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Star Wars

The Extraction

Setting: It has been three hours since Darth Sidious issued the notorious Order 66. The Jedi Order has been laid to wast; its ranks blasted to smithereens by the very Clone Troopers that it was leading into battle across the CIS-held Outer Rim. Those of the Order who are not already dead, have either taken flight to exile, or are awaiting execution.

On the violet-tinted botanical paradise of Garqi, one such captured Jedi has been secluded in solitary confinement; they await the end with steadfast composure.

Little do they know, that a band of Force-snubbing mercenaries, paid by an unknown benefactor, is about to touch down in a commandeered LAAT/c to spring their release.

This crack team of warriors-for-hire haven't much in the way of light sabers or force powers, but they're packing plenty of blasters, grit and experience. The Clone Troopers guarding the Jedi are about to be put to the test against renowned hired-guns.

Base 97, a Republic outpost on Garqi's surface of little importance - save that it houses a captured Jedi, who is being prepared for execution. Hundreds of Clones anxiously patrol the grounds, awaiting the command to destroy their charge. A drop ship is just touching down - a routine, scheduled munitions delivery - and it's about to tear them a new one.

Rules:
1. What I say goes: Listen, I know this sort of contradicts what the statement above says, but please, just listen to me. I'm a decently open to change and I'm not mean. Talk things out with me when I disagree or don't like something, but know my word is final.
2. What goes, will probably stay: If you decide to make something happen, think about it. I plan on having every thing come up later. (Ex. mentions an old hero in a conversation. That may come up in rp)
3. No time or dimension travelers: Sorry, but this isn't rick and morty. everyone if going to be from this timeline, using objects from this timeline.
4. Please, use OC's: I don't want characters with copy right.
5. Don't be op: Come on guy, let everyone have fun
6. Don't be a bully: simple
7. Have fun: Not having fun is punishable by death.

Mercenaries:

Name:
Gender:
Age:
Race:
Appearance:
Skills:
Weapons:
Equipment:
Force sensitive?:
Bio:

Jedi:

Name:
Gender:
Age:
Race:
Appearance:
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Force Powers:
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Name: Jennifer 'Jen' Flint
Gender: Female
Age: 19
Race: Human
Appearance:


Skills: Highly Skilled Engineer, can fix nearly all ships in the galaxy, Competent pilot, can speak Droid Binary

Weapons: She carries a blaster pistol which she can vary the power off. More powerful shot=More battery drained

Equipment: Several tools carried in a toolbelt, a small flying droid to assist in repairs called RB-34, or 'Ruby'

Bio: Jen was born on a small mining colony, quickly picking up technical skills from her father. Throughout her time there though, she always felt a yearning to do more with her life. When she was 17, she managed to catch a ship to take her to Coruscant, managing to form a bond with a small flying droid during the journey. Since then, she has made her name as one of the best mechanics in the whole galaxy.
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Name: Jennifer 'Jen' Flint
Gender: Female
Age: 19
Race: Human
Appearance:


Skills: Highly Skilled Engineer, can fix nearly all ships in the galaxy, Competent pilot, can speak Droid Binary

Weapons: She carries a blaster pistol which she can vary the power off. More powerful shot=More battery drained

Equipment: Several tools carried in a toolbelt, a small flying droid to assist in repairs called RB-34, or 'Ruby'

Bio: Jen was born on a small mining colony, quickly picking up technical skills from her father. Throughout her time there though, she always felt a yearning to do more with her life. When she was 17, she managed to catch a ship to take her to Coruscant, managing to form a bond with a small flying droid during the journey. Since then, she has made her name as one of the best mechanics in the whole galaxy.


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Hey guys, can you add if your character is force sensitive or not?
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Can I make an astromech character?
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I may not be on my rps until Sunday, as I am out the country. It depends on if the hotel has wifi or not
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Name: Revalda Petanus
Gender: Male
Age: 47
Race: Human
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Rank: Jedi Master

Skills: Has mastered Shien and Djem So [Form V] using both standard and reverse grip. He also has basic skills with Ataru [Form IV]Shii-Cho [Form I], Teräs Käsi and blaster weapons.

Force Powers: Has mastered Telekinesis and is advanced at Force Augmentation and Force Deflection. Also knows Force healing and Jedi mind trick.

Weapons and Equipment: Revalda uses Standard Jedi Lightsaber Grip with Synthetic Yellow Crystal, even tough yellow crystal is used mostly by Jedi Sentinel, Revalda used yellow mostly becasue as he said: "It represents happiness, intellect, energy and honor in my soul." Revalda also carries Blaster pistol usually with him incase if he or some one else needs weapon and/or to use as ranged weapon as a alternative to throw objects with Telekinesis. He also carries small bag of medicine and water.

Bio: Revalda was born in Aldera, Alderaan. As a young leans he will live out his childhood in Corusant and in the Jedi temple. He was appointed to master Laurentius Duilius who he fought together even after being knighted until his master died at the Skirmish of Sullust [Its was before Battle of Sullust]. At least 1 year into the Clone Wars Revalda had become jedi master, later he was given a command of 25th Infantry Brigade, but at the Clone Wars end order 66 was given. Tough Revalda was lucky to survive, he was wounded and was forced to surrender in planet of Kashyyyk, being captured by his own brigade. Now hes waiting for execution, tough his insticnct tells that something will happen. He hopes that one day balance is restored in the force.

Personality: Revalda is calm and honorable jedi master whos ready to defend innocent and comrades from threat.
He sometimes likes to make jokes or puns if situation is too serious for him or if he just wants to. He dislikes Clone Troopers/Storm Troopers due to been backstapped by them, he also somewhat dosent enjoy being with vigilantes and unhonorable people. He likes anyone with good humor, likes honorable people and he also likes astromech droids.

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NAME : Sora Hezz
GENDER : Female
AGE : 27
RACE : Ko'Secti Mandalorian

SKILLS :
Expert Marksman
Hand to Hand Combat
Endurance
WEAPONS :
BESKAD
DE-10 BLASTER PISTOL
MANDALORIAN ASSAULT RIFLE
EQUIPMENT :
FLARE-S SWOOP
ENENHANCED VISION GOGGLES
ENHANCED HEARING & SHORT RANGE COMMUNICATION. HEADSET
LEFT ARM CYBERNETIC. REPLACEMENT
FORCE SENSITIVE :
BIO : Sora is a member of the obscure matriarchal Mandalorian clan known as the Ko'Secti. (Even most Mandalorians have only sketchy information about them)

A product of controlled breeding an creche raised she doesn't know who her mother is and doesn't care who was her father.

(Her clan's legends say that they were the mothers of the human Mandalorians and that they must continue to improve their race as a whole. To accomplish this they abstain from physical reproduction until they have proven their genetic line in combat and accumulated knowledge. Once they have reached the level of Sa'El they seek a worthy male of pure mandalorian genetics and become his lover even if it requires they use trickery or seduction. Once their child is born it is judged by the elders and only those found perfect are allowed to remain in the clan all others are fostered away)

Sora is presently involved in her saket (journey of proof) as a mercenary and like most Mandalorians is a sought after soldier.
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Can I make an astromech character?


of course, state the metal(s) you're made of.
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[quote=@CommisarJhon]
Name: Revalda Petanus
Gender: Male
Age: 47
Race: Human
Appearance:


Rank: Jedi Master

Skills: Has mastered Shien [Form V] using both standard and reverse grip and is advanced at Ataru [Form IV], he also has basic skills with Shii-Cho [Form I], Teräs Käsi and blaster weapons

Force Powers: Has mastered Telekinesis and is advanced at Force Augmentation and Force Deflection. Also knows Force stealth, Force healing and Jedi mind trick.

Weapons and Equipment: Revalda uses Standard Jedi Lightsaber Grip with Synthetic Yellow Crystal, even tough yellow crystal is used mostly by Jedi Sentinel, Revalda used yellow mostly becasue as he said: "It represents happiness, intellect, energy and honor in my soul." Revalda also carries Blaster pistol usually with him incase if he or some one else needs weapon and/or to use as ranged weapon as a alternative to throw objects with Telekinesis. He also carries small bag of medicine and water.

Bio: Revalda was born in Aldera, Alderaan. As a young leans he will live out his childhood in Corusant and in the Jedi temple. He was appointed to master Laurentius Duilius who he fought together even after being knighted until his master died at the Skirmish of Sullust [Its was before Battle of Sullust]. At least 1 year into the Clone Wars Revalda had become jedi master, later he was given a command of 25th Infantry Brigade, but at the Clone Wars end order 66 was given.

[Since im not sure if i can be captured jedi, ill make two versions so i wouldnt need to edit later]

Captured Version: Tough Revalda was lucky to survive, he was forced to surrender in planet of Kashyyyk, being captured by his own brigade. Now hes waiting for execution, tough his insticnct tells that something will happen.

Not Captured Version: Tough Revalda was lucky to survive, he was wounded by clone troopers that he lead. Now Revalda is hiding from hunting clone troopers/storm troopers and mercenaries, hoping that one day balance is restored in the force.

Personality: Revalda is calm and honorable jedi master whos ready to defend innocent and comrades from threat.

[I might add some more stuff to my characther, but thats enough for today.]
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Maybe tone down how many force powers he has. Or at least don't make him so adept at such. I understand he is a jedi master, but I really don't want to have everyone start so powerful.

Also, you will be captured at the start. Know that you will not start out with your weapon on you, but you will get it back.
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Okay not quite done but here she is as proof I'm still in

NAME : Sora Hezz
GENDER : Female
AGE : 27
RACE :


SKILLS :
Expert Marksman
Hand to Hand Combat
Melee Weapon Combat
Endurance
WEAPONS :
Blaster Carbine
Blaster Pistol

EQUIPMENT :
FORCE SENSITIVE :
BIO :


I'd prefer if we didn't use made up races, but that's fine. Why not be a breed of mandalorian, a special clan that does not have that belief?
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Name: R3-C7

Gender: Programmed male

Age: 2

Race: Astromech Droid, R3-series

Composition: Whatever R3 droids are made out of. (Wookiepedia has no answer)

Appearance: This, but R3-series instead of R4


Skills:
-Compatible with astromech sockets and interfaces
-Can display holovideos
-etc. basic astromech things
-Competent hacker

Weapons:
R3-C7 has a small blaster pistol concealed in a compartment on his dome. Packs a punch at close range, though not reliable in actual combat.
He also has an electroshock prod hidden in the middle of his main body.

Equipment:
R3-C7 carries standard R3 equipment, including:
-360 degree vision
-Can see in infrared
-a holoprojector
-an arc welder
-a circular saw
-an electroshock prod
-a fire extinguisher
-an internal comlink
-rocket boosters

Force sensitive?: No

Personality: R3-C7 is generally a happy droid, if flustered easily, and he seems generally happy to assist however he can. Sometimes, though, he takes things into his own hands, which may lead to...err....unintended consequences. He is a bit overeager to take action, which often lands him in heated engagements.

Bio: R3-C7 was manufactured on Nubia as part of a slightly faulty batch of droids, though that wasn't exactly uncommon for Industrial Automaton. This lead to him being a bit more brash than usual. Because of his quirks, he was generally kept somewhere in the back of storage for just over a year, and was eventually shipped off to....less official sellers. He eventually was purchased at a low price by a group of mercenaries, but he doesn't exactly have a real owner. He's more independent than most droids.
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Okay I think I fixed Sora
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I'm gonna make a bounty hunter character.
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Name: Tex

Gender: female

Age: 20

Weight: 111

Height: 6'5

Race: human

Appearance:

Appearance in equipment:

Personality: strong, cold to most, usually inconsiderate, independent.

Skills: hand to hand combat, guns and aim, gun repair and cleaning, flexibility, dexterity, athleticism

Weapons: her special modified DT-57 heavy blaster pistols, wrist flame thrower, And more along the way.

Equipment: her armor, 4 to 5 impact grenades, and gear attachments like thermal vision or tracker vision or radar and such.

Force sensitive?: no

Bio: grew up and raised in a hostile environment with other mercenaries. She's grown cold and inconsiderate over the years but has a soft side that she doesn't show anyone. And through the jobs she's become a prime killer.

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Yay female bobafet! Sorta
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That is a cool cosplay
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-.-, So many female characthers... *Ahem* Anyway about balance issues, i made some changes to my characther:

Change 1: Ive heard that Shien and Djem So tough they are both form 5, they have diffrent objectives: Shien Focuses mostly on blaster deflection and Djem So focuses on turning enemies attack in defendse into offense. So i will add Djem So with Shien, but ill lower Ataru to Basic, since Shien and Djem So are still Form 5 and are still focused on counter-attack AKA Deflect and redirect blaster fire and turning strong defendse into crushing offense.

Change 2: Remove force stealth [Its enough? i can also lower skill with Force Augmentation]

Change 3: Improving/Editing Bio and Personality

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