[OOC] The Magic Apprentice(s)

[olcharlieboi]

In Modern times, Magic has had an impact on many people, Now a-days when a person is deemed ready by their parents they are given a choice, go to work with their parents or find something else to work for. There was tales of a Master of Magic near the town, living an a supposed 'abandoned castle' in the forest. Those who wished to become his apprentice their first challenge would be to find him, the second would be to survive reaching the castle. Only then after testing their determination would they begin their training, Training to become a master of magic. There are Tournaments that Masters put their apprentices in every few years as to both train their students, and to allow them to have rivals which would help their drive to become masters. -CS- Name: Age: (15-19) Gender: Appearance: Talent: (What kind of magic comes easier to them) Backstory: Other: (anything else you wish to add that I could of forgotten to ask for)

accepted characters

Annalyn by RomanAria Autumn by XxLyraxX Casey Ivor by booksmusicanime James Hunter by arowne97 Zedd by Slendy Izumi by GodOfChaos Ventus by ShadowVentus Solomon Roan Laes by TheHangedMan Bristlebane by Eklispe

[RomanAria]

Reserving my spot; don't have time to make a CS right now

[booksmusicanime]

Making a CS now! Will be done soon!

[XxLyraxX]

Reserving my spot, will make a cs later.

[ShadowVentus]

Count me in! Making a CS ASAP!

[olcharlieboi]

welcome everyone :)

[olcharlieboi]

arowne97, blackcat, and shadowventus, I think you all have misunderstood the idea... Talent is just the magic type, when they start learning are better at. They can learn ALL TYPES of magic, just one or two types will come easier to learn when it's time to learn it. They can't have a backstory about using magic or learning magic because this entire rp is for that purpose, when they meet their master, and he finds them determined and everything, he will unlock the magic within them with a ritual, which will allow them to control magic, but it wont be immediately they will have to learn to control the magic, all he did was unlock the path for it. so basically none of them can do anything when it comes to magic until after he unlocks the path for the magic to go through them. booksmusicanime been a while I believe lol, your and XxLyraxX's characters are accepted, they follow the guideline of the rp I wanted. though I will say booksmusicanime, please reread your talent.. it's contradicting itself lol. saying her talent is fire type magics and then saying their weaker than her fire magics..... kind of contradicting from what I read lol. slendy I am bit confused on yours, mainly because of how it's stated including with 'Other'. I can understand his will be good at magic that involves bending space, aka teleportation, and other magics related to bending space, which there isn't much. Though the thing in 'other' sounds like a magical item aka the scarf, otherwise it couldn't float around and grab things. so over all arowne97: Denied please rework blackcat: denied please rework shadowventus: denied please rework booksmusicanime: accepted though take a look at your talent, unless i'm just confused lol. XxLyraxX: accepted. slendy: unknown

[GodOfChaos]

Sorry I am late. Is there still room?

[olcharlieboi]

yes there is still room GodOfChaos, I have not set a person limit as of yet so your welcome to make a character.

[arowne97]

I edited my CS.

[olcharlieboi]

good work arowne97 good changes, accepted. RomanAria yours also works so accepted. i'll edit first post to state all accepted characters for easy notice.

[ShadowVentus]

I've edited my CS, but have yet to post the edited version. I'll hopefully have it up by this evening.

[booksmusicanime]

I did edit my talent.

[Slendy]

Could he just wear the scarf and when his powers are awakened he would learn how to bind and use the scarf as a magical weapon.

[olcharlieboi]

I still am confused cause it still contradicts itself booksmusicanime, infact it looks the same as it was so... not sure if it saved. alright shadow when I see it i'll say if it's alright or not. well that would be advance type magic, he could ask their master to enchant it for him, sense it would be a good ways before he could start learning that type of magic.

[Slendy]

I'd be ok with that.

[olcharlieboi]

GodOfChaos you may of made the same error that three others have done, Talent is simply what they will learn easier than other magic. They do not know it already, they will learn it eventually in roleplay after meeting their master, and going through other training related things first, not to mention unlocking the power to even attempt to use magic to begin with. You make it sound like he can already control earth by how you stated it in his 'talent' section, when he shouldn't be able to. He'll learn the magic element of earth, plus possible the others and every other kind of magic in roleplay depending how long this rp lasts will determine how much they will end up learning before the end.

[booksmusicanime]

Welp crap I'll go change it again It editied. She can use fire magic and any other kind but the any other is very weak compared to her fire magic.

[GodOfChaos]

Alright, so I just said that he has the power deep within him. He doesn't know it though.

[olcharlieboi]

good work GodOfChaos hm.... one thing that could fix this kind of thing if you all just said the type of magic lol instead of putting multiple things. i'll use booksmusicanime's as an example, 'She can cast spells for fire and anything relating to fire but they are significantly weaker than her fire spells' it would be easier just to put 'Fire Magic' sense that gets the point across fairly simply and doesn't confuse the heck out of me or make it sound wrong by the way it's put... Because they will learn all kinds of magic, All elements the 4 basic and the extended elements.. they will learn to enchant, they will learn to cast portal spells, they'll learn to heal, they'll learn everything related to magic besides maybe 1 or 2 types (that could count as forbidden magic) in the roleplay.... regardless of their talent, sense talent is just what comes easier and faster to them when learning to use and cast it. That's just something that would help when it comes to that. either way we have like 4 or 5 accepted characters now, which is good, we may get into the rp with this, unknown how long the rp will last lol, I hope a while. i'll wait maybe 1 more day for anyone else to fix up their things or any others to join then i'll start off the IC for everyone to start posting.