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Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by Partisan
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As an example of what he means:

He shoots poison water at someone, so they expect to get poisoned.. but they don't know what happens. This gives you free reign to say whatever you want - from 'nothing happens' to 'he dies instantly due to poison' and as such it's too broad.
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@Partisan

Okay, fixed it up a little bit more. I listed the four standard poisons taught by the clan (Any additions that Raito gains will be of his own creation and the effects will be listed carefully).
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@Bright_Ops Okay here's a review:

  • Dream: It's either useless or insanely strong. Either it doesn't affect someone or it knocks them out/kills them (either lead to same result, instant victory). I can't accept this anesthetic with the information given here. If you want this to be acceptable you may have to give measurements of quantities. ie: He needs to hit someone x number of times with y attack to have the Dream effect happen.
  • Sting: So it causes a large amount of pain, is it like sores or is it paralyzing pain akin to Sasori's poison? The former would require specific detail, the latter being just cliché and the typical nerve burner I can't accept because it'll once again be instant win with one hit.
  • Frost: An insta-kill move. You say it starts by the heart, well congrats you've defeated your opponent. This is Sasori's poison reformulated again, a progressive poison that'll likely leave a guy KO in a minute (because it hits the freaking heart first).
  • Wyldfire: Resident evil virus. I guess you can understand why this isn't accepted on a PC, right?


I guess you can see the problem here. The poisons give off the typical Naruto-like vibe, 0 chance of survival if hit type of poison. We don't like this, it makes fights really quick and uninteresting all the while encouraging people to start cheesing poison immunity (in your case it makes sense due to the KG). I hope you understand.
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@AgentFallenSoul Ooooh a Hyuuga, the last Hyuuga here just bailed out of the RP after three posts. I have high hopes for this one. (extra pressure huehue)
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Going deep sea fishing tomorrow guys, so I won't be able to post or check in. Just thought it'd be best to inform.
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Was misinformed about the fishing trip, will be getting picked up tomorrow evening to go fishing on the 30th.
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I finished Chihiro, so she's ready for you guys to look at!
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@AgentFallenSoul Solid character all around. So two bastard children in our squad, sounds pretty sad ;c

Anyway, I only have one request: Rank your techniques like the rest. It'll be much easier for everyone to scale the power dedicated to each technique. I know that most aren't ranked in canon, but it'll be useful for everyone. (The amount of ranked moves available is in the rules)
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Okay, Ill get on that after dinner, thanks ^-^@Savato
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@AgentFallenSoul Great! When it's done you can post her on the character tab and join in the IC.

Also, we have a skype group that eases communication. If you're interested, PM me your username. C:
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I like your chara, @AgentFallenSoul. Even though sad there are no original jutsu, it's still a really well-rounded character.
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I like your chara, @AgentFallenSoul. Even though sad there are no original jutsu, it's still a really well-rounded character.


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@Altered Tundra The Customs come after, gotta get time in ahaha
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@AgentFallenSoul If you have skype please add Vurige_Vos so that I may add you to the skype convo group thing we have.
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I like the character too. Also I apologize for yesterday's non quality post due to electricity down. I have edited it.
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@Raijinslayer Circular Headers for Sanguine and Akio


@AgentFallenSoul Circular Header for Chihiro


@Crimmy Circular Header for Haruka
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@Renny Your Giichi Circular Header Tag. :)

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Right, @Crimmy I advise you to hurry up whatever you'd planned as arc 2.5 is drawing to an end.

@Masaki Haruna I also advise you to get ready for arc 3, be ready to launch it, double check your shit.

@Renny @FallenTrinity You two should be good for now, here on out it's Crimmy that's gonna be advancing us again (I hope)

@Assassin We should be good for now, even if arc 2.5 is ending. The fight probably won't last much longer (if my plan works ehehehehe) and if it does, well, we can always just end it in a collab.

@Akashi Mayhiro Since I never catch you on skype, can you PM/Skype me the details on how you fixed the situation regarding the Mighty Naruto?
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@Partisan

I have an idea, but I require you to RP as Yamato's mother. Could she go off her nut and then tell where to Yakuza hideout is?
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