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Yup and of course you have to use reality there if using Hado 90...soooo...yeah once a battle is literally it's limit...twice if your pushing it...but it drains the energy BIG time so you know use...bleach Reality with RP reality and common sense and you soon understand what you can and cant use a lot xDI'd like to say yes...however I don't think we can xDDDD


Your right, there's no substance on earth that can contain fangirls xD
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Vongola_Hasayo said
Your right, there's no substance on earth that can contain fangirls xD


x) That's truer than you think
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x) That's truer than you think


Again I am corrected. Not even adamantium which came from space can contain them...for all we know nothing in the universe can...OH GOD WE'RE ALL GONNA DIE XDD
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Again I am corrected. Not even adamantium which came from space can contain them...for all we know nothing in the universe can...OH GOD WE'RE ALL GONNA DIE XDD


You won't die, or else we won't have anyone to fangirl over x)
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You won't die, or else we won't have anyone to fangirl over x)


Oh right...OH GOD WE'RE ALL GONNA BE LOCKED IN AN ADAMANTIUM CAGE XDD
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Revised CS: Name: Kenny (no other name known.)

Appearance: a Soul Reaper gi with no shirt, short-cropped hair and a black hood with a mask covering everything from nose to collarbone, and hands wrapped from forearm to knuckle in black cloth. He is EXTREMELY built. Scars crisscross his torso and he is missing his left eye. He has never bothered to put a patch over the eye, and has no eyelid for that socket.

Age: (Keep it sensible! Think of it like this. 10 Shinigami years equal 1 of our years so a 19 year old would be 190. Just what we go by) 240

Height: 6’3

Weight: 265

Hair Colour: Black

Eye Colour: Green

Race: Shinigami

Rank: Unseated, but I hope to rise to captain.

Spiritual Energy Colour: Black

Personality: Outside of battles, Kenny is hard to pin down to any one personality type, and prefers to stay within the Seireitei's library rather than interact with others due to a dislike of conversation. He is a loner by some accounts, preferring to keep a small circle of friends rather than a large social set.

In battles he possesses a quiet, calm rage that allows him to rage at his opponent in a tactical, analytical mind. He is sadistic against opponents, largely as psychological revenge for the beatings he received prior to entering the academy.

History: Kenny does not remember much of his life before coming to the Academy; he cannot even remember his real name. What he does remember is admiring the captains of the Gotei 13, and in particular remembers seeing a move he would later learn was Hado #90. From then on, he set his goals: become a captain and learn the Hado that had fascinated him for what little of his life he remembers. His goals were not met by all with welcome arms; he was beaten almost routinely by the more priveledged for aspiring so high.

However, once inside the academy, Kenny was welcomed and he acclimatised to life there quickly, being trained as if his life depended on it.he expelled at Hado and close quarters combat, while showing some skill in sword fighting. Eventually he came under the purview of the former squad 11 captain and was offered a place there upon graduation. Kenny accepted and threw himself into his studies with two goals in mind: become captain and master Hado #90: Kurohitsugi. During a training incident, however, he lost his left eye. In response, he beat the other student to a bloody pulp with his bare hands.

At graduation, he received his Zanpakuto, learning his name within 5 days. Despite being unseated, the man shows promise.

Other:

~Zanpakuto~

Zanpakuto name: Sankontessuo(Iron Reaver)

Type: Combat

Zanpakuto Shikai Release command: Reap

Spirit Appearance: like the grim reaper

Inner world: (optional)

Sealed appearance: Ninjato with a black wrapped hilt

Shikai appearance: a scythe with a red blade

Bankai appearance: sickle with a black blade

Shikai skills:
(Start off with no Shikai or 4 to 5 Shikai skills)
1. Fear inducement(minor, but all it does is the equivalent of an increased heartrate) there are the after effects of being fearful of Sankontessuo's wielder for the duration of 6 posts, with a cool down of 3 posts.
2.a slash similar to a getsuga tensho in function.(one post cool down/1 post duration.)
3. Increased speed by 20%
4. Darkness generation similar to what Tosen was able to do but without the sensory deprivation, rather, it simply forces the battlefield to shrink to a more intimate level by way of illusion. Lasts for entire battles but cannot be used for 6 posts afterwards. Takes 6 posts to be able to use.
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8.

Bankai skills:
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2.
3.
4.
5.
6. (Ultimate Skill)

Non-lethal Zanpakuto Skills: instigates fear.

Skills

Zanjutsu: Shitonegashi
Kido:Tsuzuri Raiden
Hakuda:Tesshō
Hoho:Shunpo

Points gained from missions:
Mission log:
Points spent and skills gained:
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Well, is it good?
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DeathstrokeSW said
Well, is it good?


To be honest no, the history could use some more work and the personality could use something.
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Back to the drawingboard.
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I EDITED THE CS AND EXPANDED ON THE HISTORY AND PERSONALITY. Tell me what you think.
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Revised CS: Name: Kenny (no other name known.)

Appearance: a Soul Reaper gi with no shirt, short-cropped hair and a black hood with a mask covering everything from nose to collarbone, and hands wrapped from forearm to knuckle in black cloth. He is EXTREMELY built. Scars crisscross his torso and he is missing his left eye. He has never bothered to put a patch over the eye, and has no eyelid for that socket.

Age: (Keep it sensible! Think of it like this. 10 Shinigami years equal 1 of our years so a 19 year old would be 190. Just what we go by) 240

Height: 6’3

Weight: 265

Hair Colour: Black

Eye Colour: Green

Race: Shinigami

Rank: Unseated, but I hope to rise to captain.

Spiritual Energy Colour: Black

Personality: Outside of battles, Kenny is hard to pin down to any one personality type, and prefers to stay within the Seireitei's library rather than interact with others due to a dislike of conversation. He is a loner by some accounts, preferring to keep a small circle of friends rather than a large social set.

In battles he possesses a quiet, calm rage that allows him to rage at his opponent in a tactical, analytical mind. He is sadistic against opponents, largely as psychological revenge for the beatings he received prior to entering the academy.

History: Kenny does not remember much of his life before coming to the Academy; he cannot even remember his real name, only the persistent beatings and rough life in the Rukongai. What he does remember is admiring the captains of the Gotei 13, and in particular remembers seeing a move he would later learn was Hado #90. From then on, he set his goals: become a captain and learn the Hado that had fascinated him for what little of his life he remembers. His goals were not met by all with welcome arms; he was beaten almost routinely by the more priveledged for aspiring so high. They did not know that his dreams would allow him to see beyond the hell that was the roughest part of the Rukongai, and achieve the strength needed to rise above and become captain.

However, once inside the academy, Kenny was welcomed and he acclimatised to life there quickly, being trained as if his life depended on it. He excelled at Hado and close quarters combat, while showing some skill in sword fighting. Eventually he came under the purview of the former squad 11 captain and was offered a place there upon graduation. Kenny accepted and threw himself into his studies with two goals in mind: become captain and master Hado #90: Kurohitsugi. During a training incident, however, he lost his left eye by accident. In response, he beat the other student to a bloody pulp with his bare hands, despite the other boy being on the fast track to Lt. Captain. It was a feat which largely impressed his instructors, and in particular the man who taught him Kido.

After graduation, he sat and meditated with his Zanpakuto and learned its name after five days. Despite being unseated, he shows promise.

Other:

~Zanpakuto~

Zanpakuto name: Sankontessuo(Iron Reaver)

Type: Illusion/Melee

Zanpakuto Shikai Release command: Reap

Spirit Appearance:

Inner world:

Sealed appearance:
Shikai appearance:
Bankai appearance:

Shikai skills:
(Start off with no Shikai or 4 to 5 Shikai skills)
1. Fear inducement(minor, but all it does is the equivalent of an increased heartrate) there are the after effects of being fearful of Sankontessuo's wielder for the duration of 6 posts, with a cool down of 7 posts.
2.a slash similar to a getsuga tensho in function.(2 post cool down/1 post duration.) It is named Shadow wave or Kage no nami
3. Increased speed by 20% (3post duration/4 post cooldown)
4. Darkness generation similar to what Tosen was able to do but without the sensory deprivation, rather, it simply forces the battlefield to shrink to a more intimate level by way of illusion. Lasts for entire battles but can only use once per day. As yet, Sankontessuo has not revealed the name of this move to him. As a result its effectiveness is reduced by 50%.
5.
6.
7.
8.

Bankai skills:
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
6. (Ultimate Skill)

Non-lethal Zanpakuto Skills: instigates fear.

Skills

Zanjutsu: Shitonegashi
Kido:Tsuzuri Raiden
Hakuda:Tesshō
Hoho:Shunpo

Points gained from missions:
Mission log:
Points spent and skills gained:
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Revised CS: Name: Kenny (no other name known.)Appearance: a Soul Reaper gi with no shirt, short-cropped hair and a black hood with a mask covering everything from nose to collarbone, and hands wrapped from forearm to knuckle in black cloth. He is EXTREMELY built. Scars crisscross his torso and he is missing his left eye. He has never bothered to put a patch over the eye, and has no eyelid for that socket. Age: (Keep it sensible! Think of it like this. 10 Shinigami years equal 1 of our years so a 19 year old would be 190. Just what we go by) 240Height: 6’3Weight: 265Hair Colour: BlackEye Colour: GreenRace: ShinigamiRank: Unseated, but I hope to rise to captain. Spiritual Energy Colour: BlackPersonality: Outside of battles, Kenny is hard to pin down to any one personality type, and prefers to stay within the Seireitei's library rather than interact with others due to a dislike of conversation. He is a loner by some accounts, preferring to keep a small circle of friends rather than a large social set. In battles he possesses a quiet, calm rage that allows him to rage at his opponent in a tactical, analytical mind. He is sadistic against opponents, largely as psychological revenge for the beatings he received prior to entering the academy. History: Kenny does not remember much of his life before coming to the Academy; he cannot even remember his real name. What he does remember is admiring the captains of the Gotei 13, and in particular remembers seeing a move he would later learn was Hado #90. From then on, he set his goals: become a captain and learn the Hado that had fascinated him for what little of his life he remembers. His goals were not met by all with welcome arms; he was beaten almost routinely by the more priveledged for aspiring so high. However, once inside the academy, Kenny was welcomed and he acclimatised to life there quickly, being trained as if his life depended on it. He excelled at Hado and close quarters combat, while showing some skill in sword fighting. Eventually he came under the purview of the former squad 11 captain and was offered a place there upon graduation. Kenny accepted and threw himself into his studies with two goals in mind: become captain and master Hado #90: Kurohitsugi. During a training incident, however, he lost his left eye. In response, he beat the other student to a bloody pulp with his bare hands. At graduation, he received his Zanpakuto, learning his name within 5 days. Despite being unseated, the man shows promise. Other:~Zanpakuto~Zanpakuto name: Sankontessuo(Iron Reaver)Type: CombatZanpakuto Shikai Release command: ReapSpirit Appearance: like the grim reaperInner world: (optional)Sealed appearance: Ninjato with a black wrapped hiltShikai appearance: a scythe with a red bladeBankai appearance: sickle with a black bladeShikai skills:(Start off with no Shikai or 4 to 5 Shikai skills)1. Fear inducement(minor, but all it does is the equivalent of an increased heartrate) there are the after effects of being fearful of Sankontessuo's wielder for the duration of 6 posts, with a cool down of 3 posts. 2.a slash similar to a getsuga tensho in function.(one post cool down/1 post duration.)3. Increased speed by 20%4. Darkness generation similar to what Tosen was able to do but without the sensory deprivation, rather, it simply forces the battlefield to shrink to a more intimate level by way of illusion. Lasts for entire battles but cannot be used for 6 posts afterwards. Takes 6 posts to be able to use. 5.6.7.8.Bankai skills:1. 2. 3. 4.5. 6. (Ultimate Skill) Non-lethal Zanpakuto Skills: instigates fear.SkillsZanjutsu: ShitonegashiKido:Tsuzuri RaidenHakuda:TesshōHoho:ShunpoPoints gained from missions:Mission log:Points spent and skills gained:
Isn't that the same exact post that could be seen by simply scrolling five post upwards?
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I'm sorry, but I felt as if I wasn't being heard.
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DeathstrokeSW said
I'm sorry, but I felt as if I wasn't being heard.


All i can do to suggest advice, is look at some of the cs's in the approved page we have so you can get a better understanding of what we want.
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I'm sorry, but I felt as if I wasn't being heard.
Well it takes time before you get review so gotta have some patience until someone comes and passes verdict once again. Also, since you seem so hyped up to join this rp, you should use that time and make additions to your cs sheet. If you plan on staying here for awhile, then you'll regret not putting extra time into it later on . Especially I would assume that you would know more that time makes the world go round seeing how you look like a DC(Detective Comics) fan.
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All i can do to suggest advice, is look at some of the cs's in the approved page we have so you can get a better understanding of what we want.
Hey, I'm trying to play gm vigilante here XD
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Hey, I'm trying to play gm vigilante here XD


FINE GAWD
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Well it takes time before you get review so gotta have some patience until someone comes and passes verdict once again. Also, since you seem so hyped up to join this rp, you should use that time and make additions to your cs sheet. If you plan on staying here for awhile, then you'll regret not putting extra time into it later on . Especially I would assume that you would know more that time makes the world go round seeing how you look like a DC(Detective Comics) fan.


I am. Well, with my better CSes I had source material to leap from. Backstory isn't my forte.
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Zane620 said
FINE GAWD
Thank you for your understanding citizen(Even though I'm one as well except I don't get caught by the cops) XD *Kicks out of the interrogation room*

DeathstrokeSW said
I am. Well, with my better CSes I had source material to leap from. Backstory isn't my forte.
Well backstory isn't necessarily the easiest part. In fact I consider it to be the hardest out of everything on any cs in any rp since it basically defines your char. The other minor ones is stuff like your char's persona and his/her appearance. Everything else is just building blocks for the road your char walks at the start. The Bleach wikia is all the source material you'll need(Located in Kurisa's Kido link which is on the first post that started it all). Take note and look at other cs's sheets for inspiration on additional info(Unlike you, I didn't have this many cs sheets to take notes from. I had the slab of stone(If you know what I mean) so if I can do it, then so can you).
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Surprisingly, I didn't know even know what the hell Kido was before joining(I just thought they were yelling cool Japanese names like on any other anime)but creativity showed me the way. Well that and the Bleach wikia of course :D Also, I do believe I'm finished here but if you need any more helpful suggestions, you know how to call me. *Points to bat signal light thingy(Seriously, I won't appear unless you signal that light XD) before disappearing after the next time you decide to blink your eyes with bats flying around my last position*
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