[OOC] Puella Magi: The Wild Hunt

[Ariamis]

Actually, now that I found it and made a look over, I'd like to see what @Cleopatra has to say regarding it.

[PlatinumSkink]

@Ariamis She approved it. Soooooooooo... @Yidhra, you might want to post your character in the character tab! XD

[Ariamis]

@PlatinumSkink
I know it was approved. I want to ask the reason for it.

[Cleopatra]

@Ariamis
It wasn't for their sake, rather it's because of what their characters existence will cause.

[Temporary]

@Cleopatra oooh, oooh, I wanna know what kind of death and destruction will come of the new character!

[Ariamis]

@Cleopatra
So there's a narrative reason? Alright then. Looking forward to seeing that in action.

[AtomicNut]

Join the Strawberry Gang we have the best bitchez

[Ariamis]

@AtomicNut
You know it, dawg.

[The book of bad juju]

Hider

[PlatinumSkink]

@AtomicNut ... Now that's a slogan that may keep Monika as far away from you as possible... XD

[DarkwolfX37]

So far it appears that this is the attempt that has the highest chance of being allowed, so while waiting for final confirmation, to appease my paranoia, I'll put it here for feedback from anyone/everyone. Pretty much the same as the one I put before only with a new wish.

Second Attempt

Name:
Violet Black

Age:
16

Appearance:

Images.

orig14.deviantart.net/8557/f/2011/261/.. (Too large an image to fit)

With light brown hair and eyes of a slightly darker shade, Violet stands at 5 foot 4. (1.6 meters) Despite her slightly visible musculature from her above-average fitness, she is somewhat underweight at 105 pounds. (47.6 Kilograms) Typically seen in a skirt and a simple white button-up shirt under a woolen vest, she always wears some kind of shorts under her lower garments in case of exposure or damage. Her Magical Girl attire is in itself not unusual, having a full length shirt and a skirt halfway to her knees in shades of indigo and grey. Matched by long, open fingered silk-esque gloves that end at her elbows and stockings that raise to just above the cut of her skirt, her outfit is completed by a teardrop shaped Soul Gem resting upside down, right above the center of her rib-cage. Like her outfit, the gem is indigo in color. Despite this, she has added of her own conscious decision both a simple grey "hoodie" and a pair of shorts under her skirt, just like with her normal clothes.

Nationality:
3/4 Caucasian and 1/4 Japanese. (While not noticeable by her appearance she nonetheless makes it a point to tell this fact.) Born and lived in the U.S.

Personality:
Cynical, self-deprecating. A misanthrope who distrusts her peers, hates her elders, and is protective of her youngers. Hates liars but is not above lying.

Past quotes

Before moving:
"Weakness is underrated." (To the incubator) [See below]
"Don't let your sins end in tears. Where them proudly on your sleeve." (To the magical girl who was soon to become the first witch she killed)
"You do good work, furball. I should probably call you something nicer, huh?" (First seeing the incubator after killing her second witch)
"Pineapples are the apex fruit. They are the potatoes of the trees." (When asked why her lunch contained a full pineapple)
"I don't believe in alarm clocks. Or alarms at all for that matter." (When late to school one day)
"I like to think that the animals are watching us, thinking 'we'll kill them all someday.' It makes it easier to love them." (To the incubator during the weeks she was thinking over her wish)
"Maybe murderers aren't so bad." (Upon killing her first witch.)
"Humans are so weak. We get so comfortable in our seats that we forget there are other things trying to coexist. Now we see that we aren't the absolute predators anymore. We're prey to what we create, with a little help from you furballs, that is. And then you give us the tools to become the apex again, just so we can become what we hunt. You make us strong. But you know..." (To the incubator)

Afflictions:

Wish:
'Would you like to become a magical girl? I can tell you've grown tired of your everyday life. Simply make a contract with me, and you'll be able to change it forever.'
"Tell me more. I won't accept any contract I don't know the fine print of."
"I wish magical girls didn't have their soul destroyed."
'That wish is impossible.'
"Then could I make that wish for myself only?"
'No, that wish is also impossible.'
"I wish that magical girls didn't get their souls corrupted.
'I cannot grant that wish, either. Please think of something that's possible if you wish to make a contract.'
"I don't suppose I could just wish to be a magical girl? Well then... I suppose if I had to make a so-called 'normal' wish, I'd have to choose this one. I wish I could see things for the way they really are."

Biography:
A precocious girl who spent her late childhood developing and discarding countless philosophies and interests of the world, she had settled on one of irrelevance to the universe and personal worthlessness until she met the incubator. Taking many weeks to think on what she wished for, and asking many questions about what being a magical girl means, she came to the conclusion that she could overcome not entropy, but rather her lack of worth or value to the universe or even simply other people by making a wish. Her early attempts at wishes were deemed impossible, and she eventually settled on one that the incubator was capable of granting. Upon having her wish granted, she learned that the Incubator had been hiding information about Magical Girls and Witches from her. She pressed it for information and learned the full truth a few days later.
Despite living with an indifferent mother and doting stepfather, her views of adults are almost always negative. Combined with a distrust of her peers fostered by a lifetime of abuse both verbal and physical for her personality and flightiness, she is a misanthrope through and through, giving exception only to those younger than their teens. While not holding resentment toward them any longer, her school life so far has been full of both individual bullies and the ire of almost the entirety of the student body, something she has little hope of changing.
Her younger brother held a special place in her heart, and added to the development of her opinion of herself when she was unable to save his life, taken by an infant playing with open electricity who he was helping watch in place of it's parents, who she holds responsible. This event, the image of her brother's corpse and the sound of his pained scream haunt her to this day.
After making her wish, her opinion of her stepfather has been slowly improving. His honesty and genuine desire for her happiness, as opposed to her mother's now noticeable dislike of her, led to her decision to move when the opportunity presented itself. She is now in Danzig with her stepfather.

Skills:
A "jack of all trades, master of none" due to her inconsistent interests and pursuits, she is most proud of her cooking skill, her talent of singing, and her uncanny ability to judge the world around her mathematically. (Such as distance, the passage of time, vague speed, etc.)

Threads of Fate:
5

Magical Weapon:
Knives.

Experience:
3 (+1 Age modifier)
(Two witches killed)

Magical Ability:
True Sight (Name she gave to her ability.)

Core ability:
- Her wish gave her exactly what she wanted, and more. The effects manifested as the ability to see labyrinths from outside of them, as well as the ability to see through illusions and subterfuge. Weak points are laid bare to her, as are strengths for both people and things. Not only that, but her hallucinations have since disappeared, freeing her from one of the many symptoms she bears from her mental health.

Sub abilities:
- The ability to "read" people. Her distaste for lying has been given validation, as she can now tell what is or isn't the truth. Rather, what the speaker believes to be the truth or not. (This does NOT mean she knows what the truth is or what the speaker thinks the truth is when lied to, only that they are lying.) A person's true emotions at the time are clear to her, as well.
- Her natural hyper-awareness of and ability to judge her surroundings have been heightened further by her wish, now including the ability to visibly see numerical representations of quantifiable information around her. (Distance, number, sound loudness and frequency, etc.) This is to the point that she can predict the immediate future with frightening accuracy, however this is of her own mental talent rather than a result of her wish or magic.

Signature and Finisher:
Signature: Using tough threads enhanced by magic, she turns her knives into whips of sorts, increasing her fighting dexterity. Her signature involves using these to place knives in strategic positions and trigger an attack with all of them at once, striking a target with all of them from many directions. Incredibly hard to dodge completely without immense skill and speed, especially for larger targets, this is an effective use of her spatial and temporal awareness.
Finisher:

██████:
21%

Edit:
Incorporated PlatinumSkink's feedback.
Incorporated Antarctic Termite's feedback questions.
Added something I forgot to from the rough draft of this wish.

[Temporary]

Please, ignore me and all of my stupidity xD

I don't read things properly, and when I do I forget it a couple seconds later...

[Yidhra]

@Ariamis She approved it. Soooooooooo... @Yidhra, you might want to post your character in the character tab! XD

@PlatinumSkink

Guess I was lazier then I thought I was. Whoopsies.

Was actually an elaborate ruse where I tried to save you all, but you couldn't let it go.

[Temporary]

@Yidhra I might just be stupid, buuuuut...

I don't see anything that could jeopardise existence itself in there.

You let me down *pouts*

[DarkwolfX37]

@Yidhra

"space ferret"
+15 points.

Edit:
Serafina vs Serafin is gonna trip me up.
-3 points.

Edit:

@Yidhra I might just be stupid, buuuuut...

I don't see anything that could jeopardise existence itself in there.

You let me down *pouts*

@Vocab

You aren't looking hard enough. :P

[Temporary]

@DarkwolfX37 This is going to break my sanity...

I can't see it...

Where...

Where..

...

[The book of bad juju]

Isn't it obvious?

Remove kebab

[Yidhra]

@The book of bad juju

You're overthinking it. Gdansk is just the Polish name for the city. A Pole would call it that. Danzig is just the more historically relevant name, so the city is still known as Danzig. The area has a long history of being independent, and passed between Poland, Germany/Germanic states for a long time. Its proper Prussian land, but now we're entering a complicated/sensitive issue that I don't think an RP forum is in this mood to handle

Also, yeah, remove Kebab is the true goal of any Pole. I almost made her Winged Hussar theme

[PlatinumSkink]

... What, you guys went and researched the town we're in? I was just going to trust anything the GM / CO-GM said about it and ask them if anything was unclear and just call it Danzig constantly with blind faith in the accuracy. More simple that way. When I first read Gdansk, I assumed the people mentioning it were in another town (because there's already so many here) with intention to move to Danzig eventually. And then I forgot it because I never remember things that don't make sense so I assumed Serafina and Kazia were in a completely different town all over again and were like "Yeah, that's fine, they can come over later" and didn't realize anything was strange until I read book's post. Hah.

[Ariamis]

This really is starting to look more like an Advanced RP with all the attention to detail. Good job, guys.