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I need a seconded opinion on this 'cause I can't decide. I don't have anything super detailed thought out yet but the two concepts I'm torn between are somebody from the future coming back in time to be a hero (kinda like a slightly more humble booster gold) or an extraterrestrial stuck on earth.


I'm kinda thinking about sorta mixing the ideas now. I.e. Making him so far from the future that the human race had evolved to be distinct from the modern day human. That or a stranded alien from the future who can't get home because it hasn't been created yet.


Maybe an alien-human hybrid from the future....?
Gets his powers from his alien heritage yet has a passable human appearance.
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Maybe an alien-human hybrid from the future....?
Gets his powers from his alien heritage yet has a passable human appearance.


That's not a bad idea. I think I might end up going with that! Thanks!
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Name: Sho Hayashi
Age: 23
Alias: Naitoshadou (Night Shadow)
Gender: Male
Previous City of Operation: Tokyo, Japan

Appearance:
Civilian –

Costumed –
Powers: Having taken part in once thought to be long forgotten rituals and training. Sho has gained the ability to shapeshift himself in numerous ways. He can stretch limbs or his body, change his face to appear as someone else, or other countless feats.
Abilities/Skills: On top of his shape shifting abilities, Sho has years of training in what is true ninjitsu combat. Able to fight and more importantly move both silently and effectively. Along with that Sho is quite skilled in lock picking.
Equipment: Sho keeps in his gear throwing knives but most notably his katana. Given to him by his elders its a blade forged eons ago, and is still as sharp as it ever was.
Weakness: Sho's shape shifting ability is more mythical by nature than something genetic. So Sho needs some focus to be able to use his powers. If he gets dizzied, or put into a state of mental haziness. His powers won't work and can even malfunction on him. Leaving him very vulnerable if his mentally drained or strained enough.

Personality: Sho is a quiet, but friendly soul. He is prideful in his training and abilities and doesn't like having it questioned. Given his background Sho isn't as familiar as he should be with modern tech and pop culture.
History: Sho's parents were both considered Japanese royalty, wealthy, and the class of the city of Tokyo. The both of them in secret were funneling money through the Yakuza. Though they had a classy demeanor on the outside, the pair were ruthless when it came to their business. Over the years they had certainly gained their enemies. Even as the parents had a child in Sho, their enemies still ruthlessly waited for a chance to get at them. It all finally came to a head on a boat out in the Pacific Ocean. The scene was violent, blood spilled everywhere, and the boat was burned to hide the evidence of Mr and Mrs Hayashi's death. However little baby Sho was also on the boat, having been spared a murder but left to burn and sink. If it wasn't for an intervention by a mysterious group of people Sho would've died.

The group of people came to the boat seeing it burn from a distance, only planning to see what they could steal from it when they came across Sho. They took the baby from his burning soon to be grave. Returning him to their home. A relatively small island which is home of a clan of men and women. Founded in ancient times as a means to dethrone the filthy empires they saw as plaguing Japan. Generations have passed, but the island's residents still hold the traditions and training in the art of the ninja.

Sho grew up unaware of his real parents and their lives. As far as he was concerned he was just as important as anyone else on the island. He trained and learned with the other young kids on the island. But unlike them, Sho had real genuine skills he was able to show in his training. Impressing his elders Sho by the time he was a teen earned the right to be a part of a ritual that was both dangerous and life changing. The process was long, painful, and by the end of the fifth day draining. However Sho was able to achieve a new level of control of his body. Allowing him to shape shift it at will. When he grew to proper age Sho left the island and returned to Tokyo. When he saw the crime and corruptions going through the city. Sho dawned his gear and began cleaning up the city as only he could. He never killed, but his presence became threatening enough. Soon the media dubbed him Naitoshadou but his actual being is still not believed by all. As no photos of him have ever surfaced and the only people who have seen him were the criminals he left for the police.

Other: Mango.


Aye, accepted. Post 'em in the C-Tab.

Majorly a work in progress.
Still undecided on powers, though she will probably have enhanced strength. Maybe a healing factor....



Looking good so far.

Alrighty, here is my CS for ya, @Dirty Dan! It's nearly 2am where I'm at right now, so if there are any mistakes, redundancies, or anything like that I'll most likely notice and edit them in the next day or two (most likely 'two' as tomorrow is my sister's birthday.) I also apologize for the less-than-stellar backstory, as they have never been my super strong suit. Likewise please let me know if you feel Harrison is too overpowered. I took his powers basically directly from Victor Mancha from the Marvel Comics and tried to add enough weaknesses to hopefully balance him out, but if you need me to change any of that just let me know here or in a PM! With that I will be heading off for the night! Check in with y'all tomorrow!!



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</Name:>
Android Infiltrator Model-117 // Designation: JOHN HARRISON

</Age:>
7 [Chronologically] // Physically appears to be in his mid-thirties.

</Alias:>
Zuse

</Gender:>
Male Appearance & Programming

</Previous City of Operation:>
Area 51; Southern Nevada; United States

</Appearance:>




</Powers:>
  • Electromagnetokinesis: Harrison's primary ability, he has been shown to be capable of directing electricity outwards as damaging, high-voltage electric blasts from his hands, as well as using his magnetic ability to bend or reshape metal to his will. Though the full extent of this power is unknown, Harrison appears capable of manipulating his own magnetic field for levitation, or even creating a temporary force-field around his person with said magnetic abilities. Harrison demonstrates a certain level of control over his electrical blasts, and can alter their intensity to his will, ranging from a mild shock to flesh-rending voltages. As a consequence, Harrison is incapable of sustaining a personal force-field while utilizing his other powers at the same time, due to the expend of energy.
  • Advanced Intelligence: Due to his 'brain' functioning like a computer, Harrison has vast levels of intelligence and is capable of processing information at an astonishing speed.
  • Computer Interfacing: Harrison is capable of interfacing with other machines directly through connective hardware, making him something of a sentient hard-drive, capable of storing ample amounts of data within his mind until such data is transferred.
  • Superhuman Strength & Durability: Due to his android physiology, Harrison possesses about 5x the strength of the average person, allowing him to physically overpower a normal Human effortlessly, while also allowing him to face enhanced or super-powered opponents in hand-to-hand combat on a relatively even level. Likewise, Harrison's durability has been enhanced greatly, allowing him to withstand super-powered blows or impacts with little overall damage, as well as granting him a certain level of resistance from other impacts as well. Likewise, Harrison comes equipped with pain-inhibitors that he can activate or deactivate at will. These inhibitors will acknowledge damage, but suppress pain enough that what would normally be an excruciating injury would simply register as mild annoyance.


</Weaknesses:>
  • Personal Power Source: Though Harrison runs independently and has no need to 'recharge', use of his electrical powers will drain on his personal power source, with the drain relative to the intensity of voltage used. Exertion of his powers can force Harrison to wait for a period of time before using them again, while overexertion can send him into an unconscious 'standby' mode to fully recharge his resources, where he will automatically activate once again.
  • Paradoxical Questions: As his mind is effectively a computer, paradoxical questions can divert and disrupt Harrison's functions, ranging from simple distraction all the way to an involuntary shut-down (the equivalent of a computer Blue Screen of Death) until either such a question is answered or his memory is wiped of the event. Once a question has been used against him, Harrison is then immune to that specific question's effects.
  • Electrical Attacks: Though utilizing electricity as a weapon, Harrison is nevertheless extremely susceptible to its effects, suffering severe damage should he be hit directly with an electric attack. A pinpoint strike has the capability to fry Harrison's internal systems, rendering him to a comatose state until he can be successfully repaired.
  • Apathy: Designed with a wholly calculating mind and a difficulty in comprehending compassion or empathy, Harrison lacks much overall humanity, and is generally unreceptive to the feelings of others, though he is capable of gauging one's emotional state through their expressions or body language. He has no hesitation towards maiming or killing others, though his initial programming forces him to see the world in a stark black-and-white, where evil must be harshly punished in the defense of good. He has a firm belief in the greater good, however, and will sacrifice a few dozen innocents if it can result in the protection of a thousand.
  • Encrypted Programming: Though believing himself to be entirely sentient and independent, Harrison's actions and motivations are nevertheless guided by an encrypted directive located within his mind, which commands him to protect the United States at all costs. While this directive is what first turned him towards vigilantism and the eventual recruitment into the Argonauts, Harrison's true allegiance [which he is unable to control] is to the U.S. Government.


</Abilities // Skills:>
  • Physical Fitness: As an android, Harrison possesses enhanced, above-average physical abilities. Aside from his superhuman physical strength and resilience, his speed, stamina, reflexes, coordination, and balance are heightened to almost-peak level, though these attributes are inferior to Supers with peak conditioning.
  • Combative Ability: Highly skilled at close-range or hand-to-hand combat, Harrison's superhuman strength makes him an extremely capable combatant. His fighting style is methodical, clinical, and brutal, sacrificing grace and refinement for simple efficiency. Prioritizing in crippling or disabling opponents, Harrison will frequently break or crush limbs/joints, shatter necks and skulls, or simply bluntly beat his opponents to death, using his electromagnetokinesis to deal with foes at range.
  • Polyglot: Harrison is fluent in a variety of languages, ranging from standard to archaic. However, with access to the Internet, Harrison can download and immediately understand numerous other languages with seemingly limitless potential.
  • Technical Aptitude: Owing to his physiology, Harrison is incredibly skilled at both using and repairing various technologies, ranging from rudimentary household appliances to high-tech military-grade weapons and equipment. Even without prior experience, Harrison appears intuitively attuned to the inner workings of computers and machines.
  • Photographic Memory: Harrison's prosthetic eyes are directly synchronized with his database, granting him a rather literal photographic memory, allowing him to retroactively examine memories for previous details.
  • Fast Learner: Harrison possesses remarkable above-average efficiency, and can learn completely new skills almost effortlessly. This learning capability allows Harrison to seamlessly adapt to a variety of situations and scenarios, his mind constantly analyzing data in order to better itself.


</Equipment:>
  • Outfit: Harrison's "super-suit" is specially designed to accommodate him. Aesthetically, Harrison's outfit consists of a contemporary knee-length coat over black body armor with form-fitting military pants and light boots. The coat is lined with ballistic weave, offering Harrison protection from melee-weapons and small-arms fire, while his body armor allows for defense from higher-grade weaponry. The outfit in its entirety is protected by a layer of insulation, providing Harrison greater defense against heat and electricity while also lowering the chance that his own electrical attacks could damage him.
  • Brain: Harrison's mind in and of itself is a computer, capable of downloading, storing, and archiving data much like a computer can. He can be used to encrypt secret plans or strategies, harvest data from nearly any machine, and even achieve a type of immortality by making backups of himself within his memory.
  • Bionic Eyes: Harrison's eyes, while appearing relatively normal, are prosthetic; hiding advanced sensors that provide him with infrared, low-light, and telescopic vision, enhancing his perception. His eyes also directly sync with his brain, providing his photographic memory


</Personality:>
Although nigh-perfectly resembling a Human physically, Harrison's emotional processors, while incredibly advanced, is nonetheless somewhat alien. True to his nature as an android, Harrison visually appears cold and indifferent, speaking in a controlled, formal diction while demonstrating a sober, stoic demeanor.

Infamous for his tenacity and perseverance, Harrison performs tasks with a borderline-obsessive amount of focus and dedication, belying his cool, methodical exterior. This tenaciousness is only matched by his strong desire for order. To Harrison, while the world is not starkly black-and-white, it stands at a focal point between order and chaos. Harrison is not motivated by heroics or compassion, but simply the need to sustain order and control. Those who seek to undermine that order must be violently punished to ensure history does not repeat itself.

Possessing a highly intuitive brain and database, Harrison can comprehend and mimic a wide range of emotions, granting him a certain level of autonomy and independence that almost all other machines lack. Capable of fully integrating into normal society, Harrison's mind is designed to document and learn from experiences, constantly adapting itself to achieve optimum effectiveness. However, as advanced as Harrison's emotional 'capacity' is, there nevertheless is a certain element missing whenever he emotes; a 'Human touch' that causes him to come across as awkward and artificial at times.

Designed to be superior to Humans in every way, Harrison is incredibly self-confident, bordering on arrogance. Though not overtly vain or egotistical, he is fearless in the face of danger and shows no hesitation charging head on into the face of battle. However, that being said, Harrison is no fool, and never underestimates an opponent, though his challenge-seeking 'nature' will occasionally cause him to act recklessly.

On a darker note, Harrison is infamously ruthless and cold-blooded. Due to his programming as a combat unit, Harrison attempts to protect civilian lives if and when possible, but shows no mercy or restraint when dealing with enemies. Designed to not feel empathy or compassion in order to make him a more efficient warrior, Harrison can become frighteningly ferocious on the battlefield, mimicking the Human emotion of bloodthirst and savagery. Even in repose, Harrison is highly unnerving to deal with on a social level, as many are disarmed by his apathetic nature and willingness to perform brutal, violent acts in the name of the greater good.

</History:>
Much of Harrison's history has been either encrypted or deleted by the U.S. Government, making attempts to study his background almost impossible unless one has strong connections within the Pentagon. As crime rates rose and the efficiency of superheroes was diminishing, the United States began secretly allocating funds to Area 51 for research and development into a new type of defense: Synthetics. Quickly, the researchers and engineers began designing prototypes for androids, testing various technologies for ways to improve them - make them indistinguishable from baseline Humans. After four years of extensive research and experimentation, Model-117 was completed. Though not the first of his kind, the unit possessed the most advanced cognitive ability, capable of operating on a wholly independent level. It resembled a Human both inside and out; could walk, talk, breathe, eat, sleep, copulate - all the while possessing superhuman physical attributes. Dr. [REDACTED], a scientific prodigy and head researcher of android development implanted Model-117 with latent electromagnetic abilities that came from an internal power source, programmed to activate only upon first contact with a super-powered individual.

Programmed with an encrypted directive to protect the United States at all cost, Model-117 was given a cover name before having his memory wiped and was released into the world as an unsuspecting sleeper agent, his directive subtly influencing his actions and motivations, urging him to seek out a team of superheroes in order to fulfill his directive.

In the meantime, Model-117, now named John Harrison began a one-man crusade against crime, using his enhanced physique to carve a swath through various gangs, drug peddlers, gun runners, and mercenaries with no motivation except the restoration of order. Soon contacted by the mysterious hero Crisis, Harrison was recruited to join the Argonauts, and eradicate crime from the country.

</Other:>
  • Despite his stoic nature, Harrison is capable of feeling lust and attraction, though rarely experiences or acts upon such feelings. It is currently unknown if such feelings are genuine or simply artificial erogenous responses, but Harrison feels no need to activate his more intimate functions.
  • Demonstration of Durability // Pain Threshold
  • Voice & Personality Sample
  • Harrison is unaware of his encrypted directive, and believes all his actions to be wholly independent.
  • Harrison is known to possess a dark, morbid sense of 'humor' and a capability for dry, derisive sarcasm.
  • Harrison's vast intelligence makes him capable of potentially overcoming his own programming, if not outright rejecting it. Likewise, he appears capable of changing his own personality with experience and archived information. However, such change has not been observed as of yet.
  • Harrison appears to be incredibly intrigued in Human religion and philosophy, finding such concepts illogical - yet comforting at the same time.
  • My favorite fruit is pineapple!


Aye, accepted. Nice character. He and Crisis should get alone relatively well. I'm going to PM you with a proposition.




@Weird Tales, @RumikoOhara ;; I sincerely apologize to both of you, but it seems that you guys do not meet the qualifications I wish to uphold. However, you are cool peeps, so I wish you good luck in your RPing endeavors.




Everyone else ;; Yooo, like the characters I'm seeing. Keep 'em coming. Ideally, a nice max would be around 8 or below, but it depends.
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Well Much Luck
Sorry I didn't know this was an advanced RP
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Well Much Luck
Sorry I didn't know this was an advanced RP


Ah, it's not. But it's not Free, either.

Thanks for the thought, regardless.
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@Dirty Dan
I didn't finish my cs yet
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Hey I'll have my character up in the next 12 hours or so (or at least a wip) been trying to decide between a time control based power and gravity manipulation.
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Hey I'll have my character up in the next 12 hours or so (or at least a wip) been trying to decide between a time control based power and gravity manipulation.


Well, I'm not entirely sure what, Dan thinks, but time control is a definite no in my books.
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I didn't finish my cs yet


Ah, sorry man. That was really rude of me. I judged it based on what I've already saw. Feel free to finish the CS, and I'll judge it more fairly.
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Ah, sorry man. That was really rude of me. I judged it based on what I've already saw. Feel free to finish the CS, and I'll judge it more fairly.


I might change it entirely so it'll be a while until I'm finished
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I had this idea a while back, a character who defeated Death in a combat and, in return, was tricked to use her skills—which overcame Death himself—to hunt down evil doers until she perish or the world is free from evil. I'm posting the WIP to show her powers, if is okay or not. (Btw, I was going with immortality but I don't know if it would be accepted)

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Yo, can I still get in on this? Just spotted it and my brain is BUZZING on superheroes atm.
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Well, I'm not entirely sure what, Dan thinks, but time control is a definite no in my books.


Not to come off as a jerk but completely writing off an entire subset of powers is kind of ignorant. I get that time control can be abused in a variety of ways, and that in many cases it tends to be overpowered; however that doesn't mean there isn't variations that are perfectly playable if not even underpowered. That said I would appreciate at least the opportunity to present the power before having it shot down.
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Not to come off as a jerk but completely writing off an entire subset of powers is kind of ignorant. I get that time control can be abused in a variety of ways, and that in many cases it tends to be overpowered; however that doesn't mean there isn't variations that are perfectly playable if not even underpowered. That said I would appreciate at least the opportunity to present the power before having it shot down.


If you somehow manage to make time manipulation of all things non-op I'll give you a medal.
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I gotta agree with @Mr_pink here. Yes, there are "OP" powers that can be managed and adapted to make them balanced, but time control seems to be on a level like power immunity, for another example, where there's really no way you can balance it. That being said, as Mr. Pink said, I'm not gonna shoot down an idea entirely until I first see it written down.
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Hey, does anybody have any power ideas? I have been drawing up completely blank and can't figure out any power sets that I like to go with my time traveler. I kinda wanna have his powers be the result of technology but I'm not one hundred percent on it.
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Hey, does anybody have any power ideas? I have been drawing up completely blank and can't figure out any power sets that I like to go with my time traveler. I kinda wanna have his powers be the result of technology but I'm not one hundred percent on it.


Atom/Ant-man powers, maybe?
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Posted a WIP cause fuck
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Sorry for just kinda shooting this out there, but no-one was replying to me whether this was still open or not, so eh whatever.
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Sorry that it took me so long, just need to find a obit I like and I'm done.

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