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Yessir. Thank you for the guidance, sir! I'll get straight to accommodating for these things, sir!

...Why did I bother writing it out like that....
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o7 Yes sir.

Edited: I think this is the quickest I've ever brainstormed something on a phone at 1 AM. I think I really just wanna be with you guys that badly.

THIRD EDIT: Oh hell. I took the the whole basis off of another wiki to stick with "REVELATION CHANGE OH SHIT". But I can change it up.


its k bby you don't need to rush, you're here now.
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It's not that I'm rushing. I just suddenly wanted to be creative. BUT I MUST CONFORM TO THE ARCANA.
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It's not that I'm rushing. I just suddenly wanted to be creative. BUT I MUST CONFORM TO THE ARCANA.


IKR its pretty hard to do...
ok not for me bcs Matthew is Yosuke 3.0 or a fusion of Yosuke and Chie

but for everyone else it is something that takes a bit of time to do.
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Alright. Edited it again. I'm not even sure if I'm being too detailed or underdetailed or what aaaaa
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Oh look, I wrote more garbage. Whoopss

I'll stop now. I've shitposted enough for today.
1x Laugh Laugh
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....Wat
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It's normal.
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In the event that I disappear, I've probably passed out. So if that happens, I'll see you tomorrow. and either do edits if I have to or be happy that I'm not a failure. o/

EDIT: And oh. Okay.

EDIT 2: Thank you for being patient with me, SENPAI! ;w;
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Okay, now the last bit to fix up.

Now the backstory doesn't really suit your character's personality, or at least doesn't explain it. Considering that childhood, she should be a pretty sombre person. So add some spice to it.

There's also your name, Exoris. Please note the RP is set in Japan, so please choose a suitable name, or go the way Itano and other players did, make them originally from another country.

I'm sorry if it seems picky, but I do really prefer it when things abide by the laws of the world that has been set out.
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....Wat

It's hard to explain, so I'll just let this do the talking:
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oh Sen bby thankyou
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Okay, now the last bit to fix up.

Now the backstory doesn't really suit your character's personality, or at least doesn't explain it. Considering that childhood, she should be a pretty sombre person. So add some spice to it.

There's also your name, Exoris. Please note the RP is set in Japan, so please choose a suitable name, or go the way Itano and other players did, make them originally from another country.

I'm sorry if it seems picky, but I do really prefer it when things abide by the laws of the world that has been set out.


Yessir. @-@ And it's okay to be picky. You're the GM. I'll have to rewrite it when I'm more...conscious I think...x.x

And your writing is not shitty, Sen.

EDIT: I apparently can't sleep until I appease to the dark father that is Sho. Rewriting in progress. Spice being placed.
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oh Sen bby thankyou

Thank u bby kisses

And your writing is not shitty, Sen.

I meant it in a joking manner (and moreso that the concept was bad, considering it's literally just a really inaccurate That's So Raven! parody using genderbent versions of Matthew and Sato with a haphazard "plot"), and I also very commonly say stuff like that. I appreciate you saying that but it's really just a lame form of modesty/joking around. U get kisses 2 bby <33
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I posted my character! I hope it will suffice. Please tell to fix any mistake if you see any!
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Maybe you should try posting it in OOC for me to accept it first.

Please repost it here for me to check for stuff.
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Name:

Keiko Kobashigawa (ito)

Gender:

Female

Age:

16

Arcana:

The Lovers

Personality:

An incredible gentle and polite young lady. But she seems to holds onto a great deal of anger and sadness from her past. But she tries to be optimistic and stay grounded. She works incredibly hard and persist through life, she's caring to those having a rough time giving them an ear and a shoulder to cry onto. She can come off as bitter at times and can be dismissive of people troubles she considers it 'not real trouble,' but she apologizes whenever she does this and will try not to do it again. She tries not make people worry or sad, so she avoids telling people her troubles and woes. And she is ashamed of being homeless.

Equipment/Skills:

She knows how to stay hidden and to survive without a home since she is homeless. Can sleep anywhere and anytime with as little sleep as humanly possible. She has learned how to use a knife as both a weapon and as a survival tool. Her most prized item and really only keepsake of her old life is a butterfly knife which belonged to her brother.

Background:

Keiko Ito, was born as the younger daughter of two children she was raised in a loving home, she loved her parents and was so happy with her brother. It was the perfect household, with loving parents that spoiled their two humble but naive children. Keiko was loved by her classmates and teachers for how hard she does everything in and out of school. But she spends most of her free time with her brother who was smart and was an honored student. Even though he was a lot older than she was he played with her and indulged in her fantasies and stories.
As she gotten older she grew to be her own person, spending less time with her brothers and working harder in school to be a teacher and help children and she loved spending time with children often being a really good senpai to her kohais. But she still loving spending her little free time with her brother and parents who over the years became less happy with her mother losing a job and her father having to work extra shifts at work to keep them afloat. but Keiko barely noticed.

But on the year she started high school their house caught on fire. Keiko was passed out due to the carbon monoxide from the fire. Her brother rescued her, but he suffered serious injuries and brain damage from all the carbon monoxide. He survived, but he went into a coma with a very unlikely chance of ever recovering. She was felt with regret in that she couldn't even thank him for his rescue and also that he might never recover because of her.

She started to hate her parents because to her all they cared about was the house and not that the fact that their son might die or at least be brain dead. But in reality they did care and was devastated by it but they put on a brave face so Keiko would stop blaming herself and try to move on. She didn't.

One night when staying in a hotel room, she ran off in the middle of the night, with only the clothes on her back and a few small things. The start was the hardest, but a homeless woman helped her survive on the streets. The homeless woman and Keiko stayed together for the better part of the year. In moments of doubt, Keiko called her mother's cell phone, saying she misses her and wants to be with them. But she is always reminded of all her anger when she hears her mother voice. There was only one time she spoke to her mother. Which was the most recent call, she never told a soul what she told her mother. Not even the friendly woman.

Keiko and the homeless had to move from town to town so child services doesn't get her and return her to her parents. She just so happened to return to the homeless woman hometown. For now the two found an abandoned house which was the woman's childhood home.

The homeless woman tries to keep Keiko healthy and even wants to permanently move to Warakuma so that Keiko could grow roots and try to have a normal life.

Her new name is Keiko Kobashigawa the homeless woman's maiden name. She will try to have a normal life as a runaway youth.

Persona:

Ching Shih

Appearance:

A tall slender feminine figure covered in a white skin tight suit with black thigh high boots, with a black sleeveless tunic that covers down to her upper hips with slits on the side that go up part her abdomen almost to the bottom of her rib cage. She has black silk gloves that go up to her elbows. She carries a golden dagger and silver flintlock gun. She wears a black biker helmet with only red lipstick to add any expression on her there's long flowing curly black hair coming out the of the helmet.

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Agi
Dia
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ROUND 3 BABY. NO NEED TO BE GENTLE. I LIKE IT ROUGH.

no I lied I need it gentle pls I'm sorry ;;

Name changed. Background edited. WHAT EVEN IS SLEEP.

(And I love you too Sen. <3)
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Two girls, you're both accepted.

If you guys want me to draw and design your Personas, send me a PM. Note I also mention "design", so if you have a set in image, it will be a little different (though you will have a say and I'll try my best to keep what you imagined).

Otherwise you're both clear to place them in the Character section and post.

I suggest to start with, join a club, because everyone is in one. Today is Wednesday, so mostly Sports clubs are open.
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