[OOC] Star Wars: The Clone Wars - Order 66 Rewritten [Closed/Dead; Thanks You Everyone Who Participated!]

[Shiny Keldeo]

@Louis Dabout Once the Application is Complete I Will Comment on it or Approve/Deny it.

[Louis Dabout]

@Shiny Keldeo
Here?

Name: Joachim Hoch
Species: Human
Gender: Male
Rank: Master
Age: 35
Personality: Joachim's master was El'jashar an old Ithorian who taught Joachim much of the values of patience and learning to utilise patience to discover the right moment to strike. Joachim has because of the war grown to be a rather taciturn jedi who has steadily become obsessed with ending the war. Nowadays Joachim is driven by this desire to end the war and little else matters to him
Legion Commanding: 136th 'The Bush Tigers
Clone Commanding Officer: Commander 'Vicor' - CC-507089
Lightsaber: A single lightsaber, its blade is blue.
Lightsaber form/s: Trakata, Makashi, Niman, Soresu and Juyo. Mastery in Soresu. His personal style employs a strong Soresu base on which is built a formidable arsenal of Makshi, Niman and Juyo attacks melded with Trakata.

[Shiny Keldeo]

@Louis Dabout Need the Clone Commanding Officer's ID Number, Otherwise Accepted. PS, You Don't Have to Make a New Post for That, You Could have Just Modified the Old One.

Also, @nano627 Your App is Fully Approved, You can Put it in the Characters Tab Now.

[Louis Dabout]

When does IC begin?

[Shiny Keldeo]

@Louis Dabout There are a Few People Still Touching Up Their Apps and Such, As Soon As They are Done We Begin.

[Shiny Keldeo]

@Louis Dabout Just Noticed One Thing Wrong with Your Character sheet You Posted in Characters, The Number Format Goes Like This: CC-####, Reduce the Numerical Size to 4 Numbers Please.

[mattmanganon]

@Shiny Keldeo I wasn't looking for anything too sexual. I was primarily hoping to explore the taboo of the subject and how they make it work.

[caliban22]

Made some updates

[mattmanganon]

Name: Kiana
Species: Dathomirian
Gender: Female
Rank: Master
Master (If Padawan): (Formerly a student of Master Plo-Koon)
Legion Commanding: Special Ops
Clone Commanding Officer: PENDING
Bio: Born on Dathomir, she was born into a Witch Coven, she grew up learning to control the Dark Side of the force. She grew strong in the Dark Side of the Force. When she was 20, she was sent to assassinate Jedi Master Plo-Koon, and failed. She was taken prisoner and exposed to the ways of the Jedi. All of her life, she had been taught that hate and passion were the only true means of attaining power, but here were the Jedi. They were the most widespread and powerful force weilding groups in the universe, who showed compassion to others. Perhaps, their way of doing things was the true way forward.

At first the Council forbade her entry into the order, the Witch's of Dathomir were known for their deceptiveness, but feeling no ill intent in her wish to join, Master Yoda accepted. She was placed under the direction of Jedi Master Plo-Koon, who taught her the Jedi way. Over the years, she fought for the Jedi for over 2 centuries. Although, she showed during the Stark Hyperspace War that she was rather a brash commander, her actions, though effective, showed that, as far as she had come, she was not ready to command many yet. She has proven that she is not a competant commander. She leaves the command work to her commander. That being said, she is still the head of the special forces, due to her being one of the most experienced Jedi in the order. She trains the Clone Assassins, a special unit of clones trained for the purposes of fighting the Sith in the C.I.S.

(Will add more when I get a partner)

Saber Forms:

Juyo (Master, taught this form by the Witch Mother. Forbidden from using.)
Shien (Master, taught by Master Plo Koon.)
Shii-Cho (Moderate, taught by Master Plo Koon.)

Lightsaber: Green Lightsaber + Blue Double Lightsaber

[Zarkun]

I couldn't find what style of combat would be used for a long-handled saber, since it's a bit unorthodox for the normal forms. Anyone else have any luck?

[urukhai]

Name: Silas Va'aan

Rank: Master

Personality: A generally happy man, Silas seems to have adopted a combination of both the jedi's teachings and those touted by his Echani heritage. The result being a jedi who is light handed in terms of combat and in his personal life, and as at home in the battlefield as in the temple. A capable general, Silas has been known to defer military judgment to his commander at various times, and is all around very respectful of the clones under his command (often even being seen eating among them and joining in various down time games of chance). His thoughts as to why he dose this, is that "If one gets to know their soldiers, and becomes one of them in both mind and in spirit. Then they will give you 210% when the need arises."

Master (If Padawan): None currently

Legion Commanding: 419th Incursion Corps

Clone Commanding Officer: CC-4461 "Krayt"

Commanders personality: Off the wall, would be a good way to begin to describe Krayt. Being a veteran of many battles and one of the most senior members of the 419th, Krayt holds high regard among his contemporaries and subordinates for his tactical mind, as well as his honed combat abilities. However this is offset by his ferocity, which can get the best of him (and what earned him his nickname), but is right at home in the 419th. He prefers heavy weapons over normal clone armaments, and often has a rocket launcher as his backup weapon if conventional tactics fail.

Lightsaber (Silas's blade langth is slightly longer than a normal saberstaff, imaprting the look and feeling of an Echani dual blade weapon)

Lightsaber forms known/mastered: Form VI Niman (primary), Form IV Ataru (secondary), form VII Juyo (secondary), Echani martial arts (a supplementary to his primary form).

Background info: The son of Seras Va'aan, an Echani, and Nor Va'aan, a human, the child who would come to be named Silas was adopted into the order at a relatively young age even for younglings. His training in form I progressed quickly, the young half-breed showing the natural talent of his mothers species with a blade, tempered by the sheer determination of his human side to get it right the first time.

When the time came for him to take on the role of a padawan, Silas found himself in the tutelage of master Ferres Undai, an older human. Her teachings were long and broad, with lessons coming from facets found in life, not just from books. One could say that Ferres could write a book on the living force and how it relates to heating broth for a soup, and in fact she probably could. But, as Silas realized, her teachings all made sense and helped the young padawan develop a deep connection with the force, both as a tool and as a living entity, even if soup was used to show it.

Master Ferres was also instrumental in Silas's development of his lightsaber style, not only by answering his questions about different styles and even teaching him in them, but by encouraging him to immerse himself in the culture and practices of his mother's people. This study allowed Silas to develop the "language" the the Echani "speak" in the action of battle, as well as shaping his lightsaber combat form into a fluid an cohesive extension of his personality and heritage.

Silas became a knight a the age of 17, his master presenting him with a gift after his ceremony. A small shaped metal pendent engraved with a single word Remember, and hung from a silken chord. After presenting the gift Ferres hung it around Silas's neck and without a single word tapped him on the side of the head, a gesture she would use to enforce lessons in his youth, and left the young Knight. Silas still wears the pendent to this day, few know of it's existence and Silas prefers it that way.

Truly mastering his fighting style in his early twenties, Silas would continue as a knight in service of the republic and order, durning this time he rose to be the general of the 419th, fighting alongside them in many battles and distinguishing himself as both a leader and a jedi. His ascension to Master rank came around his 30th-31st year of life.

Now 39, Silas still leads the 419th much in the same way he did as a Knight, refusing to allow his position to weigh him down more than it needs to.

Info on the 419th Incursion Corps: Nicknamed the "Warhammer of the Republic", the 419th Incursion Corps is characterized by an above average number of AT-PT's, AT-TE's, AT-RT's and A6 Juggernauts. Heavily armored and ferocious, the 419th is deployed to quite literally smash enemy positions or to enact drawn out sieges on entrenched worlds. Another characterization of the 419th is their tendency to 'decorate' their vehicles and walkers, with many being painted with stylized beasts renown for their great ferocity (an example being CC-4461's personal AT-TE being painted with a stylized Krayt dragon that runs down both sides). All paintings however are done in a burnt amber color, an allusion to the generals lightsaber color.

The backbone of the 419th in space is several Venator-class Star Destroyers, with the Venator Relentless Intent, serving as both their main command vessel and Silas's personal flagship. Each Venator is supplemented by several Acclamator-class assault ships, that also double as the 419th's planetary landing vehicles.

[urukhai]

@Zarkun

hmm what kind of fighting do you want to do in combat?

Also Here is a series of videos that ive used that have good info in them

[Zarkun]

I know the forms, the issue is that the long-handled saber doesn't work under the practical application of them. In fact, there's a specific fighting style that goes with it but I can't find what that style is anywhere.

[urukhai]

Ahh I see, I apologize

I'll look around and see what i can come up with, if it'll help

[Zarkun]

That it would. Of course, I'm not sure how much more luck you'll have than I have XD Stayed up til three am looking last night.

[Shiny Keldeo]

@mattmanganon Just a Heads Up, The Special Ops Unit I Described is Led by CC-1993 "Commander Jet", Who Served Under General Ki-Adi-Mundi During the Second Battle of Geonosis. Gonna Let You Think About That Before I Accept Your Application.

@urukhai So Far So Good, Not Many Problems Except Possibly a Minor Misspell of the Commanders ID Number, You Put CV Instead of CC. As Soon as the App is Fully Finished, I'll Look at it Again and Accept/Deny It.

@caliban22 Looks Good To Me, Accepted, Put it With the Others in the Character Section.

[urukhai]

@Shiny Keldeo

Alright I think I am done! As usual if i did anything wrong please tell me so I can fix it!

[Apollosarcher]

@mattmanganon I can play your commander if you like, I'll be making my sheet later but I was originally going to be an the leader of a squad like in Republic Commando.

[mattmanganon]

@Apollosarcher Well, if you still want to make that, i'm fine with her being a part of a Commando squad, I was just hoping, at some point, to work in maybe a couple of these guys under her command.

That being said, if they work as shadow operatives for her, scouting ahead, unseen, and picking off key targets along the way, they would still serve her purpose.

[Shiny Keldeo]

@urukhai Nice Long Backstory, Me Like, Accepted.

@mattmanganon Clone Assassins... Eh, Little Vague in Their Use, I Know Perfectly Well Who they Are, Just They are a Very Vague Reference to Anyone Who Didn't Play Episode III. Could Work Though, Not Sure.

And To Everyone, I Will Be Starting the RP Off Tomorrow With Deployments from Republic Command, So Be Ready for That.