[OOC] Starwars rp

[RumikoOhara]

It's your choice

[pkken]

Mercenary

Name: Lance Ordo "Knives"
Gender: Male
Age: 24
Race: Mandalorian "Ordo Clan"
Height: 6'1"
Weight: 165 lbs
Appearance:

Lance

Armor

Skills: Close Combat Expert, Equipment Repair and Modifications, Agile warrior
Weapons: Heavy Blaster Pistol , Dual VibroKnives
Equipment: EMP grenades, Thermal Detonators, Smoke grenades, Wrist Mounted Flame Thrower, and his Armor
Force sensitive?: No

Bio: Lance spent half of his life on the planet Ordo, home to the Ordo Mandalorian Clan. Since young age Lance has shown talent, most notably in close combat wield VibroKnives as his primary weapon of choice, also earning him the nickname "Knives" because of his deadliness at close combat with the VibroKnife. He lived most of his life on the planet Ordo, when he began training he was the age of 8 and the time he took on his first job was the age of 16. After being in the business for 8 years Lance has made a small name for himself being competent in taking care of what his employers ask.

[CommisarJhon]

Am i approved to post my character to Characters?

[DiZL ReloadeD]

WIP
Name: Shana Octhar
Gender: Female
Age: 28
Race: Corellian

Appearance

Skills: Flying ace, Mechanic and great with blast pistols
Weapons: A blast pistol (shown in appearance)
Equipment

Spaceship: YT-2400 light freighter

Click to enlarge!

Force sensitive?: No
Bio: Shana has jobbed quite a while as a smuggler now and knows the underworld better than her homeworld Corellia. While she isn't on a job she maintains her ship and tries to improve it.

[manapool1]

@RumikoOhara
You're approved, can't wait to see in game

[manapool1]

Name: Tex

Gender: female

Age: 20

Weight: 111

Height: 6'5

Race: human

Appearance:

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Appearance in equipment:

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Personality: strong, cold to most, usually inconsiderate, independent.

Skills: hand to hand combat, guns and aim, gun repair and cleaning, speed, flexibility, dexterity, athleticism

Weapons: her special modified lazier pistols, wrist fla,e thrower, And more along the way.
Equipment: her armor, impact grenades, and gear attachments.

Force sensitive?: no

Bio: grew up and raised in a hostile environment with other mercenaries. She's grown cold and inconsiderate over the years but has a soft side that she doesn't show anyone. And through the jobs she's become a prime killer.

@manapool1

@Lunar

what kind of laser pistols? Also, get rid of the speed thing. Your character is in mandalorian armor by the looks of it, which is extremely heavy.

[manapool1]

@HaltingBlooper
Approved

[manapool1]

-.-, So many female characthers... *Ahem* Anyway about balance issues, i made some changes to my characther:

Change 1: Ive heard that Shien and Djem So tough they are both form 5, they have diffrent objectives: Shien Focuses mostly on blaster deflection and Djem So focuses on turning enemies attack in defendse into offense. So i will add Djem So with Shien, but ill lower Ataru to Basic, since Shien and Djem So are still Form 5 and are still focused on counter-attack AKA Deflect and redirect blaster fire and turning strong defendse into crushing offense.

Change 2: Remove force stealth [Its enough? i can also lower skill with Force Augmentation]

Change 3: Improving/Editing Bio and Personality

[Edited my reply rather than making new reply]

@CommisarJhon

It will work man, though I may be slightly harsher on you at times, sorry.

[manapool1]

Mercenary

Name: Lance Ordo "Knives"
Gender: Male
Age: 24
Race: Mandalorian "Ordo Clan"
Height: 6'1"
Weight: 165 lbs
Appearance:

Lance

Armor

Skills: Close Combat Expert, Equipment Repair and Modifications, Agile warrior
Weapons: Heavy Blaster Pistol , Dual VibroKnives
Equipment: EMP grenades, Thermal Detonators, Smoke grenades, Wrist Mounted Flame Thrower, and his Armor
Force sensitive?: No

Bio: Lance spent half of his life on the planet Ordo, home to the Ordo Mandalorian Clan. Since young age Lance has shown talent, most notably in close combat wield VibroKnives as his primary weapon of choice, also earning him the nickname "Knives" because of his deadliness at close combat with the VibroKnife. He lived most of his life on the planet Ordo, when he began training he was the age of 8 and the time he took on his first job was the age of 16. After being in the business for 8 years Lance has made a small name for himself being competent in taking care of what his employers ask.

@pkken

first off. you're not going to be an agile warrior in mandolorian armor, let me tell you that now.
Second off, how what kind of heavy blaster pistol?
Too many grenades, and tell me how many you carry of each. Be reasonable.

[manapool1]

WIP
Name: Shana Octhar
Gender: Female
Age: 28
Race: Corellian

Appearance

Skills: Flying ace, Mechanic and great with blast pistols
Weapons: A blast pistol (shown in appearance)
Equipment

Spaceship: YT-2400 light freighter

Click to enlarge!

Force sensitive?: No
Bio: Shana has jobbed quite a while as a smuggler now and knows the underworld better than her homeworld Corellia. While she isn't on a job she maintains her ship and tries to improve it.

@DiZL ReloadeD

APPROVED
I always love pilots!

[pkken]

<Snipped quote by pkken>

first off. you're not going to be an agile warrior in mandolorian armor, let me tell you that now.
Second off, how what kind of heavy blaster pistol?
Too many grenades, and tell me how many you carry of each. Be reasonable.

@manapool1

Mercenary

Name: Lance Ordo
Gender: Male
Age: 24
Race: Mandalorian "Ordo Clan"
Height: 6'1"
Weight: 165 lbs
Appearance:

Lance

Armor

Skills: Close Combat Expert, Equipment Repair and Modifications,
Weapons: DL-44 Blaster Pistol, VibroKnives
Equipment: Thermal Detonator, Wrist Mounted Flame Thrower, and his Armor
Force sensitive?: No

Bio: Lance is a member of the Mandalorian Ordo clan, during his late teens he began training to become a mercenary. After some years he gained some experience as well as becoming a competent mercenary.

This better?

[manapool1]

<Snipped quote by manapool1>

Mercenary

Name: Lance Ordo
Gender: Male
Age: 24
Race: Mandalorian "Ordo Clan"
Height: 6'1"
Weight: 165 lbs
Appearance:

Lance

Armor

Skills: Close Combat Expert, Equipment Repair and Modifications,
Weapons: DL-44 Blaster Pistol, VibroKnives
Equipment: Thermal Detonator, Wrist Mounted Flame Thrower, and his Armor
Force sensitive?: No

Bio: Lance is a member of the Mandalorian Ordo clan, during his late teens he began training to become a mercenary. After some years he gained some experience as well as becoming a competent mercenary.

This better?

@pkken

yeah, that's good

[Lunar]

Fixed @manapool1

[manapool1]

Name: Tex

Gender: female

Age: 20

Weight: 111

Height: 6'5

Race: human

Appearance:

****

Appearance in equipment:

****

Personality: strong, cold to most, usually inconsiderate, independent.

Skills: hand to hand combat, guns and aim, gun repair and cleaning, flexibility, dexterity, athleticism

Weapons: her special modified DT-57 heavy blaster pistols, wrist flame thrower, And more along the way.
Equipment: her armor, impact grenades, and gear attachments.

Force sensitive?: no

Bio: grew up and raised in a hostile environment with other mercenaries. She's grown cold and inconsiderate over the years but has a soft side that she doesn't show anyone. And through the jobs she's become a prime killer.

@manapool1

@Lunar

Tell me how many grenades she carries with her and what kind of gear attachments

[Lunar]

Ok fixed once again @manapool1

[manapool1]

Ok fixed once again @manapool1

@Lunar

approved!
Sorry to hassle you so much!

[pkken]

Is my cs approved?

[Lunar]

It's cool

[manapool1]

Is my cs approved?

@pkken

fix what I told you to and then yes

[CommisarJhon]

Update: nvm i realized that im approved.