[OOC] Fourth Dimension

[PharaohAtem]

oh ok then so no martial arts training? because I was going to have my Dr guy tai chi training mainly for spiritual aspects how it can extend life and such and have him use that knowledge with his medical background to allow him use his energy abilities help heal people and then the way he would fight is with his hands and feet.

[Teknonick]

I'm barfing these two here so I'm not caught breaking my own rules.

Kassy

Username: Teknonick | Character Name: Kassy Jenica Taiyō | Character Age: 21 | Character Gender: Female Appearance:

Kassy

She is the woman on the left.

Kassy is 5'0", and is very underweight. She wears a two-part blue dress, an underpart that is a very dark blue, while the over-part is a much lighter color. She wears a necklace with a small helpless dragon on it around her neck. Her hair color is naturally blond, and her eye color is naturally blue. Due to her Fourth Dimensional control over Energy, her eyes turn Purple when she is in control of her powers. Fourth Dimensional Power: Energy. Bio: Kassy is a homeless girl, and without parents. Her parents died after she was born, due to an energy surge within her mother. The doctors in the room were badly injured, but the mother and husband were killed by the outburst of power. Luckily for Kassy, her mother was capable of controlling her powers enough to save her from the destruction. Kassy grew up without parents, moving from foster home to foster home throughout Tyoko Japan. Sadly, girls were almost never picked in Japan, except for people visiting from other countries. The day Kassy was chosen by a nice couple from America, she had an energy outburst. Her magical powers were strong enough to hurt her new mother and father, who disowned her after the attack. On top of the injury, Kassy was injured as well, so badly as to send her into a coma for many years. She has been in her coma since then, and has protected herself from being disconnected with her magic. Anyone who attempted was hurt by her magic, allowing her to live long enough until one day she could wake back up in the hospital. After Kassy left the hospital, she was a full-grown adult. She had no idea what to do with herself, since she couldn't go back to the orphanage. She didn't know how to get a job, or where to live. She's wandered the streets, taking what she absolutely needs, but never trying to hurt people. It hasn't worked well for her, as she is now wanted by the police. She isn't very keen on the idea of going to jail, and has even defended herself from them once, avoiding the cops and injuring several.

Naoto

Username: Teknonick | Character Name: Naoto Tsuyo-sa Taiyō | Character Age: 23 | Character Gender: Male Appearance: Naoto is 5'8", and weighs a healthy weight. He has strong features, though not pretty by most Japanese standards. He usually wears a black t-shirt, with a thick heavy opened dark grey jacket over top. He usually wears baggy jeans and a belt. His shoes are designed for running in for long distances, and are a very dark color. His hair color is black, and his eyes are a dark hazel. He has a big black dragon necklace around his neck. Fourth Dimensional Power: Sight. Bio: Naoto is a police officer in Tyoko Japan. He's gone from odd-job, to odd-job, most of his life. But he eventually found himself liking the law and helping keep order. His two twin sisters are both proud of him, and always tease him about how they never thought he would get the job. His older twin sister works as a politician, while his younger works at a local zoo. The three of them live together in a big apartment they have all worked together to afford. The three of them are all very close to each other, and Naoto sees it as his job to protect his two sisters at all cost. Naoto is usually a good cop, doing his duty, following his orders, and not arguing with his superiors. He is well known for his use over his ability, using it to it's full potential to help solve crimes. He has been waiting for a promotion for weeks now, and was recently sent on the case of a homeless girl who had defended herself against arrest. He has no idea who she is, but he does have a wanted poster of her. Little does he know he's hunting his own cousin, who is willing to attack him, even if he isn't willing to attack her.

Okay myself and Co-GMs, let's get cracking! Following the rules, all three of us will fully examine each character app. If there is an issue, we point it out, and let them fix it until they can be accepted... unless the entire character is an issue, then they will have to make another character. Then, all three of us will vote like on American Idle, and only when all three of us accept an app, will they be allowed in the Characters section, and be allowed to post again.

[RawrgnatheBloodfridge]

Oh snap, we're going this far. Is bias towards my own creation accepted? XD No. Alright, I'll be just as hard on my own babies as the rest of you.

Kurano Tanaka

Kurano Tanaka Username: RawrgnatheBloodfridge | Character Name: Kurano Tanaka | Character Age: 20 | Character Gender: Male Appearance:

Kurano

Kurano is 5'6" tall, and generally wears the vest, tie, and white button-up shirt with black pants get-up. His eye color is brown, and hair generally disheveled. He normally wears grey tied shoes, and wears a watch with constant reminders on study, food, and class times routinely sounding off. His eyes normally have dark shadows under them from the constant nights he spends staying up to study. Fourth Dimensional Power: Sound. Not unlocked all of his powers. Bio: Kurano is a college law student, attending Waseda University, a very prestigious and highly respectable University within the Shinjuku Tokyo region. Kurano was gifted the dimensional power of sound inherited from his mother. His parents weren't the wealthiest, leading him to live a more modest lifestyle growing up. His conflicts with the snobs at Waseda tend to happen often. He's fairly hard-working and serious, shown through his intensive studies into graduating as quickly as possible and becoming a lawyer. Though, growing up in a humble family has given him a chance to realize just how gifted he truly is. Being a student at Waseda caused him and his family to be a target of the local mob, and he's usually pestered often from his usual route between his classes and his apartment. Kurano genuinely tries his hardest to be nice to others, though normally ends up being rude in some way. He uses his power with as much responsibility as possible, trying to hone it so that he could hear an approaching danger much easier. Most of Kurano's life was spent in the shadow of his uncle, a successful businessman who would stop at nothing to make sure Kurano was set in life, him not ever having a child and likely will never have the possibility either. Kurano was trained in various important aspects of what's needed to "make it" in life. Coercion, looks, and most importantly, how to make money. He very normally conflicted with his uncle, only wanting to inherit the family business. He only recently took up smoking, as a way to escape the constant stress of the world and classes. He had heard recently that those with the power of taste could easily develop fourth dimensional toe cheese.

Minami Shiroka

Minami Shiroka Username: RawrgnatheBloodfridge | Character's Name: Minami Shiroka | Character's Age: 11 | Character Gender: Female Appearance:

My Hider

Minami has orange dyed hair, with her natural hair color being a raven black. She normally keeps her hair in a twin-tails look with big clips to hold them there. Minami is 4'8" tall, and has an almost orange glow in her light brown colored eyes. She normally likes to wear the color yellow or orange to complement her hair and eye colors. Though, rarely she'll go as far as to wear brown on occasions. She wears a yellow dress shirt, and orange capris when not attending school. Fourth Dimensional Power: Smell. Really sucks when that fourth dimensional toe jam comes into effect. Has not earned all of her powers yet. Bio: Minami is a recent runaway. Her parents were neglectful with a step-father and mother, and had no friends in school due to the fact that she was more reserved than others, as well as constantly being teased over what she wore and what she's done. She got fed up with it all, and figured that her chances of surviving in the city weren't all that bad. Only three weeks into her runaway plan from Osaka and her arduous journey, she finally got to Tokyo, the city of dreams, as she was told by her deceased father. There, she would be able to survive amongst the countless amounts of other homeless people strewn about the slums. Minami was always ridiculed for being "too nice, and too trusting." Minami never once deserved the hate she recieved, it made her that much more tempted to escape from Osaka. Minami always attempted to be as kind as possible in the face of her aggressors, not giving in until the day she snapped and ran away. She had an extreme amount of perseverance, always pushing for her dreams no matter how impossible they seemed. Her power, that she inherited from her biological father, always came in handy for her when helping her mother to cook. Though, her life took a downhill turn once her father died and a step-dad took his place. The man constantly smoked, and would verbally abuse her and her mother. Eventually, Minami's mom stopped caring about her, and so did her father. Minami's only friends moved out prior to all of this, and then she experienced an entirely new feeling. Loneliness. Never before had she ever felt alone. It scared Minami to no end, being persecuted, alone, and sad. There was no place for her in her home town, and decided that Tokyo would accept her better than this place had. She would have to learn how to scrounge for food, and sift through the dirty rivers for water. Her personality always stayed positive, however. She knew that braving the tough world be better than being alone until the day that she died. Minami had that amount of common sense at the least. She packed as much food as she could from the kitchen while her parents were at work, and traveled. Now in the prophetic city she was told about, her only wonder was what she needed to do now to find friends.

[PharaohAtem]

Hider

Username: PharaohAtem Character Name: Rose Barker Character Age: 19 Character Gender: Female Appearance: this is her hunting gear but she will start wearing it on a regular basis when the Fourth Dimensional creatures attack. for now she wears black steal toecap boots, dark blue jeans, black leather jacket and a blue tank top hight 5'4 Fourth Dimensional Power: Sound, she has developed her sound abilities to some degree though her hobbies and though growing up in London and learning to block out unwanted noise. Bio: Roses farther joined the military with his brother the two spent many years serving their country Roses farther became a demolitions expert while her uncle was a skilled sharp shooter. When Roses mother got sick with cancer her farther left the military to take care of his wife and child he put the he learnt in military to work by getting a job demolishing buildings. Roses uncle retired from military years later he built a cottage in the woods and lives a quite life as a hunter he visits his brother and nice on holidays and birthdays and Rose spends the weekends with him. Rose inherited her hearing powers from her father, and growing up in a city with her hearing she got a lot of headaches until her father taught her how to focus her hearing and block out unnecessary and other wise unwanted sounds by focusing her hearing on spastic sounds. Rose also took after her father in many other ways. Like her father she could be stubborn and thick headed but she also inherited some of his better traits like his focus and determination and growing she was always a bit of a tom boy growing up and as a result she was always bullied but she never backed down even when fight older boys this led to her getting in many fights, Because of this her farther taught military hand to hand combat but fighting and she got pretty good at, but she soon found out that fighting was not her only interest and her father was not the only one to teach her something. Rose spent every other weekend with her uncle she loved the tranquil and relaxing sound of the woods of the woods. When Rose was 13 he started to take her hunting with him as a way to hone even more. Rose didn't enjoy at fist because she felt a little guilty killing defenceless animals but he explained that it was the natural order of things and that the animals that they hunt have had a much better life then the ones she was use to eating although this explanation did not make her feel any better she decided to give it a try and after she got used to the killing she did start to enjoy it and even started to set traps for her pray. On her 18th birthday her uncle got her a pet dog who she named Spike witch she decided to train it as a blood hound to help her rack her pray she even want as far as to give the dog the Fourth Dimensional treatment Spike ended it getting the power of smell witch was perfect for the purpose she was training him for. From the age of 8 Rose found out she had a talent for music she was able to learn to play any instrument just by playing around with it and what actions make each note. Rose then found out she could copy songs she had herd perfectly a she loved the sounds she could make and by the time she was 13 she could right her own songs. Around this time Rose began to notice her and her farther where not spading as much time together as she would have liked with school, music, and her weekends with her uncle and the fact he worked a lot to pay the bills they where just to busy to spend a lot of quality time together in fact for a little while the only time they would see each other was at meal time and when they trained together. Rose decided to took an interest in her fathers work and although this was mainly a way for her to spend more time with him she found it fascinating just seeing that kind of destructive force being used to employed buildings and the sounds of multiple explosions and the collapsing building. she and herd so much from those explosions after that Rose began taking more of an interest in her fathers work and planed to follow in his footsteps. Rose was not grate in high school this was not because she was stupid far from it she was quite intelligent but she had to many hobbies and interests and did not have much time to study but what she did have was focus and a plan for her future. Rose already knew what career she wanted so when she did have the time to study she neglected any subject that was not necessary for her chosen career. because of this she did very well in maths, science and engineering although with science she focused mainly on chemistry. After high school she look for and applied to collage with a good engineering program she check all the best collages from around the world the best collage that accepted her was in Japan she decided to move their to get the best education possible. In collage she continued to focus her filed of study to maths, science and engineering. she has become quite skilled at identifying the structural week points of any building simply by having a look around it. Hunting Gear: Small Crossbow and two sets of retractable clews that come out of her two gauntlets mainly used for skinning and gutting pray. and small pouch that she carries a few bandages, food, water and a box of matches. Username: PharaohAtem Character Name: Alex Hawking Character Age: 21 Character Gender: Male Appearance: hight 5'6 Fourth Dimensional Power: Sight has learnt some of his power but not all. Bio: Alex was born into a wealthy home and integrated his abilities from his mother sent to the best privet schools he sowed high a level of intelligence for his age all throughout his life he was growing up he spent most of his time indoors studying. When he wasn't studding he would read science and engineering magazines. When Alex was 9 he started taking apart microwaves, refrigerators, televisions ext just and putting them back to gather to get a better idea of how they worked. When the time he was 10 he started building things like computers and game consoles. When he was 13 he was able to upgrade and reprogram most tech you would find around your basic home the most impressive being cars. When he was 15 he began working on designs for new tech. at 18 his parents had a lab built for him and he started inventing all kinds of things like hover boards and clocking tech. when he was 20 his parents where attacked and killed by 4D monsters ever since then he began working on weapons to fight them now he has finally finished a combat suit that enhances the wearers speed and agility and laser guns that can be set to fire blast of energy stun any living thing for our would but has no effect on 4D monsters, Set to fire out highly focused busts of radiation like microwaves to heat up and set thing on fire, Set to fire live laser beams that can kill most living things in our would witch can injurer 4D monsters and finally they can be set to fire a beam of energy that only harms the 4D monsters and has no effect on anything else. Alex is a lab rat though and though has little experience outside his lab however he plans to attend the Fourth Dimensional 48th Anniversary Convention to show his prototypes knowing they could help military solders fight back against the 4D monsters. Growing up Alex was always top of his class but he was never arrogant about it or though he was better then anyone else in fact he tended to down play his intelligences by using smaller words instead of using unnecessarily long contemplated words. Alex was very sociable at school joining the chest club and science club. making a number of fiends. but after his parents died he began working a lot more spending every weekend lock in his lab focused on building weapons that could kill the monsters that killed them and only seeing his friends at school. (do I really have to Mention the Fourth Dimensional Toe Cheese to be accepted! that stuff sinks?)

[RawrgnatheBloodfridge]

Alright, so do we have a checklist of what we need? Or are we just going to be using the rules as our checklist? Alright, so Pharaoh, the first thing you need to fix is the image size. Please put the really huge images into a hider. Otherwise you will be in direct conflict with application rule #5, and we cannot accept you. Am I the only one trying to do these right now, or are you doing this silently?

[Teknonick]

The rules as our checklist. Okay, a few things I'd like to say.... What is our definition of 'no weapons' or 'fighting'? Can our characters have had fighting skills, but forgot? Or have gotten into fights? Are they allowed to be trained in a weapon skill, but not own one? Are we counting our powers as 'weapons', or how do we handle them? I'm questing my own characters, mainly because Kassy has had to defend herself. Naoto, being a cop, has had training, and always carries a pistol on him. Not to mention both characters have gotten into a lot of fights. Ragna, your characters appear to have no problems. Kurano has had 'mob issues' before, but there are no mentions of him actually fighting back, or having anything that would come close to conflicting with the rules. Minami hasn't had any violence at all in her life. Kurano: 1/3 Yes. 0/3 No. 1/3 Votes so far. Minami: 1/3 Yes. 0/3 No. 1/3 Votes so far.

[Unraveller]

Kristof

Username: Unraveller | Character Name: Kristof Brandt | Character Age: 37 Years Old | Character Gender: Male Appearance: Kristof is quite a muscular man of German descent, he stands at a sizable 6'1" and appears as a quite imposing man due to such however, the large man's face always has a kind gesture a heart smile and a warm and welcoming demeanor, a dark brown beard that is kept rather short is the only bit of hair to be found upon his head. It is easy to tell that the man had never worked an easy day in his life, for his body seems sculpted magnificently. Fourth Dimensional Powers: Smell and Taste. Perhaps useless separate, however, when combined one can enjoy grandiose meals such as Fourth Dimensional Toe Cheese Bio: Kristof Brandt, a man of raw physical might and staunch personality. For as long as he could remember Kristof has been a laborer, working one menial job to the next essentially picking things up and putting them somewhere else. In time he became quite good at such physical labor. For years Kristof lived like a dog under a strict regime from his perfectionist family who constantly doubted the man for his lifestyle. Sure, he was unlike them and all of their college degrees, but he had found a different kind of perfection, not of mind, but of body, of soul. Eventually Kristof came to meet a woman, one who enthralled him so as to spirit him away from the droll life once lived. The woman, a ringleader for a famous circus that traveled the world far and wide, offered Kristof the position of a strongman. Without a single ounce of doubt, he accepted, and was welcomed with open arms. After years of some of the most rewarding work and travel that Kristof had ever had the pleasure of committing to the pair married, a ringleader and a strongman. Unfortunately what seemed like a most beautiful future quickly became horrid. As shortly after Kristof's wife fell gravely ill never to recover. A lingering depression came over the man, he felt broken, hollow, empty. A final show was booked for Tokyo Japan, Kristof had known of numerous new technologies sprouting up, in fact, during the circus's last visit to Japan his wife somehow convinced him to go through with a procedure. Gaining the ability of smell and taste allowed him to enjoy countless meals as if even dog food were a fine cuisine, of course, those were more peaceful times. Quickly brushing up on his linguistical skills the strongman headed out with the circus for a final act in memorial to his wife. Kristof eventually came to realize that his wife would not want him to endlessly mourn her death, but rather celebrate her life, a resurgence of emotion and memories came to him as he preformed his final act in front of a grand audience. Kristof is a man among men, who often lets his demeanor and muscular fortitude do the talking for him, he has the capabilities for fine arts and strives to help everyone around him reach a certain perfection in at least one trait. A softhearted and kind soul he does not hesitate to place himself in danger's way if it means the protection of someone close to him.

Lets see what we can see. This time there will be no mercy!

[Teknonick]

Okay, here we go again. Kristof isn't a violent person, has no weapons, and follows all the rules. BUT. Are his muscles and shear size an issue? I personally love this character. But, are the rules so thin and undefined that I would have to deny him, even though he isn't an issue outside the rules? And, are his muscles considered to be part of the rules? I just noticed. Both of my character names line up. Both of Ragna's line up. Both of Pharoh's line up. Undecided: Kassy: 0/3 Yes. 0/3 No. 0/3 Votes so far. Naoto: 0/3 Yes. 0/3 No. 0/3 Votes so far. Kristof: 0/3 Yes. 0/3 No. 0/3 Votes so far. In Progress: Kurano: 1/3 Yes. 0/3 No. 1/3 Votes so far. Minami: 1/3 Yes. 0/3 No. 1/3 Votes so far. Denied: Rose: 0/3 Yes. 2/3 No. 2/3 Votes so far. Alex: 0/3 Yes. 2/3 No. 2/3 Votes so far. Accepted:

[RawrgnatheBloodfridge]

I'll just be editing this post with all of my app acceptations. With Kurano, his "mob issues" have never really been fights, but he has been beaten up by them and lost every time. He would loan money and not have enough to pay back, that sort of stuff. The only violence Minami's suffered would probably be verbal abuse if that counts as violence. Personally, my characters don't break any of the rules from what I see, and they feel enough like characters to be accepted. With the rules on fighting, it's that they couldn't have been trained by professionals how to fight, nor be fighting prodigy's. If they're scrappy back alley fighters, that's much more acceptable. They could have gotten into fights or scraps and won, but if they clearly are all powerful beings that can win ten on one fights without breaking a sweat, or people with over one hundred confirmed kills or something that's no good. I would allow people who know how to fight, but are mostly self-taught and don't have Rocky Balboa's insane amount of prowess. If they could beat up the biggest kid on their street, that's okay. If they beat the world champion boxer, that's not. Rocky was self-taught for the most part, but he had the drive and motivation clearly put out for us to see. With Rose, we haven't exactly seen her use any specific "Hunter" skills yet, so we don't know whether she is insanely OP or balanced.

Kristoff

For Kristof, his bio is near perfection, and he really doesn't violate any rules in most regards but one. That is the fact that because he's a strongman, he will be inherently strong. Whether it's suplexing a train strong, or just lifting a 400 lb. weight strong makes a difference. I count him as accepted so long as his strength has clearly set limits, and you don't change those limits whenever you want them to fit the occasion.

Kassy

Kassy is the only one of Tek's two apps that needs a bit more stuff clarified in the bio, such as how many years was she in a coma? How long has she been out of it? How did she react to coming out of a coma? Because she's been gone a while, what is her mental age? Does she act like whatever she was when she was put into a coma, or did she just suddenly mature once she had to take to the streets? These are all minor things really that can be roleplayed out though.

So for me right now it goes. Kurano - accepted Minami - accepted Kristof - accepted Naoto - Accepted Kassy - accepted, would be nice if some things in the bio were a bit more explained. Rose - Denied Alex - Denied The One's Characters - Denied Pharaoh has yet to comply to application rule 5 for me to try and accept or deny. The One has not done anything yet regarding changes, and must first delete characters off of the character's tab and post them here. Should we have a time limit on fixing characters, and notify those people who have not done it yet, and tell them about the time limit? Because the only two left are Pharaoh and The One for me. I say no to both the Pharaoh's and The One's until certain rules are adhered to.

[Unraveller]

Let us look at Kassy here, a few questions come to my mind. First of, what kind of people just disown a child whom they took into foster care for something she couldn't control? Despicable. Now, I don't know too much about fourth dimensional powers, but I would consider it a science! Not, "magic" And as an added, how does Kassy protect herself during this coma? Essentially she became unconscious, and was moved to a hospital where she spent an arbitrary number of years there, her emotional growth and maturity would likely be stunted from such an occurrence. What made her interested in this convention? ^ Those were really cherry picked by the way. As for Naoto, I think everything appears in order for him. And I assume that he took part in a procedure in order to gain his power. One thing that needs to be stated, there should certainly be a logical reason for every single character to be where they are, and doing what they are doing. Plain and simple. I think, in terms of Kristof's muscles, it would be unfair to deny. The problem would be that, are we to say that there are no men like Kristof? Even stronger still, I'd say that a relevant back story must explain any extraordinary talents or abilities. The bottom line is logical sense.

[Unraveller]

I would allow people who know how to fight, but are mostly self-taught and don't have Rocky Balboa's insane amount of prowess. If they could beat up the biggest kid on their street, that's okay. If they beat the world champion boxer, that's not. For Kristof, his bio is near perfection, and he really doesn't violate any rules in most regards but one. That is the fact that because he's a strongman, he will be inherently strong. Whether it's suplexing a train strong, or just lifting a 400 lb. weight strong makes a difference. I count him as accepted so long as his strength has clearly set limits, and you don't change those limits whenever you want them to fit the occasion.

@RawrgnatheBloodfridge

And that is certainly part of it, Kristof has no fighting prowess, no talent in the field to speak of, in fact, it is a likely guess that he hasn't been in a fight his entire life. Does that rule out the idea that he can be very fit? I think not. And do not worry, the whole suplexing a train thing was facetious, which I'm sure you could tell. Lets talk about Minami for a moment. I get her story, and it all is well put. But, and it may just be my opinion, I find it a bit difficult to understand such young characters. She ran away from an abusive home, understandable. I'm curious though, has she simply wandered into the convention? Was this her first day away, or has she been living in such a way for a while, in that case, I'm surprised nothing horribly advantageous has happened to her. And, I'm not sure how much an eleven year old would understand about such a life. It almost saddens me to think that she could die of starvation. That is more than a nit pick with some questions I'm interested in the answers to. As for Kurano, I assumed that he simply is interested in the future of such technology, and seeing as he inherited the power of sound he is probably curious, that is a likely reason for anyone to want to go to the convention. Of course that is just speculation.

[Teknonick]

Right Ragna. That sounds about right. YES fighting, but no 100 confirmed kill shnaz. The way you've explained it makes perfect sense. So, then, here's a few more things. Naoto is professionally trained as a cop... but is that bad? Kassy has gotten into situations, but isn't trained... she's more lucky than anything. In that case, Rose is self taught, and weapon-wise doesn't appear to be breaking the rules in that respect. Though, technically she only has one paragraph written for her character, since everything is all jumbled together. Alex's character appears to have a huge hatred towards the monsters, and is creating weapons and putting all of his knowledge specifically towards fighting these beasts. Plus he has weapons and gear. Now, refreshed the page and read Unraveller's post. "First of, what kind of people just disown a child whom they took into foster care for something she couldn't control? Despicable." Bloody evil people mind you. Plus, a lot of people in Japan disown children just because they're girls. As for Kassy's powers, I'm seeing what you mean. How she protected herself? I was kind of thinking it was her own body acting in ways, like being prodded, or unplugged would set off her powers since her body would know she was being 'shut off'. She did become unconscious, and she has been stunted in those respects. Though, I honestly forgot about that happening to her until I reposted her app... which is why she may have acted more mature when I RPed her, because I forgot right after I made her. xD. Interested? That was posted IC. She was hungry, and decided she couldn't find food anywhere else. Being as young as she is, she thought she might be able to outsmart the cops and get some food before she was caught, then slip away. As for Naoto, IDK how he got his powers. Either inherited from his parents, or through the procedure. I don't think that part really matters though. In my own opinion of course. Muscles!? No one in our world has muscles! Perfect! We are defining rules here people. No fighting prowess, or talent, I believe is enough for him to be acceptable with such muscles. Plus, it's not nearly as OP as anything else could be. Back to Naoto. He has a gun! And training! I'm not sure about him anymore. Though, you did say if they were explained in a logical sense (And still not being OVERLY powerful), it would be okay, which I agree with. Read what Ragna just edited. Edit wars. Yes, I understand. I will edit the bio to explain more of these questions, as I do believe they are important. I might have thought of them, but never explained them, but everyone needs to be clear of what to expect from her. Plus, after writing it, it will help me RP her more clearly in the future. *Notices another edit from Ragna* Perhaps they should have a limit. I'm not sure when though. It would have to either be tonight... which is a bit short... or sometime later tomorrow. I wouldn't be home until after 3PM tomorrow though, as I have flights. Undecided: In Progress: Kurano: 2/3 Yes. 0/3 No. 1/3 Votes so far. (Tek/Ragna say Yes.) Minami: 2/3 Yes. 0/3 No. 1/3 Votes so far. (Tek/Ragna say Yes.) Kassy: 2/3 Yes. 0/3 No. 2/3 Votes so far. (Tek/Ragna say Yes. Ragna Iffy so far.) Naoto: 2/3 Yes. 0/3 No. 2/3 Votes so far. (Tek/Ragna say Yes.) Denied: Rose: 0/3 Yes. 1/3 No. 1/3 Votes so far. (Tek says No, because of the rule violation) Alex: 0/3 Yes. 1/3 No. 1/3 Votes so far. (Tek says No, because of the rule violation) Accepted: Kristof: 3/3 Yes. 0/3 No. 3/3 Votes so far. (Tek/Ragna/Unraveller say Yes.) (Nos can change to yeses.) ^^^ .ADDITIONS. ^^^

[RawrgnatheBloodfridge]

I'll still only be editing that post up there for acceptations unless this moves onto another page. So check up there for my opinions. Also, the limit for today works so long as we notify them through PM. That way we can fairly say whether they're accepted or not.

[Unraveller]

After these edits I'd like to change the list to something like this. I shall look over Rose and get back to you. About Naoto, we have to keep in mind, it makes perfect sense for the man to be strongly built. He is in fact a police man, thus a gun isn't very far fetched either. However I seriously doubt that police training includes the fourth dimensional beasts. And a dinky handgun? What is that really gonna do? Which brings me to something else, I'd like to hear more about the beasts. How long have they been appearing for? Perhaps a little exposition into their origin, save the really juicy stuff for us to learn IC though! I'm sorry, what with your poor writing skills it is rather hard to read most of your walls of text. Pharaoh, do you think you could put more effort into this respect? Communication is number one here, and if I can't understand exactly what you are trying to say then a ton of important details can be lost. In Progress: Minami: 2/3 Yes. 0/3 No. 2/3 Votes so far. (Tek/Ragna say Yes.) I'll change mine to yes after I hear a little more insight as to her character and such. Denied: Rose: 0/3 Yes. 1/3 No. 1/3 Votes so far. (Tek says No, because of the rule violation) Alex: 0/3 Yes. 1/3 No. 1/3 Votes so far. (Tek says No, because of the rule violation) Accepted: Kristof: 3/3 Yes. 0/3 No. 3/3 Votes so far. (Tek/Ragna/Unraveller say Yes.) Kurano: 3/3 Yes. 0/3 No. 3/3 Votes so far. (Tek/Ragna/Unraveller say Yes.) Kassy: 3/3 Yes. 0/3 No. 3/3 Votes so far. (Tek/Ragna/Unraveller say Yes.) Naoto: 3/3 Yes. 0/3 No. 3/3 Votes so far. (Tek/Ragna/Unraveller say Yes.)

[RawrgnatheBloodfridge]

Alright, so what do you want to know about Minami? Color of her underwear, how she plays hopscotch, why she was ridiculed?

[Teknonick]

Here are the apps again, with the changes made. I just noticed it specified American couple... who where nice... oops. I've bolded the changes done to KASSY's bio.

Kassy

Username: Teknonick | Character Name: Kassy Jenica Taiyō | Character Age: 21 | Character Gender: Female Appearance:

Kassy

She is the woman on the left.

Kassy is 5'0", and is very underweight. She wears a two-part blue dress, an underpart that is a very dark blue, while the over-part is a much lighter color. She wears a necklace with a small helpless dragon on it around her neck. Her hair color is naturally blond, and her eye color is naturally blue. Due to her Fourth Dimensional control over Energy, her eyes turn Purple when she is in control of her powers. Fourth Dimensional Power: Energy. Bio: Kassy is a homeless girl, and without parents. Her parents died after she was born, due to an energy surge within her mother. The doctors in the room were badly injured, but the mother and husband were killed by the outburst of power. Luckily for Kassy, her mother was capable of controlling her powers enough to save her from the destruction. Kassy grew up without parents, moving from foster home to foster home throughout Tyoko Japan. Sadly, girls were almost never picked in Japan, except for people visiting from other countries. The day Kassy was chosen by a seemingly nice couple, she had an energy outburst. Her magical powers were strong enough to hurt her new mother and father, who disowned her after the attack. Kassy was injured as well, so badly as to send her into a coma for many years. During the time she was in her coma, she has protected herself from being disconnected with her energy powers. Her control over her fourth dimensional powers seemed to make her body aware of her surroundings, even in the coma, allowing it to protect itself. Kassy had first entered the coma on her birthday, when she was eleven. She came out of it on her twenty first birthday. Her memories remain intact before the coma, but all events during she cannot remember. She acts like an eleven year old, though has the body of an adult. After Kassy left the hospital she had no idea what to do with herself, since she couldn't go back to the orphanage. She didn't know how to get a job, or where to live. She's wandered the streets, taking what she absolutely needs, but never trying to hurt people. It hasn't worked well for her, as she is now wanted by the police. She isn't very keen on the idea of going to jail, and has even defended herself from them at least once.

Naoto

Username: Teknonick | Character Name: Naoto Tsuyo-sa Taiyō | Character Age: 23 | Character Gender: Male Appearance: Naoto is 5'8", and weighs a healthy weight. He has strong features, though not pretty by most Japanese standards. He usually wears a black t-shirt, with a thick heavy opened dark grey jacket over top. He usually wears baggy jeans and a belt. His shoes are designed for running in for long distances, and are a very dark color. His hair color is black, and his eyes are a dark hazel. He has a big black dragon necklace around his neck. Fourth Dimensional Power: Sight. Bio: Naoto is a police officer in Tyoko Japan. He's gone from odd-job, to odd-job, most of his life. But he eventually found himself liking the law and helping keep order. His two twin sisters are both proud of him, and always tease him about how they never thought he would get the job. His older twin sister works as a politician, while his younger works at a local zoo. The three of them live together in a big apartment they have all worked together to afford. The three of them are all very close to each other, and Naoto sees it as his job to protect his two sisters at all cost. Naoto is usually a good cop, doing his duty, following his orders, and not arguing with his superiors. He is well known for his use over his ability, using it to it's full potential to help solve crimes. He has been waiting for a promotion for weeks now, and was recently sent on the case of a homeless girl who had defended herself against arrest. He has no idea who she is, but he does have a wanted poster of her. Little does he know he's hunting his own cousin, who is willing to attack him, even if he isn't willing to attack her.

Alright, so what do you want to know about Minami? Color of her underwear, how she plays hopscotch, why she was ridiculed?

@RawrgnatheBloodfridge

I think that was a mistake. I think he meant Rose... at least that's what I hope me meant. If he points something else out though, I'd like to hear.

[RawrgnatheBloodfridge]

I think that was a mistake. I think he meant Rose... at least that's what I hope me meant. If he points something else out though, I'd like to hear.

@Teknonick

Me too, it would be nice to know if I did something wrong with Minami. I feel like Lavulman right now. XD With Pharaoh, when reading his bio, I thought it was a work in progress and didn't mind the punctuation mistakes or grammar problems because I thought he was going to revise it. When he got to actually posting though that's when I said "okay, we might need to address this if it gets bad to the point where I seriously misinterpret a word.

[Unraveller]

Alright, so what do you want to know about Minami? Color of her underwear, how she plays hopscotch, why she was ridiculed?

@RawrgnatheBloodfridge

Lets talk about Minami for a moment. I get her story, and it all is well put. But, and it may just be my opinion, I find it a bit difficult to understand such young characters. She ran away from an abusive home, understandable. I'm curious though, has she simply wandered into the convention? Was this her first day away, or has she been living in such a way for a while, in that case, I'm surprised nothing horribly advantageous has happened to her. And, I'm not sure how much an eleven year old would understand about such a life. It almost saddens me to think that she could die of starvation. I might not have spoken in a complete way, but something along the lines of, did she wander in this convention simply because she was hungry, like Kassy had?

[Teknonick]

Which brings me to something else, I'd like to hear more about the beasts. How long have they been appearing for? Perhaps a little exposition into their origin, save the really juicy stuff for us to learn IC though!

@Unraveller

Right! Derp! I thought I've explained that! Of course, here's the key word: Thought. I love learning through IC, but things that have already happened are really important. I actually meant to have a convention stand talking about what they already know about them... but somehow that must have been missed. They have been appearing for most of the time the technology has been invented. No right away, but pretty soon after it's discovery, as the entire globe flocked like gnats (Is that a saying?) to use this new technology. They seemed to slowly start appearing after people messed with their powers. Although the exact locations appeared to be random, they actually happen because of the powers, and mostly where there are massive usage involving these powers. So, for how long? I'd think about forty years. Where? Anywhere people have these powers! As for where they came from... this is a very hard concept I'm still working on. I have a bunch of ideas, and all of which are equally cool! Though, I think I'm going to go with the one that makes the most logical sense, which is powerful enough to scare people into never wanting to mess with the fourth dimension in real life. For fear of bringing them through. If you still want me to spoil their origin, I can give it. But only if you ask for it. And if only some of you want to know, I can send you a PM.

[Unraveller]

No spoilage please, I just don't think I can RP Kristof's reaction to such things as well as I could If I already know. You feel me? I discourage this kind of metagaming in my D&D sessions all the time.