[OOC] Empires of Sand

[Pepperm1nts]

When you tell Flagg your sheet is done.

[Flagg]

When will applications be reviewed?

@Arawak

I'm sorry, I didnt notice your NS was complete. Reviewed. Approved!

[Raptorman]

I'm working on a few rough maps, trying to chart the major pathways in the warrens as well as the Dominion territory. They might be more than a little crude.

Also, flagg, I sent you a pm.

[Raptorman]

And here is the first of them. This map shows the rough borders for the Dominion's protective zone and the actual area controlled by the Dominion directly. The Dominion exercises no direct power over the areas not designated as such but has pledged to defend the inhabitants who actually control the land from outside aggression.

First Map

[Pepperm1nts]

Kinda weird that Zhodule is basically an enclave within your territory, but if that's what you guys are agreeing to... Generally city-states aren't literally just one city, but a city that is powerful enough to exert its influence far from it. Venice was a city-state, but it wasn't inside anyone's territory. It held its own territory stretching from Venice to Greece. A city-state inside someone else's territory is arguably not a city-state at all, but like.. some sort of autonomous district or something.

[Flagg]

And here is the first of them. This map shows the rough borders for the Dominion's protective zone and the actual area controlled by the Dominion directly. The Dominion exercises no direct power over the areas not designated as such but has pledged to defend the inhabitants who actually control the land from outside aggression.

First Map

@Raptorman

I would say since this RP is about vast deserts and wildernesses, both your actual territory (eg, the entire mountains) and your protectorate zone are a bit much. I would just note where your cities are, since its unlikely you actually control much territory beyond them, esp since your faction is mostly underground.

In short, and this applies not just to you, territorial borders are not very meaningful when most territory is mutant-infested wasteland.

[Raptorman]

I'm still going to make the warrens map though. At least for the main routes between their holdings. And that was just the first attempt at designating territory, I am disappointed that I spent so much time working on it now though.

[Raptorman]

Alright, version two, with flagg's approval.

[Raptorman]

Sigma, you added a bit too many High Nier, 5,000 is a lot of them

[Milkman]

I think I am pretty much done with my nationsheet.

[Sigma]

@Raptorman Sorry, lowered the numbers. Is it good or lower?

[Darkmatter]

@Raptorman @Flagg
Stupid question time, what info directly do you need for me to be on the map?

Also I'll post IC tomorrow at some stage, I just want to have another double take over all the nation stuff and decide where to go!

[Flagg]

@Raptorman @Flagg
Stupid question time, what info directly do you need for me to be on the map?

Also I'll post IC tomorrow at some stage, I just want to have another double take over all the nation stuff and decide where to go!

@Darkmatter

I just need you to draw in and/or tell me where you want to be.

[Darkmatter]

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I just need you to draw in and/or tell me where you want to be.

@Flagg

A perimeter mountain? It doesn't hugely matter to me as long it's isolated a little.

[Flagg]

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A perimeter mountain? It doesn't hugely matter to me as long it's isolated a little.

@Darkmatter

great!

[Raptorman]

@Raptorman Sorry, lowered the numbers. Is it good or lower?

@Sigma

I'd say around 1,000 would be good since you are somewhat linked to me and close by.

[Milkman]

Flagg, can you review my nationsheet?

[Darkmatter]

YAY IC POSTS!

[Pepperm1nts]

Disclaimer: Not official political map.

Did some guesswork 'cause no one else is doing it. I went based on people's description of their geographic features. I had to do some strong guesswork for Osmuli because none of the geographic features Chairman Stein listed were labelled on the map, so I just found an unlabeled desert mountain next to a river like he described, and put him there.

i.imgur.com/97CvX5s.png

Green is Drathan Union.
Red is Farai
Light green is Raptor's nation
Lilac is Osmuli
Beige is Azar

EDIT: I also took the liberty of drawing a big mountain in for Raptor.

EDIT2: Gave Osmuli the rest of the lake because why not.

[gorgenmast]

Disclaimer: Not official political map.

Did some guesswork 'cause no one else is doing it. I went based on people's description of their geographic features. I had to do some strong guesswork for Osmuli because none of the geographic features Chairman Stein listed were labelled on the map, so I just found an unlabeled desert mountain next to a river like he described, and put him there.

i.imgur.com/97CvX5s.png

@Pepperm1nts

thank u lub u