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Currently, I'm planning on starting you off at the very edge of the Tumult, preparing to enter the Twisted Acres. From then, you're mainly planning on getting into Kokiri Sinkhole to trade and resupply.
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Coolio. Twisted Acres gonna be full of fun things aaand-

A visit back to the Kokiri Sinkhole huh?
...Fun. Boom's gonna have a swelltime.
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Hope you like fungus.
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As long as that fungus is going after the many, many enemies made in surviving, and increases my survival rate. Fungus is cool.

If it hinders my survival. It is awful and horrible.
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@Eklispe, there are a number of issues I have with your CS.

1. Is this supposed to be the canon Koume (before she grew old and joined up with Kotake)? If so, I'd prefer if you changed her to a more generic Gerudo.

2. The Gerudo Desert isn't a desert anymore. It's been a snow-blasted tundra ever since Death Mountain up and crawled away. The Free Gerudo are less ninjas and more viking-oriented, considering the environments they have to survive in.

3. Most of your Cliches are quite low. Remember, Cliches act as both your HP and your attack modifiers. If you lose all dice in any of your Cliches, you're out of the fight. A Cliche value of 2 basically means that, if you ever get into a conflict (social or otherwise) and need to use those Cliches, if the enemy's roll succeeds against yours twice, you'll immediately lose and have to suffer the consequences.

4. Being several decades after an apocalyptic event destroyed most of Hyrule, I'd say white male guilt is no longer an issue. Things like survival and finding food and medicine rate a good bit higher on everyone's priorities.

5. Your background is a little sparse. Where did she grow up? Who did she grow up with? What did she learn as a person while growing up in the Gerudo Tundra?(this goes for you too, @Professor_Wyvern) How did she join the PCs' caravan ? How did growing up in the tundra teach her how to survive in any environment?

These are just things to consider. If you can fix these issues, I'll accept your character.
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Let's just say something like oh...

Caravan was about to be attacked by I dunno angry bandits. During that time Boom was still running away from enemies, which he didn't know long since lost the track of him. But he sorta assumed they were still chasing after him. During his fleeing he tripped and accidentally sent one of the Bombchus he was holding onto flying into the bandits, and it killed/harmed and terrified any living bandits off.

So he played off of it as something he totally intended, in order to get hired and more importantly protection by the Caravan.

How's that?
Any other background details you want?

For like 'as a person'. Survive by any means necessary. Kokiri law son.
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@Earnest Evans
1. No names are hard

2. Wow, normally i'm not one of those bums that doesn't read everything but here I am. Soz

3. A, having a lot of low CLiches sounds like it can be fun to RP. B, They aren't that low, Zora had 3,3,2,2,2 compared to my 6,2,2,2. Quite perpared to suffer the consequences by the way.

4. Hmm, was going for more of a joking tone here. Misplaced I see.

5. Haste makes waste and all that. However I do have some questions. What is this caravan even? Is it like a trade caravan? Where is it going? Is the Gerudo Male-Female ratio still the same?

Of course editing as we go along in response to your answers and my own ideas.
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@Eklispe, your CS will be accepted as soon as you write a reason for how you got into the caravan in your backstory.

As explained previously in the OOC, the caravan is a trade caravan. It is currently headed to what remains of Kokiri Forest (now named the Kokiri Sinkhole) to trade with the residents.

The Gerudo still suffer from the curse that forces them to only birth females. However, since Castletown no longer exists, they keep slaves to replenish their numbers. Viking Amazons, effectively.
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Your sheet is accepted, @Eklispe, though I would definitely recommend using spellcheck in the future.

Unless anyone else wants to join now, I think we're about ready to begin!
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I never said I was finished :O Still got a little more to add and still have to go through spelling since I can't spellcheck on this device and i'm to lazy to fix by hand
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So who should start out? Wouldn't make sense for it to be Mycellium. He's in a cage.
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Lo our journey through the Twisted Acres will be, I dunno something.
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@Eklispe,@Duthguy,@clanjos, we've started. Feel free to put an intro in, otherwise you'll be treated as just following the caravan.
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You guys can feel free to move on whenever. Try not to spend all your motivation on bickering at eachother! Just say that you're moving on, and I'll progress the story.
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Aight, cool. Let's go!
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@Professor_Wyvern, are you stepping up as the Leader, then? If so, then I'm guessing you're currently using your Bombchu Extraordinaire Cliche. Is that correct?
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Yup, yup, the Bombchu Extraordinaire Cliche is being used.
And gonna step as leader for this engagement, cause why not?

If you wish, I can just type the description to be the Cliche for future rolls. Just did Kaboom cause, hell, it was fun.

Also do you want just the link to the roll, or would you like me to type it in the IC post?
Such as like [Bombchu Extraordinaire: Result Number]?
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Just a hotlink to the roll on Orokos will work. However, I would probably include the name of your Cliche in the Description of your roll.
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Mmkay. Just wanted to check on that.
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womp womp this is p fun
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