[OOC] Bleach: A New Dawn

[Expllo]

Your abilities SW.

"The blade is wrapped in shadows that take the shape of flames, allowing the blade to be instantaneously summoned from any shadow whatsoever."

I know Kurisa said something about this, something like it'd have to be a specific shadow considering shadows are everywhere. Post duration and cooldowns are needed too.

"Increased Strength (5 post use, Ten post cool down)"

I guess that's fine how it is.

"Through ability #1, Kaien can charge his Reiatsu into the flame-shadows and increase the striking power of his Zanpakutō . (7 post use, 7 post cool down)"

..... I think the post duration could be shortened as he already has an ability that increases strength, so I don't think a seven post use is necessary for this one. Plus I don't see the point of the flames, so?

"Increased Speed(2 post use, 3 post cooldown.)"

Guess that's ok.

[DeathstrokeSW]

AbigailTenshi said
I have an issue with this History:- For one, the Captain's and seated members couldn't handle a few enemies in the Rukongai? I highly doubts that.- The Squad 11 Captain wouldn't be so friendly nor would care about anything or anyone other than his own Squad members and killing the enemies, more so killing the enemy. He wouldn't act that way towards a hiding child, if anything, he'd tell the child to be brave and quit hiding like a weakling before he'd walk off to defeat the rest of the enemies.- If the Captain took him in and he lived in the Squad 11 quarters then why is he waiting to join the Squad? Doesn't make sense. owo

We'll, how else was I going to make Squad 11 captain adopt him? The easiest way to explain it is like Yachiru being adopted by Kenpachi Zaraki. Except it was more like the Captain sensed his rage more so than his fear. Expllo I'll re-edit those skills.

[Zane620]

Why does he need to be adopted by a Squad 11 Captain in the first place i I may ask? They are exactly the nicest people around, and rage doesnt really get them alll "Ooooo great job kid"

[Expllo]

DeathstrokeSW said
We'll, how else was I going to make Squad 11 captain adopt him? The easiest way to explain it is like Yachiru being adopted by Kenpachi Zaraki. Except it was more like the Captain sensed his rage more so than his fear. Expllo I'll re-edit those skills.

The difference being that Yachiru didn't seem fazed by the violence after Kenpachi killed those men, she touched his sword and giggled at the blood. That's what made him adopt her, meanwhile Kaien did nothing to get the Captain interested. All he did was hide, despite the rage, he hid and did nothing that made the Captain interested in him. Maybe you could argue it was out of the kindness of his heart but....I doubt Kenpachi's are really that nice ._.

[DeathstrokeSW]

What about this: Same circumstances, but instead of hiding, Kaien is actually raging at the Enemy and his Reiatsu kicks in and intrigues Squad 11 captain wh notices the boy's rage as well and then adopts him?

[DeathstrokeSW]

: Kaien's edited Shikai skills(the CS is still on 689, with a hider labeled Kaien.):

Shikai appearance: Ignore the stand and focus on the sword.
Bankai appearance: Bankai not achieved.

Shikai skills:
(Start off with no Shikai or 4 to 5 Shikai skills)
1. The blade is wrapped in shadows that take the shape of flames, allowing the blade to be instantaneously summoned from his shadow. This is purely a summoning ability and the flames are useless without Ability 3. They are however, a part of the Shikai appearance and do not dissipate until the sword is sealed.
2. Increased Strength (5 post use, Ten post cool down)
3. Through ability #1, Kaien can charge his Reiatsu into the flame-shadows and increase the striking power of his Zanpakutō . (2 post use, 3 post cool down)
4. Increased Speed(2 post use, 3 post cooldown.)

Revised history in the works

[AbigailTenshi]

No, no adopting with a previous Captain, talk to Kurisa about it but I highly doubt he'd let you do it considering the fact that that would make him higher than Shiro...

[DeathstrokeSW]

Mistake in posting. Sorry

[DeathstrokeSW]

Ok then. I don't want to cause trouble. I like you guys xD

So I'll rewrite his history. 2 things are certain though. Hand tremors due to rage and Squad 11. Though Abi, some help might be appreciated; (singsong tone) and you'd have a member of squad 11 to help you

[DeathstrokeSW]

Kaien

My 2nd character. I can edit if necessary.

Name: Kaien

Appearance:

A handsome man with close cropped black hair and dark green eyes, Kaien wears the traditional gi of Soul Reapers with a white fingerless glove that extends to his entire torso and the bridge of his nose. It leaves his left arm and shoulder bare

Age: 240.

Height: 6'2 or 187.96 centimeters

Weight: 200 pounds (90.718 kilograms)

Hair Colour: Black

Eye Colour: Green

Race: Shinigami

Rank: Unseated

Spiritual Energy Colour: Orange

Personality: With a zeal for combat and cold exterior, Kaien can be hard to get along with at first. He is cold when calm, but has a temper which results in a permanent tremor in his right hand when not in battle. However, after warming up to others, Kaien can come across as a sociable, if obsessive individual. He spends most of his time near Squad 11's barracks and wishes to join them. When in battle, Kaien is utterly still, moving only with what is required to kill his opponent, attacking with ferocity when necessary; but the ferocity of his attacks are recognized for what they really are: a release for his rage. He sees violence as the only logical response to a threat due to his kill-or-be-killed upbringing.

History: WIP

Other:

~Zanpakuto~

Zanpakuto name: 影の輝き(Kage no Kagayaki) Literally "Radiance of Shadows"

Type: combat

Zanpakuto Shikai Release command: Imprison

Spirit Appearance:

Inner world: (optional)

Sealed appearance:

Shikai appearance: Same as sealed but the hilt is now black and orange
Bankai appearance: Bankai not achieved.

Shikai skills:
(Start off with no Shikai or 4 to 5 Shikai skills)
1. The blade is wrapped in shadows that take the shape of flames, allowing the blade to be instantaneously summoned from his shadow. This is purely a summoning ability and the flames are useless without Ability 3. They are however, a part of the Shikai appearance and do not dissipate until the sword is sealed.
2. Increased Strength (5 post use, Ten post cool down)
3. Through ability #1, Kaien can charge his Reiatsu into the flame-shadows and increase the striking power of his Zanpakutō . (2 post use, 3 post cool down)
4. Increased Speed(2 post use, 3 post Cooldown)

Bankai skills: Bankai not achieved

Non-lethal Zanpakuto Skills:

Skills

Zanjutsu: Shitonegashi
Kido: Kaien scorns Kido, a result of his upbringing.

Hoho: Shunpo.

Points gained from missions:
Mission log:
Points spent and skills gained:

[AbigailTenshi]

DeathstrokeSW said
Ok then. I don't want to cause trouble. I like you guys xD So I'll rewrite his history. 2 things are certain though. Hand tremors due to rage and Squad 11. Though Abi, some help might be appreciated; (singsong tone) and you'd have a member of squad 11 to help you

Dokay, I'll have another look oxo

[AbigailTenshi]

Kaien is accepted, with History as WIP oxo

[DeathstrokeSW]

Well, To the IC! Away! Also, Hanataro Yamada's Zanpakutō is hilarious and adorable.

[Zane620]

how does he know the HEAD CAPTAIN?

[DeathstrokeSW]

Kaien was in the academy and one of the more Bloodthirsty ones. I can edit but the Head Captain receives dossiers on every academy graduate, I think. So there's no reason not to think that Kaien's appearance which is rather unique, wouldn't stand out from the crowd.

[Zane620]

DeathstrokeSW said
Kaien was in the academy and one of the more Bloodthirsty ones. I can edit but the Head Captain receives dossiers on every academy graduate, I think. So there's no reason not to think that Kaien's appearance which is rather unique, wouldn't stand out from the crowd.

Eh considering that the Head captain would get every profile. Remembering a specific person would be somewhat impossible

[Zane620]

and to be honest his apperance doesnt reallly stand out that much

[DeathstrokeSW]

Well, the hand tremors which, outside of battle, are permanent, would help. Not that many Shinigami have that as a characteristic. Again I CAN edit. Also, when I revised the CS, I changed his sealed to Kyouka Suigetsu. His shikai is the same just wrapped in black shadows with a black and orange hilt colour.

[Zane620]

Yeah i think you should edit, a simple hand shaking really isnt that memorable.

[DeathstrokeSW]

Edited. Actually all I did was remove the bit where I said that the Capt.-Commander would recognise him.