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Lol, the Uri have the worst positioning on this map. They pretty much border every race, the Gara guys have it nice, in war they would have the advantage.

Edit: On Hael's, Kho's makes more sense, although now the Uri and Cimex have sat an strategical advantage, this in terms of the Cimex since they pose as the threat.
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Lol, the Uri have the worst positioning on this map. They pretty much border every race, the Gara guys have it nice, in war they would have the advantage.


Ya, but the Cimex are really in trouble. Everybody hates them, afterall.

Heehehehehe...the Mer are safe, they live in the rivers and oceans, where you dirty land-dwellers can't touch them
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Lol, the Uri have the worst positioning on this map. They pretty much border every race, the Gara guys have it nice, in war they would have the advantage.


Which map are you referring to?
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Hmm, it looks nice, but it ignores Orabil, Orabson and the Southern Mountains, I propose:



Uri and Cimex are still technically in the south and east.


It doesn't make sense to me that the Uri and Cimex share no border. I think that Orabil and below should be take from humans and given to Uri, otherwise I don't know how the Uri would even know about the Cimex. Since this continent is like South America they'd be hundreds of miles away from one another.
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It doesn't make sense to me that the Uri and Cimex share no border. I think that Orabil and below should be take from humans and given to Uri, otherwise I don't know how the Uri would even know about the Cimex. Since this continent is like South America they'd be hundreds of miles away from one another.


That would make it so the HQ of Vowzra's Victors and a portion of Zerabil's realm is in Uri lands, which makes less sense. Uri know about the Cimex because they moved east to get away from them, so it actually make sense that they would be away from them if they moved away ^^'
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@Rtron@LokiLeo789 ca you give me the populations of your respective realms? I'd assume that human population as around 8000-10,000.
Zerabil's realm has around 1,200 humans, 300 Uri
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@Rtron@LokiLeo789 ca you give me the populations of your respective realms? I'd assume that human population as around 8000-10,000.
Zerabil's realm has around 1,200 humans, 300 Uri


Let's say there are about 5000-8000 Mers, spread out in various places across the oceans.

Also, something I'll be mentioning in my next post that you may want to put in the map: There's a HUGE colony of Mer right to the east of the continent, close enough that it could be seen from the shores.

It will be called Concentus

EDIT: If you could add that city, if would be greatly appreciated
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@Rtron@LokiLeo789 ca you give me the populations of your respective realms? I'd assume that human population as around 8000-10,000.
Zerabil's realm has around 1,200 humans, 300 Uri


Let's say a thousand or so, it would be best to say that there 300 Uri when they "hatched." and I don't know if 300 Uri would be reasonable to war with

And if the Uri create Alliance with the Mer-men, the Cimex could have a 2 front war on their hands/claws.
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Let's say a thousand or so, it would be best to say that there 300 Uri when they "hatched." and I don't know if 300 Uri would be reasonable to war with

And if the Uri don't create Alliance with the Mer-men, the Cimex could have a2 front war on their hands/claws.


If there were 300 when they hatched, and there are 300 Uri in Zerabil's realm, shouldn't there be more than just 1000 in the Uri realms? It has been 30 years. I'd expect 2000 to 4000 Uri to be in Uristan (...can't remember the name of the kingdom)
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@Hael Feel free to add it and upload the image via imgur.

In fact, everyone might want to place a mark on the map to show where they are - the Tabernacle, Ialu's village, Vestecian kingdom, important places in Uri and Cimex realms etc.
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<Snipped quote by LokiLeo789>

If there were 300 when they hatched, and there are 300 Uri in Zerabil's realm, shouldn't there be more than just 1000 in the Uri realms? It has been 30 years. I'd expect 2000 to 4000 Uri to be in Uristan (...can't remember the name of the kingdom)


Duisisian. 4000 is also a reasonable number, makes thinks easier for me to interpret also.
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<Snipped quote by LokiLeo789>

If there were 300 when they hatched, and there are 300 Uri in Zerabil's realm, shouldn't there be more than just 1000 in the Uri realms? It has been 30 years. I'd expect 2000 to 4000 Uri to be in Uristan (...can't remember the name of the kingdom)


Uristan should be the new official name

So is it reasonable for Ialu to have 500-600 people in the Strong Tribe and their hill village, and maybe like 5 villages of a few hundred inhabitants each in the nearby area under his control? For a total of around 2000?
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@Hael Feel free to add it and upload the image via imgur.

In fact, everyone might want to place a mark on the map to show where they are - the Tabernacle, Ialu's village, Vestecian kingdom, important places in Uri and Cimex realms etc.


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@Hael Feel free to add it and upload the image via imgur.

In fact, everyone might want to place a mark on the map to show where they are - the Tabernacle, Ialu's village, Vestecian kingdom, important places in Uri and Cimex realms etc.


Can do. I'll use the map you put on the last page.
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@Lugubrious

Spelling and Grammar: 10/10
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Story Line Advancement: 710 (very nice, Anju are being combatted, Invidia is at the summit, Order shall be restored to the world)
Character Development: 6/10 (Invidia definitely is developing personality once more, he has a favourite part of the day, has a distinct dislike for cold due to experience. I like)
Independence: 10/10

13 Khookies (just implementing the all-new harshness rule xP) also, Invidia should have received a 20 level boost due to the time-skip.
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<Snipped quote by Kho>

Uristan should be the new official name

So is it reasonable for Ialu to have 500-600 people in the Strong Tribe and their hill village, and maybe like 5 villages of a few hundred inhabitants each in the nearby area under his control? For a total of around 2000?


That's reasonable.
So, human pop total: 9,000
1,200 in Zerabil's realm
2,000 in Ialu's realm
5,800 remain
Vestecland probably has around 4,000, what with all their promiscuity
1,800 are probably independent villages or confederates.
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@Kho
Dang, this new harshness is making me worried.

I'm gonna get like 2 khookies, and then Cyclone's gonna mug me for them
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@Lugubrious

Spelling and Grammar: 10/10
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Story Line Advancement: 710 (very nice, Anju are being combatted, Invidia is at the summit, Order shall be restored to the world)
Character Development: 6/10 (Invidia definitely is developing personality once more, he has a favourite part of the day, has a distinct dislike for cold due to experience. I like)
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13 Khookies (just implementing the all-new harshness rule xP) also, Invidia should have received a 20 level boost due to the time-skip.


Aw. Well, had to start somewhere. At least I get a hecka-strong boost. Here's your updated map.

I didn't want to make excessive marks by outlining the Sanguine Communion's hunting ground, but it's pretty expansive.
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@Hael Include the SC on your map when you upload. Lugu's is a bit tiny ^^'
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