Well not a bad opinion I know for many it's a obstacle to cross but it only gets harder the more you want to add to your character's arsenal. For every skill you must have attained it if not in game then through prior experience. Even your weaponry must be attained. It's for a in depth look into your character that immerses you into the realm, I believe.
You're not going to have much luck here in the general interest check then. I've seen Advanced RPs with only a fraction of the info you've put up here, and half the CS sheet.
I would recommend going to the advanced interest check section if you want some interest. Again, it might seem weird, but less info on interest checks, the better. There is no way I can read through all that lore to decide if I'm interested or not, so it's pointless to add all of the info here. Just a synopsis, a pic or two, some description of the workings of the rp and good formatting is good enough.
I believe that a shortened CS was recommended, and I would recommend it too. Might sound bad, but most people aren't going to waste a day or two on a CS that massive. Again, ADVANCED rps, the ones people expect to devote a lot of time to, barely have a CS that long.
But it's your RP, take my advice with that in mind.