Hey
@LeolycanWelcome!
It looks good, one thing I noticed was you missed out on the personality section. Although it's fairly obvious from your background his personality, but what if his different when you get to know him better for example? But yeah, your choice on how to do that.
Let me give you a bit more information on how the skills work, there are some skills which there are pre-reqs for, some of those pre-reqs are quests, weapon skill mastery or other (like dual blades requires fastest reaction time).
As you go up levels, you get more skill slots to equip (That's right, you equip skills). So, even if you have a mastery for, let's say, the weapon skill
<<One-handed Sword>> if it is not equipped, they cannot use any one-handed sword skills.
At the moment, everyone has two skills they can equip, and can swap them with other skills, when they want to.
With weapon skills, you have one, such as
<<Two-handed spear>>. You do not need more skill slots to equip the attack skills inside the
<<Two-handed spear>> skill. As you master the skill, you will unlock more skills, such as
<<Revolve Arts>> and
<<Dancing Spear>>. You can use those skills freely, as long as the
<<Two-handed spear>> skill is equipped with a two-handed spear equipped.
For our RP, mastery of skills and such will probably be fairly lenient. So don't worry about it too much, as long as it is reasonable. (So, don't use the bigger skills of that weapon skill until much later please)
Well, hope that is informative for you!