[OOC] Star Wars: Grievous Ascent

[Bell]

Yeah, totally was using some quotes from something else for the later parts of my post. So what, sue me :P

[Legion X51]

*proceeds to sue Bell*

[The Captain]

I've been really busy the past few weeks, and I'd really like to apologize for just disappearing.

I'm still interested, but I'm not sure about the direction I'm going with my current sheet. I may double back and make something entirely new.

[Alfhedil]

I've been really busy the past few weeks, and I'd really like to apologize for just disappearing.

I'm still interested, but I'm not sure about the direction I'm going with my current sheet. I may double back and make something entirely new.

@The Captain

Alright, cool. Glad to see you're still about. Let me know if you need anything :D

[shadowkiller912]

Sorry if this took so long to post @Alfhedil but I have been busy with college and I got caught up with some things over the weekend. It is still a WIP but I want to try to get started posting on the IC as soon as possible. Possibly get started on posting by the end of April.

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Organization Name: Jensaarai

Profession: WIP

Affiliation: Neutral

Leader(s): Saarai-Kar

Persons of Importance: WIP

Name: Neomi Synia
Species: Human (Jabiimi)
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Appearance:
Affiliation: Jensaarai, Jabiimi
Occupation: Jensaarai Sentinels-Assassin
Brief History:

Neomi was one of the few Jedi Shadows during the Clone Wars and was one of the most highly trained one yet was the most watched due to her conflicting loyalties during the Clone Wars.

She was born on 43 bby on Jabiimi but at the age of six her family became spacers and traveled the galaxy, trading at different planets, constantly on the move. She helped her family in the business and helped her dad fixing robots to sell to customers to which her parents and siblings noticed her aptitude in engineering, as she handles computers fairly well at her age.
At the age of seven her family temporarily visited Coruscant for a routine ship checkup when she was noticed by Jedi Master Echuu-Shen-Jon. Her parents decided to allow Neomi to join the Jedi as they realized that with her talents and force sensitivity, she could become something.

Neomi passed her initiate trials and was chosen by the same one who discovered her, Echuu-Shen-Jon. The Jedi Order became a second family to her. After participating in many missions with her master she ascended to the rank as a Jedi Knight. She then took the most uncommon path of the Jedi which was the Sentinel and trained under Taria Dasmin.

Most of the time she worked with the Jedi Technical Division were she spent countless hours working on droids to the point before the Clone Wars she could use Mechu-Deru. During this time she developed a disdain of politics and the Republic, regarding a massive bureaucratic mess. When the Clone War started, she became active as a Jedi Shadow, hunting down anyone connected to the Sith.
Yet hunting down Sith alone in the galaxy
Other:

Sion Verril

Naat Reath

Name:
Species: Human
Age:
Gender:
Appearance:
Affiliation: Jensaarai
Occupation: Jensaarai Minister
Brief History:

Stam Reath

Name:
Species: Human
Age:
Gender:
Appearance:
Affiliation: Jensaarai
Occupation: Jensaarai Warrior

Brief History:

Sev'rance Tann

Name:
Species: Human
Age:
Gender:
Appearance:
Affiliation: Jensaarai

Occupation: Jensaarai Minister-Diplomat

Brief History:

Planet: Caecius

Caecius

Military and Civilian Assets:

Jensaarai ever since their survival against the Jedi have amassed a moderate force of force sensitive users. Many of these users were

Susefvi Temple

Rakatan Assets

Temple of Nikosia

The Rakatan Research Base on Caecius was awe inspiring. It was the largest installation that the Jensaarai ever saw. It spanned into a large natural made cave system with different fortified tunnels connecting to different sectors of the research base.
The base purpose was to house Rakatan Researchers studying the flora and fauna on the planet.

A powerful assest the Jensaarai possess are former Rakatan Droids. Many were found abandoned within the base.

Crystal Caves of Haamycvercopa me’suum (Mandalorian Language) (Haverkopa) (http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Shogun)

It would mean Unusual dream planet. (Wil lchange name in the future.)

http://www.mandoa.org/

Mandoa

(haamyc [HAH-meesh] unusual)

(vercopa [vair-KOH-pa] wish, dream)

(me'suum [may-SOOM] planet)

For centuries since the Mandalorian conquest of Haverkopa during the Great Sith Wars, the planet was known for its crystalline dreamy, bizarre landscape. When Jensaarai began introducing they began using the crystal of Haverkopa for their lightsabers and the Mandalorians had no problem with it.

Jensaarai Navy

The Jensaarai Navy is not a true Navy. It is made up of star fighters, freighters, shuttles, patrol craft and corvettes.

Brief History:

The Jensaarai beginnings were at the hands of Nikkos Tyris. Tyris was a Jedi Knight like any other who followed the Jedi Way of Life until his search for knowledge in the archives led him to the discovery of the ancient Sith manuscript, the Jiaasjen or “integrating the shadow” written by Larad Noon, one of Exar Kun followers during the Old Sith War. The manuscript included the tales of an exiled dark Jedi, the Sith’s birth, the Sith War, and a great deal of Sith information. The most important detail in the manuscript that Tyris noticed was that the light side and the dark side of the force could be integrated together as one. Though the manuscript also claimed that the Jedi stole everything from the Sith.

Tyris gathered the closet Jedi he knew including known Gray Jedi in the order and called for a meeting at the works were the Jensaarai was formed, a new force sensitive-order. The Jensaarai made an exodus to the Outer Rim were they would set up their order on Susefvi. Tyris believed he imparted knowledge that neither good nor evil but unknowingly began the corruption of the Jensaarai.

Though not all of his closest friends agreed with him and tipped off the Council. The council interpreted the teachings of Noon to be Sith. With Clone Wars and the return of the Sith, the Council was determined to neutralize the Jensaarai. A strike group of Jedi’s led by Neeja Halycon, Ylenic It’kla, and a Jedi Shadow named Desertwind were sent to neutralize the Jensaarai on Susefvi.

At first the Jensaarai tried to reason with the Jedi strikegroup at their makeshift base as they did not want to fight and simply wanted to be ignored. The strike group had two orders for the Jensaarai, “dead” or “alive.” A great battle ensued on Susefvi as the Jensaarai fought for survival.

Nikkos Tyris along died in battle among several of the original members. The strike group failed to defeat the Jensaarai and there were only a few survivors from the strike group that escaped. With the collapse of the Republic and the Jedi Order, they could not eliminate the Jensaarai and grew nervous about the Jensaarai survival and their inability to launch another attack.

Jensaarai were victorious time grew a hatred towards the Jedi Order. The Saarai-Kar then decided to settle the Jensaarai operations to the Eva-T System within the Quence sector due to its status as a backwater; it was the perfect place to establish their new order, away from the populated planets and to hide from the Jedi.

They discovered an unnamed Gas Giant and named it Tyriseum after their slain leader. It held several terrestrial moons and settled on the largest one orbiting it and named it Nikosia. To the Jensaarai shock they found an old abandoned Rakatan research base that was built into a large cave system that studied the planets native flora and fauna and later discovered the original moon name, Caecius and the gas planet name which was Thyellai. They christened Caecius as their new home.

A great time of mediation and learning occurred where the Jensaarai were both seeking to understand the texts of Larad Noon and battle against the Dark Side, which was trying to take over them. It took months of meditation, psychotic episodes, and malicious thoughts for the Jensaarai to finally be able to syncretize the light and dark side of the force and modeled their order with influence from the Jedi and the Sith. They viewed themselves neither good, nor evil.

In twenty years later, Jensaarai grew into a large order well known throughout the surrounding sectors of Quence. They became known for their ideals of peace and justice while combing the Dark/Light Side of the force syncretically.

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Other:

[Zoldyck]

Is this still alive? Cause it looks interesting but doesnt seem like there has been alot of activity :\

[Alfhedil]

@shadowkiller912

Had a quick scroll through your app, and it looks mostly set to go. Go ahead and shift it over to the other tab when you have the time and feel free to post in the IC when ready.

@Zoldyck

Aye, we're still about, at least myself and Bell are. Main thing is that we keep gaining and losing Empire/Confederate players, and that's where the most potential for activity is until I get plots going with the GRM.

[Zoldyck]

@Alfhedil

Alright, I'll get to work on a Confederate CS in a moment then :)

Always loved the clankers :P

[Alfhedil]

@Alfhedil

Alright, I'll get to work on a Confederate CS in a moment then :)

Always loved the clankers :P

@Zoldyck

Noice.

[Zoldyck]

<Snipped quote by Zoldyck>

Noice.

@Alfhedil

Prepare for alot of this:

"Boy, this is a lot more fun when they're not shooting back."
"I still can't seem to hit anything..."

[Legion X51]

I'm still here.

[Sep]

If I want to join any new limits on factions?

[Alfhedil]

If I want to join any new limits on factions?

@Sep

Just so long as you look at who's already accepted and what's been explained as the new background, you should be good to go with whatever's open. In terms of accepted factions, all you need to do is look at the main post as well as the most recent posts I've made in the thread. If you have any questions, feel free to fire off a PM and I'll get to you as soon as possible.

[Sep]

<Snipped quote by Sep>

Just so long as you look at who's already accepted and what's been explained as the new background, you should be good to go with whatever's open. In terms of accepted factions, all you need to do is look at the main post as well as the most recent posts I've made in the thread. If you have any questions, feel free to fire off a PM and I'll get to you as soon as possible.

@Alfhedil

Will look into doing so tonight after work

[Sep]

Still a W.I.P, obviously.

Nation Name: Hapes Consortium
Government Type: Constitutional Monarchy
Capital: Hapes
Home Sector: Hapan Sector
Holdings: None other than every system within the Transitory Mists
Leader:

Queen Mother

Name: Tala Ro-nyn
Age: 25
Force Sensitive: Yes
Force Abilities: Has basic training with Telekensis, minute mind control and senses. Has studied primarily in abilities that relate to the mind under her Master Tyrell Omi-Ren
Force Illusion: Can create illusions that can size up to a Venator Star Destroyer however she can only make one illusion upto that size, the smaller the illusion the more she can create simultaneously.

Battle meditation/Empathy: She can sense and then influence the feelings of others. Of vital use during battle.

Telepathy: Gathered from a conjunction of the above abilities she can get general readings of what someone is thinking and even implant some images into someones head.

Memory Walk: Ability learned by accident, trying to see someones memories she inadvertently went on a memory walk. While it isn’t the nicest of abilities she has trained in it and kept in an option for if needed in the future.

Skills/Traits:
Charismatic Leader
Tactician
Witty
Quick Thinker
Reasonable Pilot
Studied various forms of lightsaber combat, not proficient in any one field other than Trakata

Brief History: First and only daughter off Rola the previous Queen Mother she was three years old when the Old Republic ships came into Hapan Space. Daughter to the Queen she came into contact with Tyrell Omi-Ren, a Jedi General who was in command of the battlegroup looking for a safe port. It was her interference, unknowingly due to her force sensitivity, that allowed him to be trusted as when she saw him she immediately trusted him and walked straight upto him to be picked up by him. While she can barely remember it she will never regret that decision.

Throughout her time growing up being groomed to be Queen she has been trained by Tyrell Omi-Ren to be in the first line of Hapan Knights, an order led by Tyrell Omi-Ren who only agreed to make it on the condition that when he felt they were ready the Hapan Consortium would at least see what the wider galaxy held and over time he came to call Hapes his home, and even started a family his son becoming close to Tala despite the fact he was five years her junior.

Her training grew, as did the Hapan Knights and eventually on her 21st birthday her mother decided to make her Queen. Much to everybody's surprise she announced her engagement to Tyrell Omi-Rens son, Koran. Since then she has excelled in her training and at stabilizing politics and finances throughout the Consortium, now it is time to fulfill her families promise.

Persons of Importance:
List will likely lengthen through time.

Gen. Tyrell Omi-Ren

Age: 65
Force Sensitive: Yes
Force Abilities: Exactly the same as Talas except for he can’t perform a memory walk and his illusions are a bit more refined and have better range.

Skills/Traits:
Hates fighting
Wise
Nurturing/Natural Teacher
Versed in basic lightsaber combat by necessity
Diplomat

Brief History: His history pre-entering the mists isn’t known throughout Hapes to any except his family, and extended family. However since entering the mists he has went about adapting the Jedi Code to what he feels is a more apt depiction and making the Hapan Knights thanks to the interest of Tala.

He has also married since entering the mists to a Hapan Women, which given Hapan politics has been an interesting experience for him however he has managed to open the views slightly of those he has come into contact with in terms of sexism especially after becoming the Father-In-Law to the Queen Mother his importance has increased. The Hapan Knights have now officially replaced the Commandos as the elite force within Hapes, their number may be small but he ensures that they are well trained and disciplined, with the assistance of his former Padawan the Mon Cala Dob and fellow Jedi Lucila Harrow the order has grown to encompass almost fifty Knights.

With the upcoming mission to leave the Hapes Cluster it is rumoured that he will be commanding the mission.

Admiral Koran Omi-Ren

Age: 20
Force Sensitive: Yes
Force Abilities: Core Abilities, has tried to perform Electric Judgement however has only succeed in creating lightning when extremely angry/annoyed/emotive.

Skills/Traits:
Impatient: Unlike his father he doesn’t want to take his time, he wants to solve the problems, whatever they may be, quickly.
Quick on his feet: He may be impatient but he can think quickly to come up with a solution in a jam.
Out of the box thinker: It’s where he lives.
Respectable: Won’t order anyone to do anything unless he’d do it himself, which commands a certain level of respect.

Brief History: Growing up alongside the princess was likely to be tough, but despite it all they ended up becoming the best of friends and later that blossomed into love. However during his training to be a Knight he became impatient. He didn’t want to think of a way around the problem he wanted to solve it the quickest way possible, this has only worked for him so far as he can think quickly on his feet.

When him and Tala began to get close they decided to keep things secret, technically he was the son of an outsider. However when Tala became Queen she felt it would become too tough to keep things secret, and it was then that they decided to announce their relationship and even get married. Surprisingly there was little fallout with this decision, primarily as the Hapan Knights had become so powerful and respectable due to Tyrell Omi-Ren and as such it was seen as a smart choice.

In marrying the Queen Mother he has been awarded a position over the entire Hapan Military, which is a tough responsibility. He is torn between his arrogance and his caring and for the past two years has done everything he could to try to become a better leader, however Tala still needs to step in on occasion or even his father. Though when his father does it he needs to be careful to not undermine his command, it is a complicated situation…

Military:

Hapan Knights

The Hapan Knights are an order of Force Sensitive soldiers trained to perform the most difficult of tasks that the crown needs done, as well as devoting themselves to the Queen Mother and her protection in times of conflict (as they are better trained than the Royal Guard). They are lead by Tyrell Omi-Ren, Dob and Lucila Harrow and their number has reached almost fifty fully trained members battle ready.

Lessons are held different than in the Jedi Order and typically take a “classroom” setting approach. With those who have had several years of training go out with the newer pupils to enforce the law on how to use abilities in the field. Due to low crime rates quite often the conflict that arises is simulated.

They wield a lightsaber with an artificially coloured crystal, typically a royal blue however their armour itself is a redish colour and somewhat reminiscent of the armour the clones used to wear.

Brief History: Follow legends canon up until the end of the Clone Wars.
Other:

[Sep]

How is the sheet so far? should I push on or is there something needing fixed now

[Alfhedil]

How is the sheet so far? should I push on or is there something needing fixed now

@Sep

Apologies, been a bit busy with work and such. I'll do a bit of fact-checking and such on the powers, but otherwise the sheet looks pretty good so far.

Edit: Everything looks good so far, let me know when you get another edit up.