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In modern day New York City, the night is a fun and dangerous place. People vanish off the streets though they are often found again. In the night there lives a secret, so dark that many refuse to admit that it's true and go about their daily lives with ease. Fearing without realizing it, the threat that very much posses a danger to them after the suns falls from the sky every night to leave them waiting for the sun to rise the following day.

Vampires.

Beneath the known society of humans, the secrecy of the Slayers, and the cover of night, vampires live with their own society beneath ours, hidden and lost in time. The Pure Bloods rule all others, keeping them in line so they are not exposed; aristocrats use words instead of fangs to find their way into favour of the royal family and keep their corners free of troublesome vampires; the turned survive by living their own lives. Slayers threaten this way of existence and the vampires hate when one trespasses in their territory.

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This is a role play where one will most likely play as a vampire within this society, living and acting out how it is to live with this monarchy and the struggles that come with being a vampire. With the drama, fighting and romance that comes with it and all.



























Two more Pure Blood Families are coming soon - You may make your own Aristocratic Families(only 2 currently, PM for permission).
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We are OPEN

Take a look at the final product guys.

@sheeplon
@Arista
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We are OPEN

Take a look at the final product guys.

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@Ellri
@Silen Syanka



@ViolentViolet I really like it!
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Yeah!!!
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Hey Vi! I'll keep a close eye on this one because it sounds pretty promising!
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@NarcissisticPotato

Alright, thank you for showing a bit of interest :)

@Silen Syanka

You sound excited. I can't wait to see what you come up with for a character :)

@Arista

Good, good. Do you have any suggestions? Did you find anything wrong with it?
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@ViolentViolet No, a fee spelling errors in the summary, bit other then that no I really like it ^<^
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@Arista
What mistakes? Sorry, they might just be something I spell different :p But I'd like to make sure
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@ViolentViolet It's more specifically a word, to be honest. Where it says 'The Pure Bloods rule all others, keeping them in line so they are no exposed;' it's supposed to be 'not exposed' right? Other then that? Nada's wrong with it that I can see.
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@Arista
Ah so I missed a letter. *goes to fix it*
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There were a few others that I noticed, I can go through and read it again if you like and send you a PM with them. @ViolentViolet
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@Celaira
That would be really nice please and thank you.
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@Celaira Thanks sissy

@ViolentViolet You'll get lots of help from my sissy, she's awesome ^<^
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@ViolentViolet I was wrong (yay!) Most of the stuff I saw was grammatical in nature and didn't take away from immersion or anything, so you're fine to leave it as is. ^^
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@Arista
Oh right, you guys are sisters.

@Celaira
But shouldn't I fix grammatical errors regardless?
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@ViolentViolet They were mostly just places where I thought there should have been commas. But, if you want I can go ahead and write up the ones I noticed so you can edit them :3
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@Celaira
Uh. It's just missing commas?
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@ViolentViolet Yep. After my third read through, I determined that the only thing out of place was a few commas. ^^
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@Celaira

I'm really bad for missing those >_<
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@ViolentVioletwhere should I post my character when I finish her?
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