[OOC] All-Star Marvel: Audax Mundus Novus - Season 1 (Completed)

[Spud]

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You may wanna play down how long she was away, as that puts you in everyone elses future

@Sep

Ikie dokie will do later ... on my mobile which is shiiiiite.

[Omega Man]

Can always join the Guardians in space! We're gonna be down a player/character or two once @Sep writes out his Nova...

~KL~

[Whiskey Business]

So, @CallMeChaotix I take it you're no longer playing as IF?

[Sep]

Can always join the Guardians in space! We're gonna be down a player/character or two once @Sep writes out his Nova...

~KL~

@The Kid Lantern

I am waiting for the opportune moment to strike.

[CallMeChaotix]

So, @CallMeChaotix I take it you're no longer playing as IF?

@Whiskey Business

Mhm.

[Dedonus]

I probably will not be able to get a post up today (or work on the collaboration @Natty because of impending papers and exams on Monday, but after that, I should have more time. :)

[Whiskey Business]

Ok. So @dedonus if it's cool with you, I'd like to get Shang-Chi active again as IF. My submission for the Duck still stands :D

[Whiskey Business]

Ok. So @Dedonus if it's cool with you, I'd like to get Shang-Chi active again as IF. My submission for the Duck still stands :D

[CallMeChaotix]

@Dedonus Am I accepted, I asked permission from DrewVonAwesome to be Johnny, too.

[DrewVonAwesome]

@Dedonus Am I accepted, I asked permission from DrewVonAwesome to be Johnny, too.

@CallMeChaotix

I will verify he did. He was originally asked before childhoodruined asked about joining too.

[FacePunch]

Player: CallMeChaotix

Character You Wish To Play As: Johnathan "Johnny" Storm

Moral Alignment: Hero

Origins & Backstory: Johnny Storm lived on Long Island, with his older sister Susan Storm and mother and father, until one day his mother was killed in a automobile accident. Their father, Dr. Franklin Storm was devastated, he started drinking and ended up in jail for murder. Johnny and Sue went to live with their aunt, Marygary in Glenville. Johnny was interested in automobiles, even though his mother died because of one. He became a mechanic. One day, he followed his sister to an unauthorized trip to space with Ben Grimm and Reed Richards. A cosmic meteor shower, known as the 'Storm' hit the space ship, filling them with cosmic radiation, Johnny had the ability to turn into a man on fire by saying 'Flame On', because of this he called himself Human Torch. The four lived in the Baxter Building, or rather Reed Richard's lab, fighting crime in Manhattan known as the Fantastic Four.

@CallMeChaotix

I don't mean to be rude, but your sheet looks a little bit unfinished. You're missing the Affiliation, Sample Story Arcs, and Sample Post sections of the sheet. The origin is on the short side too, but that's for Dedonus to comment on.

[DrewVonAwesome]

Yeah I'm helping him out with it. I just don't think he was properly aware of what he was suppose to be doing. I just sent him Reed and Susan's profile sheets so it should be better.

[FacePunch]

Alrighty then. Cool.

[Dedonus]

Okay, for everyone with pending character sheets (i.e. ones that I have not given my stamp of approval), please provide a link to the completed character sheet or repost it so I do not have to shift through pages of OOC.

Ok. So @Dedonus if it's cool with you, I'd like to get Shang-Chi active again as IF. My submission for the Duck still stands :D

@Whiskey Business

Sure.

@Dedonus Am I accepted, I asked permission from DrewVonAwesome to be Johnny, too.

@CallMeChaotix

The short answer is no. There are several issues with your character sheet.

-Missing Powers/Abilities section: Both for just giving a list of powers and also to show me you understand the character's powers.
-Missing Sample Story Arcs: While this does not need to be actually story arcs like in the comics, I would like it if you could list what your plans are for this character.
-Sample Post: Pretty straight forward.
-Issues with Origin/Backstory:

• Too Short. Check the Character tab for examples. It does not have to be as long as most of the those accepted CS's, but give me more than one paragraph.
• Does not follow established history for the Fantastic Four. I can still tell that you modeled your character sheet heavily on Marvel Wikia. Make sure that your history matches with the Mr. Fantastic and Invisible Woman CS's. Also, at least skim through (but preferring read) the Fantastic Four posts, starting here.

[Whiskey Business]

Okay, for everyone with pending character sheets (i.e. ones that I have not given my stamp of approval), please provide a link to the completed character sheet or repost it so I do not have to shift through pages of OOC.

@Dedonus

Here ya go.

[Sep]

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Here ya go.

@Whiskey Business

You sook.

Let @Dedonus suffer... :P

[Sep]

Meant to do a Doom post at lunch as well to get Future Imperfect going but it didn't happen as I spent more time on my Hulk one than I thought I would.

Easter egg in there too, for anyone that notices.

[Bright_Ops]

@Sep

Just an idea for Future Imperfect if it is somewhat based off of All-Star Marvel- When the nuclear holocaust started, Loki sacrificed himself to ensure that at least some of Earth would survive and be relatively livable (Which would later become Dystopia). If Maestro is a possible future version of the ASM Hulk, I could see him going out of his way to honor his old friend Loki's memory in some way.

[Sep]

@Sep

Just an idea for Future Imperfect if it is somewhat based off of All-Star Marvel- When the nuclear holocaust started, Loki sacrificed himself to ensure that at least some of Earth would survive and be relatively livable (Which would later become Dystopia). If Maestro is a possible future version of the ASM Hulk, I could see him going out of his way to honor his old friend Loki's memory in some way.

@Bright_Ops

Well yeah it's based on ASM, a possible future for us.

Also he could wear reindeer horns? :P

IDK Maestro isn't the nicest guy out there... so we'd need to think how he can still be a dick but honour a friend...

Maybe there can be a massive statue? :P

[Bright_Ops]

@Sep

I like that idea. Maybe it can glow at night! And the lights are powered by slaves forced to run in a large treadmill/ turning a large crank.
" I find it fitting that the suffering of others is literally powering my city!"