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Who wants to set that up?
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I can.
Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by caliban22
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well alright I thought either I or the other gm/co gm would. but please feel free to.
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@floodtalon I'll be reviewing your CS later today. Need to post in my other RP first.
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@floodtalon We've reviewed the CS and determined that there's an issue with your character's kekkei genkai ability to cause frostbite and/or freeze an enemy with every hit. There's no apparent drawback to this at all; it seems like a passive ability that he can always use. It needs to be balanced in some way to make it a viable ability to have. Furthermore, you haven't PM'ed me the details of the Ice Release: Abomination of the Infinite Tundra like it mentions you would in the CS.
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@floodtalon We've reviewed the CS and determined that there's an issue with your character's kekkei genkai ability to cause frostbite and/or freeze an enemy with every hit. There's no apparent drawback to this at all; it seems like a passive ability that he can always use. It needs to be balanced in some way to make it a viable ability to have. Furthermore, you haven't PM'ed me the details of the Ice Release: Abomination of the Infinite Tundra like it mentions you would in the CS.


Do you know how when you touch Dry Ice it's so cold it freezes your skin and really hurts? Maybe Chen's taijutsu style could revolve around that sort of effect instead. Like the Hyuuga Gentle Fist but freezing the skin instead of sealing off Chakra. Also, I just PMed you.
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Do you know how when you touch Dry Ice it's so cold it freezes your skin and really hurts? Maybe Chen's taijutsu style could revolve around that sort of effect instead. Like the Hyuuga Gentle Fist but freezing the skin instead of sealing off Chakra. Also, I just PMed you.


There's still no drawback to it. With the Gentle Fist, the user injects chakra into each strike to attack the enemy's chakra points. At the very least, Chen should be required to maintain the effect with chakra which will mean he'll only be able to use it for a limited time. I think that would be a fair drawback.
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<Snipped quote by floodtalon>

There's still no drawback to it. With the Gentle Fist, the user injects chakra into each strike to attack the enemy's chakra points. At the very least, Chen should be required to maintain the effect with chakra which will mean he'll only be able to use it for a limited time. I think that would be a fair drawback.


That sounds like a plan. My thought process was he was using Ice Natured Chakra in each hit, but I am pretty cool with that too.
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@floodtalon Saw that you've made the appropriate edits. You're accepted. Go ahead and put your CS over to Characters.
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@Blu

Cool.
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@Anderiel Your CS is accepted. You can place it in Characters now.

How is everyone else's sheets coming along? I would like to start soon if possible.
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remember if you are stuck or you want to ask a question please feel free to ask Blu,Myself or Onewayout. It is part of the reason we are here.
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I'm pretty interested in this, wondering if I can still enter? I might have to think about it as I have quite a busy life at the moment what with college starting soon and the various other things I do, so I just want to know if there's even room for me at all.
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I'm pretty interested in this, wondering if I can still enter? I might have to think about it as I have quite a busy life at the moment what with college starting soon and the various other things I do, so I just want to know if there's even room for me at all.


There's always room but, considering your situation and depending on how long it takes for you to make a CS, you might enter when the IC has already started. If you're fine with that then know that there'll be room to join.
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All are welcome.
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It appears I've overestimated how much free time I would have going in to this semester. I'll try to stay up to date on this as it moves forward. I promise I'll be here in spirit.
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This still open?
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yes
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