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“They were our masters. They had wisdom. Their strength was mighty, their knowledge broad. Their craftsmanship unsurpassed. They willed the greatest of the last epoch. They built high, dug deep, spanned far. There was not a place our Old Masters went that could not be seen. But our Old Masters were cruel. They lacked kindness, lacking no cruelty. They held no charity, having much in way of greed. They demanded more, having all ego and pride. They were not civil, demanding us to be slaves and putting on our backs their world; they were slothful. They sent missions to our surface world, raping it of its beauty for their own demands, they were lustful.

“And when they saw what the Gods had, they demanded that. They reached to meet creation, only to be inflamed by its might. For once straddled with the weight of their karma. And with a plunge they drowned in fire and rock.”

Jainsura, On the Visha

Do The Eagles Circle The Mountain

Nearly four hundred years have passed since the collapse of the underground Empire of Vishashtan. But though they are gone their legacy remains. In the mythology of the kingdoms and rajas that have replaced them there is a common thread of involvement by the now legendary people of the underground. Whether as dreaded masters who held them in slavery or as a model of existence, existing as a romanticized effort of poets and bards as much as kings and queens.

And now scattered across the landscape atop the graves of the Old Empire new kingdoms vie for control and survival. The Visha's legacy having not failed to touch and effect every party in some distant way.

The Empire of the Visha



The Ruined Underground of the Visha and the Shishkarat



The World



Application

"Nation"

Faction
<Enter Nation name here>
Race
<The dominant, ruling race, see races>
location
<Fill out on map with whatever you got. Avoid taking up all of or the clear majority of a region>
Backstory-History
<Should be obvious>

Races


As a note, if you want to be anything but a human then there's no reason to do this one. As well, they should not be the dominant 'race' within your realm and for this I'm requiring that humans at least are present in the lower classes at least within your society. They may also be present in its aristocracy. Whichever the case, and however it's explored they must be present. If you fill out anything other than human and do this to detail some basics then it's recognized in some manner that they have majority rule over your nation. This has probably been a sloppy way of explaining it.

Also, when you apply in as a race I'm "Public domaining" it. So anyone else can pick up on the race you introduced to tell a different story with them and a different side of them. You can claim a vast majority of them, or enough to form an administration. But I would discourage a monopoly. You can probably talk to me too on how many other people may claim significant populations if you want them limited.

Also, I will plainly admit to biases towards certain parties. These certain parties also have had an influence in the development of this RP over roughly a month. So I will state it here and now. These persons are permitted to bend around the above rules because I not only understand them as people, I also know they can write, and I have received their intentions. I know for [some of] them they can stay committed to an idea. Others, not so much: I've seen people jump into some RPs with a concept that may be "cool" but they never actually write enough to offer anything as to why they're cool and in fact end up putting down a big black hole that we have to carefully step around so as to not interrupt them while they only post infrequently.

So often time the option that seems "cool" to you may not be the best if you can not do anything with it or is ultimately so hard to write that they become shallow without their author comprehending nearly as much as they should. As such I'm clamping down on a lot of really silly shit. no angel winged humans, no dragonkin, no mushroom people. It must be relate-able in some way so it can be written. It must also appease my bias.

So on that note:

Name
<Obvious>
Basic Description
<Obvious>

Please only use if your nation's ruling race is anything but "human" and isn't in a player-resource encyclopedia (coming out in full thread)

Individual


Pending all failure to convince yourself you can handle the complex openness of having the option to operate potential thousands of characters, I am allowing people to apply as individuals with the freedom if down the road they can evolve them to incorporate something akin to a nation or an organization. Please only use if you think you can keep up with and be relevant to political agendas as the smallest possible unit. Or if you don't mind writing in a world where you might not be able to determine very much, only capable of spinning your own tale and quest, like Geralt of Rivia in the Witcher-verse.

Name

Physical Description
<Includes race and age>

Bio

____________________________
Some formal bullshit


-This is a fantasy RP. If it helps, expect to have elements particular to maybe the 12th-13th century.
-I expect a quality effort to contribute, even if it's not your best you may admit this and I will not look down on you. But I don't want this to become a constant excuse for writing poorly regularly and failing to contribute. Failure to comply will likely result in warnings before I choose to remove you.
-I make final rulings
-Even final rulings are subject to change and I invite constant discussion on things in OOC over certain elements. With the exception of heavy obligatory stats. You can keep this as a personal thing or as an optional detail
-This is FIRST AND FOREMOST a narrative based RP. That is that playing this like Civilization or as Age of Empire or EU4 is frowned upon. Playing-to-win is not the way to approach this. Play to post. Play to create. Play to tell a story, even if you never interact with anyone ever.
-Maha mantra, hare Krishna
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Dinh AaronMk
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<I have reasons for holding this post off>
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-Maha mantra, hare Krishna


Rama rama, hare hare

Also, i'm sitting on posts that just need to be proofed. Tell me when and i'll get this party started.
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I'll have to review the apps first and fuck with the map before we do anything. And right now I'm sitting in class while the teacher talks about the Autobahn and how the Europeans are coming over here because the Autobahn is too crowded.
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Sweet, I'll get my sheet down at some point. Probably today. I'm been doing some revising of the history/backstory portion in my head.
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Sheet will be up in an hour or so, just finishing off religion and adding some reference images in for architecture
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Ya'll good by me.
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Well I finally got my sheet up! And the race sheet is up too. Hurray!
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The original name of this kingdom has, however, been lost to time thanks to the Vishput.


Thanks Obama.

EDIT: Aaron, you drew Wilted's borders a bit short. His revised map location stretches all the way up to the lake the rivers converge on. Yours stops short of that.
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<Snipped quote>

Thanks Obama.


Obama's an Indian Dwemer?
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-dumb joke-
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>_>

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He got the part of the map that mattered tbh
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I'm re-writing my app right now.

Don't wait up.
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I hate to be a bother Aaron, but my country's just called Svargiya. Svargiyani is the demonym.
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I'll get it next time.
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Well I certainly hope so, since I just explicitly told you the problem. :D

And I assume that since you put me on the map, that there's no issue with my nation or race. Hurrah for ape-men!
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I'll have to review the apps first and fuck with the map before we do anything. And right now I'm sitting in class while the teacher talks about the Autobahn and how the Europeans are coming over here because the Autobahn is too crowded.


Imagine moving across a sea because of traffic.
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Europeans don't drive cars. Everyone knows they use bikes.

Unless they are French... damn scooters.
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Well I certainly hope so, since I just explicitly told you the problem. :D

And I assume that since you put me on the map, that there's no issue with my nation or race. Hurrah for ape-men!


Woop woop!

Aaron could hardly say no to bigfoot when one of the most important details about his race is "They get the shits like a horse."
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