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@Stein For sure, I can include that. But not the length? No? *legasp* All you people and your conciseness. *shuns*
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Thank you very much for the critiques. It's a bit late where I am right now, so I can't at the moment, but as soon as I am able, I'll spruce up my sheet. If you wouldn't mind elaborating on the technical details that I'm missing, that would be quite nice, but if you'd rather not, that's fine too.
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@FantasyChic, I made Ellara's roommate a waitress at the Silver Knot. Got to love all that seven degrees of separation fun stuff.
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So, just as a whole, making sure I know where we're at thing, what stuff is still out for the count from the CME?

Everything that's battery or electricity operated? Barring things on the power grid since it seems like that's been fixed?

So, like, cars and cellphones and.... a whole bunch of stuff that I can't list because my brain is dead and I gotta run....
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So, just as a whole, making sure I know where we're at thing, what stuff is still out for the count from the CME?

Everything that's battery or electricity operated? Barring things on the power grid since it seems like that's been fixed?

So, like, cars and cellphones and.... a whole bunch of stuff that I can't list because my brain is dead and I gotta run....


The downtown core currently has power, so that's City Dionysia, Rosseau Square, Overtown and Olympus. These areas are pretty much running as normal aside from the fact emergency services are drawn else where leaving them vulnerable. The areas most affected by the CME would be Lower East Side, The Wharf, The Sound and Little Santiago. These four areas would be ones where cars and the like probably aren't working properly. The rest of the city would likely have battery operated devices and what not up and running again but are still without general power.
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Also I should note, any one who's accepted can go ahead and post if they wish. The IC is up and open.
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Ok I re-did her bio to give her a bit more color to her past and why she is more about the day-to-day. I wanted to leave it a bit open-ended because I think she will grow more as a person as we go on. If there is anything else I need, like if you want me to highlight what makes her tick so she isn't a Mary Sue, let me know.
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Hey could I get a little clarification on what the cs needs boosted? I'm gonna put what I have for now in the cs thread and I'll edit whenever I get any feedback.
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Ok I re-did her bio to give her a bit more color to her past and why she is more about the day-to-day. I wanted to leave it a bit open-ended because I think she will grow more as a person as we go on. If there is anything else I need, like if you want me to highlight what makes her tick so she isn't a Mary Sue, let me know.


Did you post the sheet twice? The one I've linked on the OP hasn't been edited since 12 days ago.

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Hey could I get a little clarification on what the cs needs boosted? I'm gonna put what I have for now in the cs thread and I'll edit whenever I get any feedback.


Just trust me that if you read through the character creation rules it'll become crystal clear.
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@Lord Wraith Duuuuuuuh. Gawd Wraith, get it together.
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@Lord Wraith Duuuuuuuh. Gawd Wraith, get it together.


I really like the new additions to the CS. Once I go over it with Stein, one of us will get back to you with an official verdict.
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Just trust me that if you read through the character creation rules it'll become crystal clear.


Got it. Seems like I just was in a rush to get to the backstory with ideas piling up that I completely overlooked chunks of cs at a time. I'll update in a little bit after eating something. Thanks
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@Lord Wraith I hope that works. I can always re-do another section, but it seemed to me her bio didn't fit with how I was portraying her. So I hope that clears that up. She has a lot going on that I didn't put to words, which was my own fault.
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Got it. Seems like I just was in a rush to get to the backstory with ideas piling up that I completely overlooked chunks of cs at a time. I'll update in a little bit after eating something. Thanks


Sounds good.

@Lord Wraith I hope that works. I can always re-do another section, but it seemed to me her bio didn't fit with how I was portraying her. So I hope that clears that up. She has a lot going on that I didn't put to words, which was my own fault.


I definitely think it goes a long in helping shape Anastasia.
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@Lord Wraith Here you go bud.
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The roster is currently updated with all characters in the character tab and Miles who isn't.
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@Lord Wraith Hopefully I'll be over there soon
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@Lord Wraith Hopefully I'll be over there soon


Yes definitely looking forward to getting things on the move!
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