Now that I'm at my house I'd like to elaborate my response a bit!!!
Soh, the number one rule in this particular game is to have fun! We are first and foremost playing a game!!!
We are playing a writing game! The ability to write and it's associated skills are important! However, there are many different styles of writing and reasons to be playing the game here. Not everyone wants to stress over being a better or worse writer and just want to play. Some others might use this as a place to improve writing skills while they play.
This particular forum (RPG Guild) is split in to three 'level's of writing. If someone is not playing within the 'casual' standards, please PM me and I'll defiantly try to work it out!
If it is a problem of practicality. Such as "Hey, it wasn't clear in your post if you were talking to Moirah or Jake. Which is it?." This is absolutely something you SHOULD bring up on the OOC! Or "Hey do you have brown hair or green because my character has a phobia of green hair..." sorry weird example. In game logistics should be discussed here in the OOC!
We've been doing this already, trying to sort out who is in what cart. For alas, as hard as we try we can easily miss details or fail to write as clearly as we think we are. I admit to being guilty of this already! Sorry guys!
If it is a critique about style or skill then your treading the muddy waters a bit. The main point of the game is fun. Without knowing if the other player is open to critique or not, and without the other player knowing your particular critiquing credentials, I think it would cause waves to just 'call someone out' in the OOG. It could easily become an un-fun situation, or cause OOC strife, and is not the type of player environment I'd like to create.
If your not sure, or if it is super-bothering you, send it to me in a PM and I'll decide if it is worth bringing up to the player or not, or asking them if they would like feedback! I'm really good at saying things in a nice way! Or maybe I can help explain an unfamiliar play-style! I don't want to make an assumption, as I'm not sure what anyone thinks of one another, really.
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Play on have fun! PM me if you need! <3