local environment (per your post), hence why Bedivere noticed his presence, yet did not address the vampire as he did with Lady Mo.Ah, sorry, I misinterpreted your post, then.
Yes. However his presence has caused a supernatural pull in the local environment (per your post), hence why Bedivere noticed his presence, yet did not address the vampire as he did with Lady Mo.Ah, sorry, I misinterpreted your post, then.
You know,i think if anyone noticed Gabe around, they'd be pretty bloody scared. It would habe to be like noticing Cain or... Jesus. ... And btw Jesus was not a vampire!He formed a cult, made them drink his blood, came back from the dead, caused others to come back to the dead, was nailed to a giant cross, and impaled with a wooden spear. I'm telling you, everything fits. Jesus was a vampire. Don't tell Kami no Kage though.
Btw, again, im dying over this awesome writing im seeing.Same. We're in the free section but we're pumping out casual / high casual worthy posts. It's pretty awesome. I feel like I'm lacking a bit, lol, but hopefully I'll be able to join y'all in paragraphs at some point.
Although you forget he did walk on water, and had a pretty good set of abs and a killer tan. Also turned water into wine, and probably turned wine into blood and hung around with loose women and tax collectors. I'm not sure...You know,i think if anyone noticed Gabe around, they'd be pretty bloody scared. It would habe to be like noticing Cain or... Jesus. ... And btw Jesus was not a vampire!He formed a cult, made them drink his blood, came back from the dead, caused others to come back to the dead, was nailed to a giant cross, and impaled with a wooden spear. I'm telling you, everything fits. Jesus was a vampire. Don't tell Kami no Kage though.
Although you forget he did walk on water, and had a pretty good set of abs and a killer tan. Also turned water into wine, and probably turned wine into blood and hung around with loose women and tax collectors. I'm not sure...Well, we have several vampires with freakier abilities, like talking to animals, in the group. Walking on water isn't all that far-fetched. Also, that wasn't wine.... And why would a vampire not hang out with loose women and tax collectors?
I say he's not a vampire, but some kind of demon king. But that's just my own opinion.Although you forget he did walk on water, and had a pretty good set of abs and a killer tan. Also turned water into wine, and probably turned wine into blood and hung around with loose women and tax collectors. I'm not sure...You know,i think if anyone noticed Gabe around, they'd be pretty bloody scared. It would habe to be like noticing Cain or... Jesus. ... And btw Jesus was not a vampire!He formed a cult, made them drink his blood, came back from the dead, caused others to come back to the dead, was nailed to a giant cross, and impaled with a wooden spear. I'm telling you, everything fits. Jesus was a vampire. Don't tell Kami no Kage though.
Same. We're in the free section but we're pumping out casual / high casual worthy posts. It's pretty awesome. I feel like I'm lacking a bit, lol, but hopefully I'll be able to join y'all in paragraphs at some point.Don't worry about making your posts too big. Just try and describe the scene. If you purposefully try and make your posts big, it's going to look inflated, which isn't the idea either.
Also, Rusalka, post in Areopolis, damnit.Yeah kinda having problems keeping up with that, plus I'm weighted down with RPs DX And despite my level of writing, I consider the quality of my posts subpar really. I can do better. >.>
The secret to making an impressive-looking post is really to describe only a few actions, then fill the rest with commentaries on what just happened prior to the post, and make internal suggestions to drive the plot for the person in the next post. If thee is any space remaining, simply add unnecessary details to various objects in the setting.Same. We're in the free section but we're pumping out casual / high casual worthy posts. It's pretty awesome. I feel like I'm lacking a bit, lol, but hopefully I'll be able to join y'all in paragraphs at some point.Don't worry about making your posts too big. Just try and describe the scene. If you purposefully try and make your posts big, it's going to look inflated, which isn't the idea either.
Don't get me wrong, I can make bigger posts, but you're right that you shouldn't force them. Hence why mine have been relatively short thus far. I'm hoping to get more inspired as we go, though, so I can match length with all y'all. (◡‿◡✿) But good advice, I'll keep it in mind.The secret to making an impressive-looking post is really to describe only a few actions, then fill the rest with commentaries on what just happened prior to the post, and make internal suggestions to drive the plot for the person in the next post. If thee is any space remaining, simply add unnecessary details to various objects in the setting.Same. We're in the free section but we're pumping out casual / high casual worthy posts. It's pretty awesome. I feel like I'm lacking a bit, lol, but hopefully I'll be able to join y'all in paragraphs at some point.Don't worry about making your posts too big. Just try and describe the scene. If you purposefully try and make your posts big, it's going to look inflated, which isn't the idea either.
Omg Jesus was a vampire.Dresden was right all along.
Yeah kinda having problems keeping up with that, plus I'm weighted down with RPs DX And despite my level of writing, I consider the quality of my posts subpar really. I can do better. >.>In that case, inform the others on the thread that you're leaving. Discontinuing a roleplay is fine, but don't make people wait for you if you have no intention of posting.
The secret to making an impressive-looking post is really to describe only a few actions, then fill the rest with commentaries on what just happened prior to the post, and make internal suggestions to drive the plot for the person in the next post. If thee is any space remaining, simply add unnecessary details to various objects in the setting.The master at work. But yes, that's a good strategy. I did try to leave big hints at plot development in my last post. I didn't do very much beautiful description, but I was in a rush. Just getting the action down had to suffice.