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...No offense, but those characters don't look like they fit into the world of Avatar at all. I mean, I'm obviously not the GM so I don't get much say in the matter of course, but still.
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are we allowed to have more then one character, because I was thinking of creating for mercenaries that fight on which ever side pays them the most. is that ok or are we only allowed one?


An entire group of benders will probably be a bit much. I was hoping for a bit of depth in the characters and their interactions, and I'm not sure how well anyone could do that with so many characters.
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An entire group of benders will probably be a bit much. I was hoping for a bit of depth in the characters and their interactions, and I'm not sure how well anyone could do that with so many characters.


ok, I'll just do the one. I'll edit my post so it's just one character and not four.
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Appearance:

"Water is life, meaning Waterbenders should understand how cruel it is to take life."

Name: Sorin

Age: 18

Family: Orphan, raised communally.

Type of Bending: Water bending, Healing

Personality: As innocent and caring as he is naive Sorin believes that no one should have to die. While he does not believe in killing he will attempt to stop anyone from attacking his friends. His skills as a healer are exceptional and have saved many lives. His calm demeanor has also made him very good at thinking and then acting, making him a very patient and deliberate fighter.

Bio: Born in the North Pole he was taken in by the royal family, serving as their attendant and doing many duties. He would also sneak out each night to pray at the Spirit Oasis for his parents to arrive one night and raise him. One night he slipped and fell in to the water of the pond, having never been taught to swim he shut his eyes and waited to die. Yet somehow the next morning he awoke beside the pond alive somehow as if saved by some mysterious force.

In the years that followed he sent to train as a Waterbender yet choose to study healing over combat feeling that it was his calling. As he was saved so should he save others, secretly though due to his falling in the pool his healing much stronger than average benders. Seeing as now the world threatened to break apart he has traveled to join the White Lotus and protect the world.

Equipment:

With little to his name he brought it all with him, a bag of clothes formal and casual. Three flasks of water and neatly hidden inside his shirt is a small vial with a drop of water from the Spirit Oasis.

Other:

Likes:
Full moons
Sitting by the ocean
Drawing
Singing

Dislikes:
Heat
Violence
Death

Habits:
Humming
Worrying about others
Tapping his foot

Fears;
Storms
Lightning
Explosions
Weapons
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Name: Seth Rush
Age:26
Family: None
Type of Bending: Fire
Personality: Collective, calm, calculating, hot headed
Bio:
Seth was born in the fire nation and trained to be part of the Fire nations army should it be needed at any time. Seth’s training was harsh and brutal but through it all he rose up the ranks and almost became a general if it wasn’t for the fact that he wasn’t hot headed and felt that any faulty member of the army should be kicked out and replaced with someone who wouldn’t falter. That all changed when the news of the Avatar’s death reached the fire nation. It sent the nation into a panic and only Seth seemed to be at ease through the whole ordeal.

Seth watched as the world went to hell in a hand basket after the Avatar’s death and knew his skills wouldn’t be utilized by the fire nation to bring peace and calm to the world.
He soon left the fire nation to join the white lotus o bring peace back to the nations and keep chaos from spreading any further.


He's awfully calm for a five year old. Not that I'd put it past the old fire nation, conscripting children, but I don't think the new Fire Lord, Zuko's daughter, would do that.




It's mostly a timeline problem. The Avatar was killed 21 years ago and with all of the worldwide trade that happens and radios, it wouldn't have taken more than a few days for the word of her death to reach them.

That said, I'm going to have Kuvira conscript every bender in her Empire, putting the children in military school, so if you want to be in the military as a child, that's fine. You could also be a military brat, and have simply grown up with the troops. Or whatever.

Also, I think you accidentally deleted the equipment and "other" sections from your CS.
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So am I approved?
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He's awfully calm for a five year old. Not that I'd put it past the old fire nation, conscripting children, but I don't think the new Fire Lord, Zuko's daughter, would do that.




It's mostly a timeline problem. The Avatar was killed 21 years ago and with all of the worldwide trade that happens and radios, it wouldn't have taken more than a few days for the word of her death to reach them.

That said, I'm going to have Kuvira conscript every bender in her Empire, putting the children in military school, so if you want to be in the military as a child, that's fine. You could also be a military brat, and have simply grown up with the troops. Or whatever.

Also, I think you accidentally deleted the equipment and "other" sections from your CS.


well he's not five he's 26. I'll just add more to the bio and I did by accident when I deleted the other character sheets.
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@Apollosarcher yep, you're approved.

@Rex I meant that he would have been 5 when the avatar died. I was just joking about it, though. If it sounded like I was being a jerk, I wasn't trying to.
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I fixed what you asked me to. I think you missed the post where I said I did. Just thought I should let you know. :)
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@Apollosarcher yep, you're approved.

@Rex I meant that he would have been 5 when the avatar died. I was just joking about it, though. If it sounded like I was being a jerk, I wasn't trying to.


oh no, I knew what you meant. I might have come off as a jerk though. sorry. I do have a question. when the Avatar dies, would Zuko's daughter ask any and all fire nation people who left the fire nation to come back to help the war effort or would she only ask those in the fire nation to fight?
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I fixed what you asked me to. I think you missed the post where I said I did. Just thought I should let you know. :)


I'm sorry. I thought I had approved it. It's approved now, though.
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I'm sorry. I thought I had approved it. It's approved now, though.


Hey, maybe you did and I just missed it. Either way the situation, if we can even call it that, has been cleared up.
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oh no, I knew what you meant. I might have come off as a jerk though. sorry. I do have a question. when the Avatar dies, would Zuko's daughter ask any and all fire nation people who left the fire nation to come back to help the war effort or would she only ask those in the fire nation to fight?


She was on really good terms with the other world leaders and would have probably tried forming an alliance instead, but, now that I think about it, Zaheer would have killed her. Let's say that her son, General Iro, returned to the fire nation and became the new fire lord. He then formed a treaty with the other nations which, among other things, eventually banned the use of spirit beam weapons and formed something like our UN.

I'll add a bit about the spirit weapons and UN to the OP so that the world's views on them are more clear.
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Cool more people, welcome all =) Also I just noticed that a ton of us are the decedents of many of the Avatars' former foes... are we sure we aren't really the bad guys here?
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ok, here's the new character sheet. a lot has changed and I like all the changes. thank you for helping me get the character sheet to a much better state.

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Cool more people, welcome all =) Also I just noticed that a ton of us are the decedents of many of the Avatars' former foes... are we sure we aren't really the bad guys here?


XD, hey I just thought it would be fun to play someone who was a little crazy, and it made sense to have them related to Azula.
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@AirBender Trust me I get it, crazy characters are usually the most exciting characters to play XD And Azula's brand of crazy without of doubt will be fun to see in this RP. Oh and just out of curiosity does Aiza take after her great grandmamma in regards of her fire, is it normal fire or is it some of that BURN THE WORLD blue fire?
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@Rex Just wondering, but did you adapt him from a Serenity RP character? The picture and, of course, character names made me think of that. I was in one once, but in never got started good.

The only problems I saw were the names, as they don't fit with the Avatar universe. The team can still be the Fireflies (after all, there's also the fire ferrets playing) but your name, Malcolm, and Serenity don't really fit. Other than that it's fine.
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@AirBender Trust me I get it, crazy characters are usually the most exciting characters to play XD And Azula's brand of crazy without of doubt will be fun to see in this RP. Oh and just out of curiosity does Aiza take after her great grandmamma in regards of her fire, is it normal fire or is it some of that BURN THE WORLD blue fire?


Oh good question. I guess it would depend on how sane she was at any given time. At this point her fire is normal. But if/when she gets crazier it might change to blue fire.
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@AirBender Hmm that is interesting, her fire changing depending on her emotional state. Could lead to a very interesting tell.

"Hey are you mad?"

Aiza: "No!"

"Really? Then set something on fire to prove it."
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