[OOC] Knights of The Dawn Covenant: The Longest Winter

[LeoricAquila]

So much worth

[OtomostheCrazy]

Well that post is going to haunt my nightmares for a while. Well, let's get to reading it.

[TheTruthWhale]

I hope you enjoy the work we put in!

[Zelosse]

You know that feeling you get when something takes too long and when its finished, I doesn't meet up with your expectations?

This is not the case. Ive only been able to read barely a sampling (I'm at work) and its satisfying. It is writing beyond a character it is a soul let free.
I bow my head in respect. It is captivating, compelling, and I can feel the time you put into it.

I can't wait to read the rest when I get home.

[TheTwistedOne]

@Zelosse D'awwwww :3 <3 <3 much luffles for you

[LeoricAquila]

@Zelosse we really do appreciate it. We worked hard and we intend on only doing that a handful of times when we need to move a plot along with just the crew

[Zelosse]

You've made a memory here. Something that will stay with me, inspire me, and fuel that need to be a better writer that all players have.

You should all be very proud. It is difficult to express properly what a character is feeling without the use of visual aides, without turning it into a cesspool of irrelevant wording and clichéd pre-programmed responses.

Mine various gods

[TheTruthWhale]

It's an honor to hear such things.

[TheTwistedOne]

Making me feel all fuzzy inside @Zelosse

[LeoricAquila]

Its hard to work on stuff like that when you gotta juggle a 2yr old aswell

[TheDarkTemplar]

God that was a great read. @Zelosse, we may need to edit our collab to coordinate with this one.

[Zelosse]

@TheDarkTemplar I'm not home for another two hours. I trust you to make the right decisions

[LeoricAquila]

@TheDarkTemplar why u do dis to me

[TheTruthWhale]

@TheDarkTemplar

I do believe you have issued us a challenge, good sir!

I accept.

[TheDarkTemplar]

@TheTruthWhaleNONONO I DONT I MEANT WE GOTTA FIX OURS TO MAKE SENSE!

[LeoricAquila]

@TheTruthWhale don't encourage it

[TheDarkTemplar]

@ZelosseYeah I'm looking over ours and there's no way I can edit it to make sense. I'll just make a separate post for the dialogue between Evelyn and Draxis

[Zelosse]

@TheDarkTemplar ill take a look when I get home. We can address him in sure. Just gotta be crafty.

[TheTwistedOne]

@TheDarkTemplar I ponder what tricks you have waiting for all of us >: }

[TheDarkTemplar]

Hmm, perhaps a dialogue is not needed at all. I could add a little mentioning of Draxis's arrival that would hint that they had a conversation at some point during the night. This might work.