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Name: Xavier (ANAGRAM: Revia (pronounced RAY-vie-uh))


Race: Nobody

Home World: Radiant Garden

Age: 15

Description: [INSERT IMAGE HERE]

Origin: Revia grew up in Hollow Bastion like any teen, except he was often bullied by the other kids. He would go to the Castle each day to hide away, but eventually they started to bully him there too. In his mid-teens, he began to grow sick of the teasing and bullying. He made contact with the darkness to attempt to get off of the world, to go on an adventure. The darkness began to pour from where he summoned it. The Heartless attacked him and he tried to fight back. He soon realized that he was hopeless. As he thought that, the metal pipe turned into a Key shaped weapon with a black handle and white blade. Moments after the Shadows overwhelmed him and stole his heart, leaving behind an empty shell known as a Nobody. That Nobody was named Xavier.

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Dark Affinity
Xaviers Dark affinity allows him to sense heartless and open doors to the Lanes Between.

Basic Magic
Revia had learned a little bit of magic on the side while he was in Hollow Bastion. He can cast Fire, Blizzard and Aero

No Heart
Having no heart allows Xavier to deal with situations that others couldn't such as death, fear, and anger.

Nobody
Xavier is a Nobody, which allows him to talk to and understand Dusks and other Nobodies.

QUESTIONAIRE


What are you afraid of?
"Fear? I don't understand that concept...."

What do you want out of life?
"To be whole again."

What's most important to you?
"Finding out who I was."
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I'm curious can I have my character learn magic later on specifically reflect and cure? also if magic is learn able any magic from dream drop distance or birth by sleep available like poison?
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Name: Xavier (ANAGRAM: Revia (pronounced RAY-vie-uh))


Race: Nobody

Home World: Radiant Garden

Age: 15

Description: [INSERT IMAGE HERE]

Origin: Revia grew up in Hollow Bastion like any teen, except he was often bullied by the other kids. He would go to the Castle each day to hide away, but eventually they started to bully him there too. In his mid-teens, he began to grow sick of the teasing and bullying. He made contact with the darkness to attempt to get off of the world, to go on an adventure. The darkness began to pour from where he summoned it. The Heartless attacked him and he tried to fight back. He soon realized that he was hopeless. As he thought that, the metal pipe turned into a Key shaped weapon with a black handle and white blade. Moments after the Shadows overwhelmed him and stole his heart, leaving behind an empty shell known as a Nobody. That Nobody was named Xavier.

Abilities:

Dark Affinity
Xaviers Dark affinity allows him to sense heartless and open doors to the Lanes Between.

Basic Magic
Revia had learned a little bit of magic on the side while he was in Hollow Bastion. He can cast Fire, Blizzard and Aero

No Heart
Having no heart allows Xavier to deal with situations that others couldn't such as death, fear, and anger.

Nobody
Xavier is a Nobody, which allows him to talk to and understand Dusks and other Nobodies.

QUESTIONAIRE


What are you afraid of?
"Fear? I don't understand that concept...."

What do you want out of life?
"To be whole again."

What's most important to you?
"Finding out who I was."


Lets rewind this.

Playing a Nobody is not something that occurred to me. Now with Roxas as the closest canon character of the same nature, I can't say that it would be impossible to use him however, I have a proposal for you.

Instead of starting as Xavier, show me Revia as your first character. Role play him for a little while so I can see just how human he is, then when the moment is right, the heartless will take his heart and the nobody will be born. In that time you'll give a character with no emotion a reason to form bonds with the other PC and vise versa.

I don't want you starting out like this when there's a potential story that you can have done during the RP.

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Aside from the proposal, the abilities of the character are no exactly abilities or skills. Dark affinity implied using darkness i get that but its used far too many ways to be one skill. You mention sensing heartless and opening the corridors of darkness. Both could be their own things :P

Basic magic does not include Aero. Aero isn't part of the Blizzard, Fire, and Thunder Trio.

No Heart: being unable to handle emotion thereby fear, death, and anger won't come into play much at all. This is a nye-useless ability which should really be reflected in personality of the original Someone. I mean if Revia can spawn a Nobody then he must really be a willful person. I want to know more about the personality of Revia if you want this sort of personality trait.

Nobody: no. Not only will this skill go unused but I don't understand how its an ability or skill.
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Edited my post for you hopefully things work out more XD

I changed the skills some of the origin and the age as well as the keyblade description.
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Put my CS in the character bin. And added a description of the keyblade. I think you said you could use slight variations of the Kingdom Key.
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Name: Akira
Home World: Radient Garden/ Hollo Bastion
Age: 15
Description: Akira is a tall well build young man with brown hair reaching his jawline and peircing blue eyes. He is typically seen wearing ablack t-shirt and baggy grey pants, over his left arm is what appears to be armor.
Origin: Akira grew up here well away from many of the others and began playing around with computers. One day he went off alone to go play in the courtyard around town and came across a horde of Heartless attacking one of his few friends who he then saw turned into one. Without thinking Akira grabbed a stick from teh ground and began swinging at the Heartless only to be attacked and see that the creatures were unscathed. Just as one of the creature lunged at him he swung the stick and as he did it transformed into a Keyblade. Akira stood not knowing what it was he was holding and continued on fighting until he couldn't fight anymore. He looked at the Weapon he held and smiled while the weapon looked like a generic key he knew deep in his soul that there was soumething special about it. Using his friends memory as fuel for his rage he continued on until he stood alone in the courtyard. Now after learning all he could from the computer near the courtyard, he has since traveled to Traverse Town after his wor4ld being captured by darkness choosing to seek out the Heartless and get revenge for his fallen friend.

Abilities
[Self Trained] - While he may not be as refined and skilled as the others hes melee combat is sufficent enough to get him through most situations.
[Magic Inept] - Akira had to learn magic on his own making it harder for him to perform spells and taking longer for them to be cast.
[Vengefull Soul] - Akira uses his friends memory to continue even when he seems to be weakened to a point of losing. His friendship fuels him forward giving him a brief burst of strength and skill. But in return severely exhausts him.
[Computer Wiz} - Akira has always been gifted with computers, learning how to use them from a very young age and later learning much from the computers near where his friend had been turned into a Heartless.
Questionnaire

What are you afraid of?
"Losing any more friends."

What do you want out of life?
"Revenge for all those who have fallen at the hands of Darkness"

What's most important to you?
"Friends, Family, Preserving all life tied to Light."


You travel the road just before dusk. The journey may seem difficult but you will ksoon learn the truth.
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Safe to say Nero and Akira know OF each other, but may not have spent alot of time together. Least I would think so.
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Yeah I just didn't want to make assumptions and throw off character stories.
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Night of the Final day, 3 and 1/2 hours remain to make new characters.

I think I like 7 keybladers though, its a lovely number.
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Ello are you guys still accepting characters?
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Are we gonna have some story progression soon? I might make a post today too.
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Ello are you guys still accepting characters?


No. Its officially teh cut off, which im about to change.
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Too bad I'm at work and can't post in ic I'm defiantly posting tonight though since stuffs happening.
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I figure that for one, I shouldn't post back to back, and for two, someone who's in the "main" group in front of the jeweler should respond to Cid.
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@Gisk that s exactly why I havent posted yet XD
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@Gisk that s exactly why I havent posted yet XD


Guys I'll post in a few hours I'm going to be free for the next few days too so I'll post waaaay more.
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Fer dont advertise in someones rp.

Unless you let me join it.
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I am gunna do this thing where I post every two days despite the number of people who have not posted. It'll keep the rp moving and those who are active are rewarded for their effort in keeping up.
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the narrative shows Markus tugging stupidly at the door until someone comes over and has the insight to try putting the giant key into the giant keyhole.
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