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@Sovi3t @Mortarion @Oak7ree I will be updating within a day or two, do any of you need time to finish ongoing posts? If not, you guys can just add it with the next set of responses.
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@gcold Nope, no ongoing posts so will probably post again after the update if that's ok
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@gcold I don't have posts to finish.
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Gave Keegan a mug on his sheet, also changed Farid's hometown to Dragon Gate.
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Gave Keegan a mug on his sheet, also changed Farid's hometown to Dragon Gate.


Look at those dirty, dirty criminals in that list too.
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Look at those dirty, dirty criminals in that list too.


Hey now, it wasn't Keegan's fault the other dumbass burned down a theater, just a big misunderstanding. For the other scoundrels, well, not sure if they can be redeemed...

If excessive facial hair was a crime, Jorwen's head would have been long chopped off, seeing it is easier to cut it off than cutting his beard off.

Vurwe Highorin


What's this? Fresh meat?

Welcome, let's make some cuts before we get you cooking.

5'6 is basically an Altmer midget, combined with her age, 17, Vurwe seems too juvenile for her experiences. Being exiled due to her lineage is reasonable, but traveling the entirety of High Rock and playing Breton politics is less so for a grammar-school aged kid. I would, however, accept her background if you bump the age to 25+ and either increase her height to 6+ feet or an explanation for abnormal shortness.

What is that dagger made of? Anything specific about it? Modifications or enchantments?

500 is a damn big stash of gold. Given her background, I actually have no problem with Vurwe owning that much. However, carrying that much in person doesn't sound practical to me. Try storing some in banks or converting to smaller valuables.

Everything else checks out, your sheet is pretty neat, precise and concise, I like it.

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Edited out a typo on the sheet.

Hey now, it wasn't Keegan's fault the other dumbass burned down a theater, just a big misunderstanding. For the other scoundrels, well, not sure if they can be redeemed...


''It wasn't slavery, it was just forced labor contraction!''

Name: Vurwe Highorin



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What's this? Fresh meat?

Welcome, let's make some cuts before we get you cooking.

5'6 is basically an Altmer midget, combined with her age, 17, Vurwe seems too juvenile for her experiences. Being exiled due to her lineage is reasonable, but traveling the entirety of High Rock and playing Breton politics is less so for a grammar-school aged kid. I would, however, accept her background if you bump the age to 25+ and either increase her height to 6+ feet or an explanation for abnormal shortness.

What is that dagger made of? Anything specific about it? Modifications or enchantments?

500 is a damn big stash of gold. Given her background, I actually have no problem with Vurwe owning that much. However, carrying that much in person doesn't sound practical to me. Try storing some in banks or converting to smaller valuables.

Everything else checks out, your sheet is pretty neat, precise and concise, I like it.


Made suggested changes, also considering the dagger could be an elven dagger (moonstone, quicksilver, steel) specifically enchanted to glow when lowborns are nearby (any humanoid who is not an Altmer, primary races).

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Typical, a Nord solve all their problems through base violence. That's why we gave Skyrim to the Dovahkiin, of our own accord.
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Sevine is much too polite to engage in unwarranted violence
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Oh, Roze is going to just love this new chick.
I'm already thinking up insults for her now...
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I think Tsleeixth won't like Vurwe, but would be too polite to make any sort of insults unless he was too angered
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I think Tsleeixth won't like Vurwe, but would be too polite to make any sort of insults unless he was too angered


I think Vurwe won't like Tsleeixth, but would be too superior to make more than twenty comments on his inherent and genetically guided inferiority.

Oh, Roze is going to just love this new chick.
I'm already thinking up insults for her now...


Sticks and stones may break my bones,
But the words of a slovenly half-breed will fall on deaf ears.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ijhhe8Q_dQs - ON ANOTHER NOTE, INSPIRING MUSIC. BEHOLD.
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<Snipped quote by MiddleEarthRoze>

Sticks and stones may break my bones,
But the words of a slovenly half-breed will fall on deaf ears.


Good job Roze knows how to use those sticks to hurt people then - what a wonderful thing a well-placed arrow is.
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Sagax will sit and listen respectfully to whatever Vurwe has to say. He's a nice dude like that.
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I think Vurwe won't like Tsleeixth, but would be too superior to make more than twenty comments on his inherent and genetically guided inferiority.


Good think that Tsleeixth learned long ago to ignore that kind of comments then
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Sevine is much too polite to engage in unwarranted violence


Well, that means Sadri will have to slap alone.
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Sevine is much too polite to engage in unwarranted violence


Edited out a typo on the sheet.

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''It wasn't slavery, it was just forced labor contraction!''

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Precisely! If anything, Sevine will be courteous in most cases. Though, if she starts drinking, I would watch out...but hey, as long as no one steals her sweet rolls. everything should be ok.

@Peik Haha, I don't know where you found that comic, but all I could do is laugh, mainly because I pictured Cat-Kicker being in the receiving end of that slap!
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Sagax will sit and listen respectfully to whatever Vurwe has to say. He's a nice dude like that.


As he should, everything an Altmer says is notable and worth writing down.



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Haha, I don't know where you found that comic, but all I could do is laugh, mainly because I pictured Cat-Kicker being in the receiving end of that slap!


It's from Berserk.
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