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@Maxx Accepted.
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Cool beans. I posted as Rafael, Sam, and Plague. I'll tack Carole and Taylor onto my next post.
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@Mr Allen J 1 out of 4/5, Here's my first NEST Agent.

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Say, is this still accepting characters? Definitely interested in an RP like this.
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I've decided I'm gonna withdraw my initial request to join. Take care folks.
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@Raijinslayer Interesting character, he seems pretty good to me, but a few things:

1). You DO know that Crystals are brittle? You can shatter a diamond by stepping on it. I just don't see the whole "nigh invulnerable" part. I mean, it can easily stop a knife, but a few bullets would crack even the hardest crystals.

2). I'm not super sure about the crystaling people part. Even if it takes awhile, it might not end well.

3). One of his nicknames should be "Crazy Diamond".

Other than that, I think he's pretty cool. I do like his power.

@Morden Man First, you didn't indent your sheet properly (The punishment for this heinous crime is being strapped to a chair, and being forced to listen to "Stupid Hoe" for all eternity!). Second, for his ethnicity section, you probably could have just said he was Jamaican/Thai/Whatever, and left the rest of the information for his history/other section. Third, I imagine that there'd be some serious repercussions for the whole incident where he injured another trainee (Like, that'd be something you'd get arrested for...). Finally, the power, I'd like a bit more detail as to what he can do (Since you can do a fuckton with magnetism), and you need to give him real weaknesses. What you listed aren't going to cut it because they apply to everyone.

@Angel Eyes Baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwww

@Maxx I've been wondering how Meifeng and Taylor's powers would interact with each other.
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@Mr Allen JYeah, that did come to mind, buuuuuuuut . . . Superpowers? I just liked the idea, and like I said, it's kind of enhanced crystals, which was my explanation of why they are so durable, if you want, I could change it to rock, but rock is boring, Crystals are awesome, my thought process is a nutshell. As for the crystalizing, I can get rid of it. He wasn't going to use it much anyway, so it's no sin off my bones.

Edit: That reminds me, bullets that can break his armor would be armor piercing rounds and most sniper rounds. Armor piercing because that's what they do, and sniper rounds cause sniper rifles have a lot of power. Shotguns could work to, if they are close enough or are Single Slug rounds.
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Hope this is all good. Pseudo-science aside, I tried to make it as clear as possible in terms of powers. If need be I can make it even more clear.

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@SavatoGood lord, I read that Supernova ability and can't help but think: "Yeah, Alek would be screwed if he ever got hit with that Supernova attack, since him and his crystals are extremely dense."
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@Morden Man First, you didn't indent your sheet properly (The punishment for this heinous crime is being strapped to a chair, and being forced to listen to "Stupid Hoe" for all eternity!). Second, for his ethnicity section, you probably could have just said he was Jamaican/Thai/Whatever, and left the rest of the information for his history/other section. Third, I imagine that there'd be some serious repercussions for the whole incident where he injured another trainee (Like, that'd be something you'd get arrested for...). Finally, the power, I'd like a bit more detail as to what he can do (Since you can do a fuckton with magnetism), and you need to give him real weaknesses. What you listed aren't going to cut it because they apply to everyone.


Thanks for the feedback, I've made some changes: actually learning how to indent for one, altering his history so that he almost injured another trainee instead of actually injured one, added to a weakness to mind control/telepathic attacks. Part of the reason my description of what he could do with his magnetism was so vague was because the character has little to no idea what he can do with it. I didn't want to list a bunch of things you could theoretically do with magnetism that I didn't intend to ever have him use. I've made some slight changes though.

Take a look at the changes I have made and let me know what you think. I can do my best to elaborate some more on the powers thing a little more if you deem it necessary.
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@SavatoGood lord, I read that Supernova ability and can't help but think: "Yeah, Alek would be screwed if he ever got hit with that Supernova attack, since him and his crystals are extremely dense."


You can thank Bambietta Basterbine and Solf J. Kimblee for teaching me the arts of screwing over overpowered defenses huehuehue.

Edit: I've added the speed of Supernova projectiles. I deleted it by accident I think. It's at the speed of a fast ball being thrown by a decent pitcher.
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@Zombiedude101 Oh shit, didn't notice you there. Yeah, it's still accepting.

@Savato Yeah, the character is solid, but that power isn't going to fly here. It's really, really, powerful, and no one can really defend against it. And one hit from the power would give someone cancer, and permanent problems.

@Raijinslayer You can keep the crystals, I was just noting that... at least say that high vibrations can break the crystals. I'd prefer if the crystallizing other people get cut, especially since he can generate crystals from out of the ground. I want to know just how durable the crystals are in general, just to take in consideration when he creates them. Because, the armor, despite how hard it is, wouldn't be able to nullify a kinetic impact (Which would hurt him through the armor if it was hard enough).PINK FLOYD REFERENCES

@Morden Man That still isn't that much of a weakness - especially since we don't have any mind powers.
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@Savato What you have here is a character who can throw a bomb at the speed of a fastball that, according to your weakness section, is essentially an OHKO if it hits bare skin. Even if it hit clothing, if I understand this properly, it would fuse with the material and explode, which would undoubtedly severely damage whoever is wearing it. Your power doesn't really have weaknesses either. It has limits, sure, but six supernova attacks is like being able to throw six bombs that fuse with their targets, and ten if he's absolutely desperate. A power that strong needs some substantial weaknesses.

@Mr Allen J Taylor V Meifeng would be a very interesting fight. I would assume that Taylor would be able to deflect Meifeng's ice attacks, but Meifeng could also turn all of Taylor's attacks back into water.
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@Savato Yeah, the character is solid, but that power isn't going to fly here. It's really, really, powerful, and no one can really defend against it. And one hit from the power would give someone cancer, and permanent problems.


No radiation poisoning.

@Savato What you have here is a character who can throw a bomb at the speed of a fastball that, according to your weakness section, is essentially an OHKO if it hits bare skin. Even if it hit clothing, if I understand this properly, it would fuse with the material and explode, which would undoubtedly severely damage whoever is wearing it. Your power doesn't really have weaknesses either. It has limits, sure, but six supernova attacks is like being able to throw six bombs that fuse with their targets, and ten if he's absolutely desperate. A power that strong needs some substantial weaknesses.


I'll answer to both of you on the explosion issue. So the problem is that it is capable of OHKO somebody by touch. The speed a fast ball seems a bit strange as an issue since, if I recall correctly, grenade launchers are as fast. I can slow it down, I don't mind.

As for its destruction potential. Yes, like most powers, a direct attack is often a OHKO. Although I suppose the lack of substantial counter is bothering you. I can make it easier to dodge by lowering its speed. I can also add that anything in their way will cause them to fuse, even with things like flames or any strange element. Perhaps I could have them explode five seconds after fusing, having the target flash to indicate it's about to explode or something, leaving time to purge whatever you may be wearing. It should be enough to 1) Not get hurt and 2) Figure out the power to be never hit again by IC logic. But if it hits flesh, it should leave substantial damage, I mean you got hit by the guy's best attack.

I can also lower is limit to like 4 and hit desperate limit to 6. I'm really okay with this.
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@Mr Allen JOkay, forgot about Vibrations and stuff like that. As for how durable the crystals are, his armor is more so than the ones he makes as it's a lot denser(meaning that he'll sink even faster into any liquid while he has it on) and could resist low caliber bullets with relative ease, shotguns at close range or slug rounds will cause moderate cracking, Sniper rifles and Large Calibur Hand cannons can severely crack the armor, even breaking/piercing it if the weapon is powerful enough. For more blunt damage, it could withstand getting hit by the punch of someone with moderate levels of super strength or having some throw a car at him. Both events would definitely cause him quite a bit of pain as well and would probably cause moderate to severe cracking, depending on how focused the area of effect is.
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@Mr Allen JOkay, forgot about Vibrations and stuff like that. As for how durable the crystals are, his armor is more so than the ones he makes as it's a lot denser(meaning that he'll sink even faster into any liquid while he has it on) and could resist low caliber bullets with relative ease, shotguns at close range or slug rounds will cause moderate cracking, Sniper rifles and Large Calibur Hand cannons can severely crack the armor, even breaking/piercing it if the weapon is powerful enough. For more blunt damage, it could withstand getting hit by the punch of someone with moderate levels of super strength or having some throw a car at him. Both events would definitely cause him quite a bit of pain as well and would probably cause moderate to severe cracking, depending on how focused the area of effect is.


Yeah, that's fine. Edit that into his sheet, and we'll be good to go. :)

@Mr Allen J Taylor V Meifeng would be a very interesting fight. I would assume that Taylor would be able to deflect Meifeng's ice attacks, but Meifeng could also turn all of Taylor's attacks back into water.


I could see it happening, given how easy it is to set Meifeng off (Though, she wouldn't resort to her powers so easily). The fight itself will probably turn into the world's greatest battle of attrition, to see who gets tired first.

Like two old men fighting.
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As for its destruction potential. Yes, like most powers, a direct attack is often a OHKO. Although I suppose the lack of substantial counter is bothering you. I can make it easier to dodge by lowering its speed. I can also add that anything in their way will cause them to fuse, even with things like flames or any strange element. Perhaps I could have them explode five seconds after fusing, having the target flash to indicate it's about to explode or something, leaving time to purge whatever you may be wearing. It should be enough to 1) Not get hurt and 2) Figure out the power to be never hit again by IC logic. But if it hits flesh, it should leave substantial damage, I mean you got hit by the guy's best attack.

I can also lower is limit to like 4 and hit desperate limit to 6. I'm really okay with this.


The speed wouldn't be a problem at all if the supernova attack wasn't so strong.

A five second timer is useless if it hits bare skin. That's still a total OHKO. The problem is that this power can OHKO anyone in the roleplay and has no actual weaknesses. Everything that you have listed is a limit. A weakness is something that can be used against an opponent to defeat them, like how my character Sam (who has invisibility) becomes visible if he is exposed to vibrations (such as that generated by his gun or by bumping into something). Think of it like this; if Batman were fighting your character, how would he defeat them?

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I could see it happening, given how easy it is to set Meifeng off (Though, she wouldn't resort to her powers so easily). The fight itself will probably turn into the world's greatest battle of attrition, to see who gets tired first.

Like two old men fighting.
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In the end, it would probably end up being a fight of who is better-trained and more skilled.
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The speed wouldn't be a problem at all if the supernova attack wasn't so strong.

A five second timer is useless if it hits bare skin. That's still a total OHKO. The problem is that this power can OHKO anyone in the roleplay and has no actual weaknesses. Everything that you have listed is a limit. A weakness is something that can be used against an opponent to defeat them, like how my character Sam (who has invisibility) becomes visible if he is exposed to vibrations (such as that generated by his gun or by bumping into something). Think of it like this; if Batman were fighting your character, how would he defeat them?


Erm shoot him? (with non-lethal bullets of course, it's batman) Though I think you mean counter. Well, anything? Anything in its way will cause it to detonate prematurely and hurt no one. I can slow it down and all you'd have to do is shoot them and the tiny little bullet explodes like a firecracker lol. The speed of uh, a running dog? Those are pretty easy to shoot. Batman throws a bat boomerang.

I can also just make them act like normal, non-fusing bombs if this is still too complicated.
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In the end, it would probably end up being a fight of who is better-trained and more skilled.


... Probably Taylor. Since Meifeng only had her power for a few months - though, she was training at Academy 12 for a bit, and she's probably driven enough to get badass at it.
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