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Yeshua's CS currently being written! :D

I realise there was an RP before this, I think, and because of this my character might seem a little out of place. We can iron out the wrinkles together.
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Character applications will be posted in the OOC, Accepted applications will be posted in the Characters tab.


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@boomlover Hey you're not supposed to put it in the chartab without actually applying for it in here y'know. You can read, right?

Also, that character pic. IS THAT ALI AL SAACHEZ FROM GUNDAM 00?!

WEEABOO. TRESH.

In any case yeah that's a real fuckup mate, you should've put it in here first instead.
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@LHG100.... shit i fucked up my bad
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It does make a worrying precedent, but as I am also “weeaboo trash” I have no issues with anime faceclaims, obviously. I’ll review it on the exception that it was posted in the CHA tab as a honest mistake, but um… yeah.
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@Gowi emm yeah guys. i usualyy never fuck up that bad. I already deleated it anyway.soo yeahh how about i just post it here before i fuck up even more.


" Power is money and money is power!"
Name: Bjorn Ironsights
Appearance
Slimy build and with green eyes that seem to be Hidding some secret intend Bjorn stands 2 meters tall and has natural red hair which he tries new hair styles every now and then. When he is not in combat he usually wears a surprisingly nice looking suit with black sunglasses. It also not very surprising to see him smoking a cigarette when out of combat. He also sleeps in his undies.

Age 34

Role1 close quaters / assasin (aka someone who is fast and does fast strikes.)

Personality Bjorn is a man with only three goals in his life. Revenge, power, And to kill all that stand in his way to achieve the former. However you will never see his true colors as he hides them perfectly with a perfect mask of lies and deceit. However when he is in the middle of combat his mask breaks and you can sometimes see the true man behind the mask. A man who has no problem with killing his enemies. But in fact relishes in it. However he only does that when he is fighting his enemies. And would never show it to his comrades. Not that he cares for them but simply because he doesn't want to loose meat shields. When he has his mask on he acts like freedom fighter with a hate against the corporations. He even made a sad background about how his parents died.
Bjorn truly has no respect for anyone. Well beside those that bested him in combat. Bjorn also tries to keep himself away from falling love. Knowing that he is human and that even he might fall for physical attraction.
Though besides all those things there is still a good thing about him. He always buys the bar a round.

Backstory
Born as a bastard to one of the major shareholders in Fairbanks LTD. Bjorn's exsistance was kept a secret from everyone. The only reason he wasnt killed was because his father actually loved him and his mother but was married with someone with political influence. Because of this he send him and his mother away. Gave them a house to live in and made sure they lived in luxury. Bjorn had a good childhood. Just playing like a normal boy would making friends and having small romances. However beside all this Bjorn wanted power. He idolized his father and wanted to become just him. His father also wanted this and decided to divorce his wife. But then something horrible happened. It was Bjorn's 15th birthday. And he was watching a movie with his friends until at one point the door bell rang. Bjorn opened and saw a someone giving him a present. He looked at it and saw a note saying that his father had send him a gift. Surprised he walked to the kitchen to open it. as he tore the paper lose he screamed in horror as he saw the contents. It was his fathers severed head. There was a litte note saying. "With kisses Margret". The second he finished reading it an explosion rocked the house sending it crashing down atop his friends and mother killing them and knocking him unconscious. When he woke up the next day he was in a hospital bed. Looking straight at a beautiful women. She looked at him with a mix of hate and disgust. Then she spoke finally spoke telling her that she was His father actual wife. She told him that the only he spared him was because she wanted him to suffer knowing that all he loved was death. He was then knocked out again and woke up in some kind of dungeon. The next five years would consist out of torture. Endless amounts of torture. until a miracle happend, He was saved by someone loyal to his father. And was spirited away to some research facility. There he was healed and when he recovered he trained and trained in becoming a mech pilot. His fathers friend build a mech of his own the only one in its design. With that settled he thanked him and told him he wanted to fight on his own and to have revenge against that bitch. And so he left doing mercenary work. Now with some years of experience under his belt he now travels toward new Anchorage for his new job.

Tactical Preference & Skills
He uses his mech ridiculous amounts speed to strike quick and run fast. Only using a blade as his weapon. He usually chargers in at great speed does damage flies off. And does it again and again and again. Till his target is destroyed.

Notes He can get drunk really easy

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Yeah, that weaboo trash! Posting pics from an anime! Who the hell would do that, am I right? Imagine if it was their profile picture and everything. What a weeb.
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@Cassowarysaur Anime ruined everything. Now my all my waifus look like TRESH and I have to use freaking otaku terms like "kawaii desu ne" and shit.

Emperor bless me with an exterminatus jesus christ

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wait how does that pic make me a weaboo ? I bareley watch anime dammit XD
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It's called a joke, silly.
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Bjorn Ironsights


Without a Mech CS alongside it I cannot give much of a proper review, but I can tell you that a lot of what I see here is a unfortunate mess. Alongside the grammar errors and fluidity of the descriptions there is also a backstory that is pretty “out there” even for the anime sheen I’ve given NC Quest as the new (forum version) GM. Whilst I would have no issues with the ruthlessness shown by Margaret, there is the whole “my house collapsed on me, I woke up in the hospital, she taunted me before kidnapping me, and THEN I was ALSO tortured before being saved by my father’s friend.” – Like, I’m not trying to rip your CS to shreds here. We have a lot of minimalist sheets in this game and some more detailed ones so this isn't a case of it not being detailed enough... but this doesn’t give me a lot of confidence going forward.

If you are serious about this character, I recommend reading it over with your own eyes and creatively figuring out a way to get the character you want without having to take a hatchet to the whole thing. If that’s something you want to do and are not disheartened by my reply, then I’ll look it over again.

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@LHG100... sigh why am i screwing up so badly right now XD
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@Gowi eh ill look over it. It was kinda rushed to begin with honestly. ill probably just make something entirely different. Anyway thanks for the feedback :)
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*sips tea*

Make a female character next time. Can't have a harem without lots of females.
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Yeah, gotta have all the ladies fam. Every good mecha anime has a harem of girls who pilot walking WMD's.
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Cassowarysaur better be as dynamic as you say, LHG. I've got expectations now.
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Ah fuck I'm sorry Cass ;-;

To be honest it did take a while to go all 'oh wow that's great m8' lmao.
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@Gowi also how many people will this rp have total?
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If you and Cass make CS's I like? 12 including myself.
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@Gowi kk also i'm staying with this guy because i like playing evil for once. Also ill reread everything and try to fix everything. But there is one thing that's gonna be a problem. I suck at grammar not because i'm lazy but because i seriously do not know when i'm screwing up badly grammar wise.
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