[OOC] Mark of the demon.

[Vladimir Grimm]

You could kill the time just by taking your Bio and putting as much detail into it from the beginning of your character's life, to all the important points along the road. But that's just my idea, you can add whatever you feel is necessary.

[Lady Seraphina]

Laue, you needn't feel the need to push our characters close together as a team so soon or all at once. We're not a group of superheros, some of the best RPs I've been in were the ones were the cast split off into two groups who eventually met up or ones where some people played the nemesis of others.

Not saying that we shouldn't all be together but maybe just let it happen more naturally rather than it kind of being "you art the sacred chosen ones of the holy prophecy" (imagine that in a chinese ninja master's voice).

Maybe you could go save Rinic's hide from the demon and you guys travel together for a time.

[Vladimir Grimm]

I couldn't have said it better, Parker.

[Laue]

Hmm. looks like I am constantly missing the mark with my posts, eh...

[Halvtand]

Melkor:
You have a good start, but I have to agree with Vlad that you're missing some detail. Mostly in the bio. we don't get to see anything apart from the encounter at Veriron. Sure, it's important, but we want to know a bit more about the character. where he comes from, how and where he picked up his skills, why he went into the military... That sort of thing.

[Laue]

Ok, final, minor edit. Hopefully the last.

[Halvtand]

Ok, this post was only part one of a much larger post, I wanted to let Vlad in and explain what happened to Mahtan while Seth and Susanna were away. At the end of my next one (which is coming soon after Vlad's) I'll move Seth and Susanna to a safe place for her to wake up.

[Melkor]

Alright I'll do that now.

[Laue]

@megarandom Seemingly as your character is walking along the path too, this could be used for our characters to finally meet. Maybe Urisk could hear a strange cry and go to check it out, only to see the final moments of Nianxi's battle, and her passing out.

[Melkor]

I've edited it, my apologies for taking so long to do so, my internet has been down all day.

[Vladimir Grimm]

Nianxi's blade is badass.

Also, would you mind if I sent Mahtan on the hunt for the shield? It being ice and all, seems like it would suit him.

[Halvtand]

Melkor:
The changes looks good. Feel free to jump into the game. Maybe I'll have Seth drop by for a lesson and a drink. :)

[Laue]

Vladimir Grimm said
Nianxi's blade is badass.Also, would you mind if I sent Mahtan on the hunt for the shield? It being ice and all, seems like it would suit him.

Not at all, he does, however, need to find out about it's existence first, or if he does know something about it, find it in the ruins in Velron, possibly already taken by one of the demons. And all those weapons are as badass as you want them to be.

[Vladimir Grimm]

I know, that's why I brought Mahtan towards Veiron. I thought it would probably be there.

[Lady Seraphina]

You know there is a good chance that Susanna will have a mild psychotic break upon returning there right?

[Melkor]

Thanks Halvtand, I'll begin working on my post now.

-edit-

Also if Seth comes by that would make it easier to get Cylus to leave Astoria.

[Vladimir Grimm]

Yes, Parker. That's why I did it :P Everything in my posts is a plan for much further along in the RP.

[Lady Seraphina]

Question: Why did Susanna slap Mahtan at the end of your post? I've been thinking about it and can't come up with something that doesn't sound cheesy.

[Vladimir Grimm]

Because of the fact that he brought her back to Veiron and acted like it wasn't a big deal. He doesn't know her story, so I assumed she'd be mad and think of him as insensitive.

[Melkor]

@Megarandom where is your character? I may be missing it but I don't see it in your posts.