[OOC] Bleach: A New Dawn

[DeathstrokeSW]

Kurisa, I responded to your response, and thanks for replying by the way. Would you like for me to move my CS to the current page to peruse at your leisure?

[DeathstrokeSW]

What would a good name for an Arrancar be?

[Zane620]

DeathstrokeSW said
What would a good name for an Arrancar be?

You are making an Arrancar?

[DeathstrokeSW]

More like making a CS to show to Kurisa that I'm serious about wanting an Arrancar. I have everything it a name. I even have his "Zanpakutō" named; I just need a name name

[AbigailTenshi]

Arrancar's won't be introduced yet, plus since you're new to the RP still, you'll need to stay in and be active for a certain amount of time before you'll be considered for owning an arrancar. The reason for this us so that we don't have people come in and let them have powerful characters since characters can still die in this RP. You can prepare a CS and show Kurisa but I highly doubt you'd be allowed to bring that character in any time soon.

[Zane620]

Yeah besides didnt you say you were going to have your guy date an arrancar XD

[DeathstrokeSW]

I have 2 Arrancars planned, one of which is a female NPC

[Zane620]

Well like ABi said earlier still applies dude

[DeathstrokeSW]

Eh. A large part of the male's story takes place in Hueco Mundo, but yeah, I can wait for an Arrancar.

My Kaien character, on the other hand has been waiting for days. I'm happy to be patient, but nobody has told me whether his revised shikai is ok, or if there's anything else I need to change.

[Zane620]

What :|

[DeathstrokeSW]

Kaien? My CS ON 689?

[Zane620]

no your guy has a large part in Hueco Mundo?

[Toaw]

Zane620 said
no your guy has a large part in Hueco Mundo?

I think he is saying that he plans on going to Heuco Mundo sometime in the RP...

[DeathstrokeSW]

Let me explain. My plan for my Arrancar was to introduce him as having Juuuuuuuuuussssst become an Arrancar with no memories of being a hollow. He wanders Hueco Mundo, searching for who he is and his purpose. Then, he comes to Rukongai somehow and discovers who he is and what his purpose is. Eventually he betrays the Arrancar and hopefully joins Soul Society

[Zane620]

Ohhh thought you were talking about Kenny for a second.

[AbigailTenshi]

DeathstrokeSW said
History: A soul who has lived in the Rukongai for most of his life, Kaien comes from low class beginnings, suffering beatings from those around him for no reason other than survival of the fittest. Growing up, he was an angry kid; living in the hellish time near the end of the previous Soul Society. The beatings soon stopped, but the life of violence grew worse; hollows took over a quadrant of the Rukongai, backed by the enemy the soul reapers of days past could not defeat. Soon, the regular Soul Reapers pulled back and Captains and Lieutenants, sometimes 3rd seats patrolled the quadrant.

One by one they all fell, not to the hollows, but to the Enemy no normal soul dared look upon, for fear of death. While he was still a boy, hiding from the Enemy, he came upon a man who would come to be his idol: The (now deceased) Captain of Squad 11. Their meeting was by chance, and it followed like this: Kaien was hiding from the Enemy in a house, hidden in a closet, raging at himself and his predicament when he felt an unusual, massive amount of spiritual pressure. Crawling on the floor, he peeked over the window. There stood the Captain of squad 11, decimating his opponent in a matter of minutes. When the bloodshed was over, the captain noticed Kaien, and walked over, introducing himself. He immediately noticed the kid's rage and decided to take him in, formally adopting Kaien in an effort to harness the rage Kaien felt into a constructive weapon instead of a destructive path. The dead captain loved Kaien as if he was Kaien's biological father, even leaving the Haori to Kaien in his will. Kaien was brought to the Seireitei, living in the Captain's quarters as he grew.

Unfortunately, this peace was not to last; Kaien's adoptive father fell to the Enemy, right before Kaien's eyes. This resulted in the permanent tremor in Kaien's right hand and the resurgence of his rage. In an effort to protect Kaien, he was sent to the Academy, where he spent a longer amount of time than any other graduate; the only time he left the grounds was for his adoptive father's funeral. Kaien was given the Haori and per his wishes, it still hangs in Squad 11's barracks, both a reminder of their fallen leader and a promise. However, a piece of the bottom was stripped off and fashioned into Kaien's glove.

I have an issue with this History:

- For one, the Captain's and seated members couldn't handle a few enemies in the Rukongai? I highly doubts that.
- The Squad 11 Captain wouldn't be so friendly nor would care about anything or anyone other than his own Squad members and killing the enemies, more so killing the enemy. He wouldn't act that way towards a hiding child, if anything, he'd tell the child to be brave and quit hiding like a weakling before he'd walk off to defeat the rest of the enemies.
- If the Captain took him in and he lived in the Squad 11 quarters then why is he waiting to join the Squad? Doesn't make sense.

owo

[AbigailTenshi]

DeathstrokeSW said
Let me explain. My plan for my Arrancar was to introduce him as having Juuuuuuuuuussssst become an Arrancar with no memories of being a hollow. He wanders Hueco Mundo, searching for who he is and his purpose. Then, he comes to Rukongai somehow and discovers who he is and what his purpose is. Eventually he betrays the Arrancar and hopefully joins Soul Society

Dude, Kurisa won't allow it because he isn't bringing them in yet sooooooooooooo yeah

[DeathstrokeSW]

Well what about Kaien?

[souleaterfan320]

hey guys, good news, i should be able to join back in june.

[AbigailTenshi]

DeathstrokeSW said
Well what about Kaien?

What about Kaien? I wrote up there about his history ^